1、Section Writing今昔对比类电子邮件 文体感知描写今昔对比时要根据过去的情况和现在的事实组织材料。这类书面表达的一般写作格式为： 1开头提出主题句(提出什么事情发生了变化)2对过去情况的描述(用过去时态， 主要是一般过去时)3对现在情况的描述(用现在时态， 主要是一般现在时)4总结句 增分佳句1Our school/hometown, as all may know, is not what it used to be.2Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.3Two new bui
2、ldings have been built and are in use.4Now, a large number of trees have been planted, which hold the soil and water.5I believe that the life of the peasants will get better and better. 写作模板Dear Lucy，How is everything going? Im writing to tell you something about the changes in _(地点)As is known to a
3、ll, great changes have taken place in _(地点)It is no longer what it used to be _(时间) years ago, when there was _(描写过去的情况)Now it has changed a lot._(描写现在的情况)Whats more/Besides，_(描写现在的情况)I believe _will become better and better. I hope you can visit. 写作要求假如你是李华， 2019年春节回家过年的时候发现离开了五年的家乡变化很大。请你给朋友Linda写
4、一封电子邮件， 告诉她这里的变化。要点：1.建起许多高楼， 城市更加漂亮了；2私家车拥有量增加， 人们生活水平提高了；3可以品尝世界各地的美食， 如美国、 意大利、 韩国等地的美食；4与人联系更加方便， 如发电子邮件。词数： 100左右。参考词汇： 立交桥 overpass; 私家车 private car 审题谋篇体裁应用文时态一般现在时，一般过去时主题今昔对比人称第一人称为主，第三人称为辅b结构第一部分：我的家乡发生了变化；第二部分：介绍家乡发生了哪些变化；第三部分：表达期望 词汇推敲1建起set up2变化很大change a lot3对某人来说做某事很方便it is convenien
5、t for sb.to do sth.4玩得开心enjoy oneself5令我高兴的是to my delight/enjoyment6与某人联系keep/get in touch with sb.7在我有空的时候in my spare time8带领某人参观某处show sb.around some place 遣词造句1完成句子建起许多高楼，这些大楼都很具有现代气息也很漂亮。More high buildings have appearedThey are modern and beautiful.许多立交桥建立起来，非常方便人们出行。Many overpasses have been s
6、et up.It is very convenient for people to travel.相比以前来说，我可以更加容易地联系到你。I can keep in touch with you much easier than before.2句式升级用定语从句升级句More high buildings have appeared，which are modern and beautiful.用so引导结果状语从句升级句Many overpasses have been set up, so it is very convenient for people to travel.用形式主语i
7、t升级句It is much easier for me to keep in touch with you than before. 妙笔成篇_One possible version：Dear Linda, I really think that my hometown has changed a lot in the past five years.First, more high buildings have appeared, which are modern and beautiful.Second, many overpasses have been set up, so it
8、is very convenient for people to travel.Third, many families have had private cars.The peoples life here has become rich and colorful.People can enjoy themselves travelling on holidays.To my delight, I can taste delicious food of different countries such as the food of America, Italy and Korea here.
9、And now it is much easier for me to keep in touch with you than before, because I can email you in my spare time.I hope you can come and Ill show you around.假设你是某中学的学生李华，最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你校，听说你校现在变化很大，希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。三年前一座教学楼；一个操场；学生1 000多人现在1.校园扩建；新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，教学楼内有音乐室、美
10、术室和微机房等；2.学生人数增加到了2 000多人；3.体育设施与音乐器材配备齐全；4.绿化了校园注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：体育设施 sports facilities；装备 equipDear Joy，I was pleased to hear from you and Im writing to tell you something about the changes in my school._Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Joy，I was pleased to
11、hear from you and Im writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.As is known, great changes have taken place in my school. It is no longer what it used to be three years ago, when there was only one teaching building and a playground.Now two new buildings have been built and are in
12、use. One of them is a new classroom building, in which there are rooms for music, art and computer teaching. The other is the library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of stude
13、nts has also grown from 1，000 to 2，000. Whats more, we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.I believe my school will become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.Yours，Li Hua 单句语法填空1There are plenty of good pubs and clubs in this area，most of which
14、are friendly and safe.2Alice received an invitation from her boss, which came as a surprise.3I am most grateful to my parents，who are always there to encourage me and care for me.4Much of his youth was spent in Beijing，where he developed an interest in Beijing Opera.5Lily took a few friends to my bi
15、rthday party, none of whom I was familiar with.6A few days after the interview, I received a letter offering (offer) me admission to the university.7She and her husband are now at work on a new novel to_be_published(publish) next year.8I have listened to the lecture given(give) by that famous profes
16、sor.9My uncle gave me a book，whose cover is very beautiful.10As is known to the United States, Mark Twain is a great writer. 阅读理解No one can believe that the over 6，300kilometre Great Wall might disappear some day.Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people.Less than 20 percent of
17、the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty, is still perfect, but about 80 percent is in danger.The Great Wall can be called“great”mostly because of its amazing length.But we should realize that the length was made up of one brick at a time.If we do nothing to save the Great Wall, it will become a ser
18、ies of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2，000 years.It began in the rule of Chinas first emperor, Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dynasty (221BC206BC), and lasted into the Ming Dynasty.The parts
19、 built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared.People are familiar with sections such as Badaling in Beijing and Jiayuguan Pass in Gansu, because they have been open to tourists for many years.But those sections far away from the public eyes have been almost forgotten.Few local people knew t
20、he 3metrehigh walls made of earth and stones beside them are parts of the Great Wall.The lack of knowledge is considered as one of the main reasons behind human.The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties.Some were taken away t
21、o build roads.Bricks carved with peoples names are put away as remembrances.The rubbish is spread over the battlements.The brick can be sold 15 yuan per tractor load.Those who destroyed and are destroying the Great Wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning.It will take a long
22、time to let them know this.The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Great Wall but also dug out the entire base.It is necessary to protect the Great Wall.First of all, the officials should be aware of the importance of the Great Wall.Young Chinese should know more about the nations gre
23、at civilization and learn to love it.【解题导语】本文叙述了历史文化古迹长城正在遭到破坏，由于人们对于古迹缺乏认识，做了许多破坏性的事情，文章呼吁人们要保护好长城。1Why does the writer say the Great Wall might disappear?AIt is useless from now on.BIt is too old to be used again.CIt will be replaced by a new one.DSome parts of it are being destroyed.D解析：细节理解题。根据第
24、一段“Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people.”故选D。2The underlined part“those sections far away from the public eyes”(in Para.2)refers to the parts of the Great Wall _Anobody can watchBthat are too far to be seenCthat are too difficult to findDthat are not wellknown to the public
25、D解析：细节理解题。根据画线部分前的“People are familiar with.open to tourists for many years.”可以推出这部分长城没有向游人开放，故选D。3Whats the main reason of the Great Wall being destroyed?AThe local people sell the bricks for a living.BThe local people are short of culture knowledge.CThe local people think that the Great Wall is no
26、t important.DThe local people need bricks and stones to build houses.B解析：细节理解题。根据第三段的“The lack of knowledge is.reasons behind human.”故选B。4Which of the following may be the best title for this passage?AHow to Protect the Great WallBHow the Great Wall Came into BeingCThe Great Wall Being RebuiltDThe G
27、reat Wall Being in DangerD解析：标题归纳题。根据通篇文章和文章的开头可以看出应选D。 语法填空Mr Brown liked taking photos. He dreamed of becoming a 1._ (photograph) one day. But he had no time for his dream 2._ his work kept him too busy.One day, he made a big mistake at work. His boss was so angry that he fired 3._(he). Mr Brown c
28、ame back home with a broken heart. When his wife noticed he was upset, she asked him the reason. Mr Brown told her that he 4._(lose) his job.He thought his wife would be sad to hear that. But she didnt look sad at all.5._， she smiled and said, “You are lucky, my dear. Now you finally have time for y
29、our dream.” But Mr Brown wasnt happy. He asked, “What shall we live 6._ while Im taking photos around the city？”， 7._(surprising), his wife opened a drawer and pulled out a big sum of money. “How did you get that？” Mr Brown asked.“I have always known you are good at 8._(take) photos. I knew that som
30、eday youd succeed, so Ive been saving money all these years for you 9._(follow) your dream.”Hearing that, Mr Brown 10._(move) deeply. He felt lucky to have married a woman who supported his dream.【解题导语】Mr Brown失业了，他妻子不但不难过，反而鼓励他去追求他的梦想。1photographer解析：考查名词。photograph后面加er表示做摄影的人，此处表示摄影师。2. because解析
31、：考查连词。his work kept him too busy是在解释原因，故填because。3him解析：考查代词。him指代Mr Brown。4had lost解析：考查动词时态。lose的动作发生在told之前，故表示过去的过去，所以用过去完成时态。5Instead解析：考查副词。句意：他以为他的妻子会很伤心，可是她看起来一点都不难过，相反地，她还笑了。instead意为“相反地”。6on解析：考查介词。live on sth.意为“靠生活”。7Surprisingly解析：考查副词。此处表示“令人吃惊的是”，故用surprising的副词形式。8taking解析：考查非谓语动词。b
32、e good at doing sth.意为“擅长做”。9to follow解析：考查非谓语动词。此处用动词不定式表示“为了”。10was moved解析：考查动词语态。Mr Brown与move之间是被动的关系，故用被动语态。全文发生在过去，故用过去时态的被动语态。 短文改错During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there.The first time I went there, they were liv
33、ing in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals.Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond which they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their lif
34、e had improved.At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.答案：During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I a big change there.The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with
35、 dogs, ducks, and animals.Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of .They also had a small pond they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish.I felt that their life had improved.At the end of our trip, I told my father that I p
36、lanned to return every two years, he agreed. 书面表达加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出一则启事(notice)，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言和文化。假设你是重庆实验中学的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封100词左右的电子邮件。主要内容包括：1你是怎样得知他的愿望的；2你愿意成为他的朋友；3你打算如何帮助他；4你盼望他的回复。_One possible version：Dear David，I am Li Hua.I am glad to read your notice on the Internet and I k
37、now you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture.I want to be your friend.Now Id like to introduce myself to you.Born in Chongqing in 2000，I am now studying in the Experimental Middle School of Chongqing and I am good at English.I think I can help you to know about China by sending emails.Whats more，we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese or English and Ill tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods，etc.of the Chinese.I hope we can keep in touch with each other.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua
