1、十年（20102020）高考英语真题分项详解30应用文写作提纲类1.(2020年7月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter,I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?I hope my good news for you will sweep away th
2、e shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and com
3、plete recovery.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?） 2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us） 3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recove
4、ry）第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery第三步：连词成句1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience g
5、ave us warm applause.4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你
6、请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给
7、了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2.(2020年，天津卷，第二次高考）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、
8、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎 COVID-F9Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you._Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this
9、month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the
10、 responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes！Yours,Li Jin【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获
11、取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键
12、词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引
13、导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言
14、规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make u
15、s stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。3.(2020年，新高考全国I卷）假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:1. 参加人员:2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3. 活动反响。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Cross-Country Run
16、ning Race_【答案】A Cross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our sc
17、hool gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.The activity wa
18、s highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。【详解】体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:1. 参加人员2. 跑步路线3. 活动反响第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/ draw ones attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak
19、highly of/ provide sth. for sb.第三步:连词成句1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.3. The route measured five kilometers, from o
20、ur school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.6. The a
21、ctivity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用
22、了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使
23、用了部分倒装。4.(2020年，全国卷I）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。_【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My fathe
24、r is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage
25、 me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）A
26、s for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to
27、 overcome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his
28、 work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。5.(2020年，全国卷II）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受注
29、意:1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。题目:My Weekend_【答案】My WeekendOrganized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery.
30、 There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders,We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.I couldnt wait to take a bite, and the sweet ju
31、ice went down my throat.I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!【解析】【分析】【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick pe
32、aches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders,take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯
33、，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.运用了定语从句；Not only would I
34、be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not onlybut和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。6.(2020年，全国卷III）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Miss Eva
35、ns,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft
36、down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to
37、 this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【解
38、析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致
39、和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色
40、添彩。7.假定你是高一学生李华。请你给你的美国网友Tony写一封e-mail，把你的暑假安排告诉他，并询问他的暑假安排。内容包括：1. 完成作业，适量阅读；2. 走亲访友；3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。注意：1. 词数80左右；信的开头已经写好。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tony,How is everything with you recently?_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Tony,How are things with you lately? I am glad to tell you the plan for my summe
41、r holiday, which is approaching. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organize
42、d by the community. Please send me an e-mail, sharing your plan for the summer vacation. OK?Looking forward to it!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：分总 要求：1. 完成作业，适量阅读；2. 走亲访友；3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be glad to do sth./ tell sb. sth./ spend time in doing
43、 sth./ take part in/ intend to do sth./ send sth. to sb./ look forward to第三步：连词成句1. How is everything going recently? 2. I am glad to tell you the plan for the approaching summer holiday. 3. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well. 4. I will also spend s
44、ome time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far.5. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community. 6. What about your plan for the summer holiday?7. Looking forward to it!第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词
45、：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】高分句型1I have got to finish all the homework assigned by my teachers and do some reading as well.我必须完成老师布置的所有家庭作业，并且读一些书。句中使用了过去分词短语作后置定语。高分句型2Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities o
46、rganized by the community, which are of great benefit.句中which引导非线性定语从句，和be of + n. 表事物特征。8.(2020年1月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear George, Im writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for forei
47、gners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall. The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid tradition
48、al culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China. Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. C. Id appreciate it if you could accept our invitation
49、. Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题
50、。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese spl
51、endid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句；Id appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。9.(2018年3月，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：（1
52、）鼓励他来中国留学；（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。 注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】Hi Chris，I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education. I encourage you to come to China for further education for the following reasons. First，
53、not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. In addition to this, you can appreciate the fascinating scenery of China in your holidays, which will leave an unforgettable impression on you. Should you nee
54、d any more help, please dont hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible. YoursWangJin【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写给 Chris 留言。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：（1）鼓励他来中国留学；（2）说
55、明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，鼓励他来中国留学。第二段，说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: benefit, unforgettable impression, encourage sb to do sth, appreciate the fascinating scenery of
56、China, hesitate to do sth .第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.第
57、五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First, In addition to, Finally.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I
58、 am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。10.假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少
59、于100：（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School._Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. D
60、uring the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note,music is my priority.I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous
61、 jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.Thank you for your time.Yours，Li Jin【解析】【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李津的名义用英语给英方教师Chris写一封电子邮件。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作提要为假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给
62、Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言
63、精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz，and some famous jazz singers. 名词性从句的使用：I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.11.(2019年，北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询
64、问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 交通出行；2. 必备衣物。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can sta
65、y for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时
66、态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that youre coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。12.(2019年，全国卷I）假
67、定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I
68、 have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.I would b
69、e very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。【详解】1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chine
70、se Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at，I can help with./Ill devote myself to。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be
71、 qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more
72、about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。13.(2019年6月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Alex,Learning that youre leaving for the United States soon, Im eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your he
73、lp.Honestly speaking, its so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. Its indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulti
74、es, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。【详解】1. 审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要
75、求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了
76、Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的
77、档次14.(2019年，全国卷III）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎他表演节目。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony w
78、ill start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】【分析】
79、今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and
80、fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。15.(2019年，全国卷II）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1. 比赛信息；2. 赛前准备；3. 表达期待。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afterno
81、on of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excelle
82、nt player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua【解析】【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。【详解】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。Im writ
83、ing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。16.(2019年3月，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。 参考词汇：科幻小说 science fictio
84、n 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；（3）内容充实、行文连贯；（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。March 22, 2019_By Li Jin【答案】March 22, 2019Today Id like to introduce a book to you which I like muchThe Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books
85、. The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country.
86、 I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant. I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope youll like it !Enjoy reading !By Li Jin【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英
87、语征文；假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introduce a book to you（给你推荐一本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之
88、间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句Today Id like to introduce a book to you which I like muchThe Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history booksin the history of China, which he organizes
89、and cuts them according to historical materials；不定式I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.；宾语从句I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.；强调句I do hope youll like it!全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章
90、增色添彩。17.(2018年11月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1. 行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.I clearly remembe
91、r it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned
92、above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxxThank you for your time and support.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮
93、件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival, I found it gone. it must haveHas anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and support.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。第四步：连句成文，注意使
94、用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】【高分句型1】Whats worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。Whats worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。【高分句型2】Id appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。Id appreciate it if如果我会很感激的。18.(2016年，
95、全国卷III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change wi
96、ll not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after scho
97、ol next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that well have more time to re
98、ad and select books；条件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。19.(2018年6月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：（1） 口语能力：（2） 相关经验；（3） 应聘目的。注意：（1） 词数80左右；（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school Engl
99、ish association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.Im particularly interested in this job because I want to fur
100、ther improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：Im writing to apply for，a good command
101、 of English，communicate with，get along with等。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。20.(2018年，北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出
102、，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.Learning your keen interest in
103、 Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of
104、 the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me kno
105、w.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。使用定语从句Its Chinese Liter
106、ature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。21.(2018年，全国卷III）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运动项目；3. 你喜欢的项目。注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter, I am e
107、xceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the sta
108、dium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you
109、 to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours, Li Hua【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。22.(2018年
110、，全国卷II）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Boys and girls,I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows
111、 us the whole history of schools development, which is I think the attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustnt miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.It will be dis
112、played in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.Thats all. Thank you.The Students UnionJune 8, 2018【解析】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。23.(2018年，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。
113、你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. _Im looking forward to your reply.Your
114、s,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. There will be a month before the end of July, when the World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held in my city, Taiyuan.With my great enthusiasm about robotics and my progress, Im made head of a team devoted to the competition.Whe
115、n we re making preparations for the event, it occurred to me that you once took a prize in a similar competition. Therefore, it cant be better if you can join my team and show your talent. Meanwhile, attached to this email is a training plan I have worked out for my team, which I hope youll read and
116、 make some suggestions. After all, you have lots of practical tricks which will be of great use to us.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计
117、划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。24.(2018年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件
118、向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：（1）到达时间；（2）合适的礼物；（3）餐桌礼仪。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Terry,How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.Firstly, I would like to suggest
119、 that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick you
120、r chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连
121、接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100单词左右，写出到达时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。25.(
122、2017年，全国卷II）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Henry，Im very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a
123、week.As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and Im sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China.During the activity，I will show you a
124、round our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture.Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？Id appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.Im looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.Yours，Li Hua【
125、解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己
126、熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Im very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week.和宾语从句As is well-known to us all，Chinese
127、paper-cutting is famous all over the world and Im sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.26.假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1、该人物是谁；2、该人物的主要贡献；3、该人物对你的影响。注意： 1. 词数不少于100；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_YoursLihua【答案】Dear Jim,It
128、s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to Chin
129、a, which opened our eyes to the world. So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：题材
130、新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 考点：应用文写作【名师点睛】本题偏向于信息介绍类的
131、开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。27.(2017年11月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：1.时间2.一同过节的家人3.活动注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Mr. Hall, Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate
132、 the Spring Festival on January 19. Its traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. Well make dumplings together and have a big dinner. Well also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If youre a
133、ble to come, Ill go and pick you up at your place.Best wishesLi Hua【解析】本文是一篇书信类作文。围绕写信人找收信人有什么事或要求、传达什么讯息等内容展开的，所以在书信的开头考生要说清楚写信目的Im writing to invite you to come ；其次考生要根据题目给出的内容提示扩充题干或提纲，本文想邀请外教Mr. Hall到你家过春节celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19 需要扩展过春节可以做的事情；最后要表明自己期待对方同意等If youre able to co
134、me, Ill go and pick you up at your place.。这样一篇结构完整的书信作文就轻松完成了。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。范文中使用了大量高中生熟悉的词汇traditionally， family reunion，have a big dinner，are able to， pick you up和句型，以提高文章的准确描述；恰当使用一些连词、插入语so 、also 、may even，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：90110之间。【范文亮点】Its traditionally a
135、 time for family reunion.If youre able to come, Ill go and pick you up at your place.运用了主将从现的句型。28.(2017年，全国卷III） 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：球队活动；报名方式及截止日期。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Eric，I was informed that our school Pingpong Team is looking for new members among
136、us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong. As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.Would you like to join? If so, please go t
137、o sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参
138、加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句使用了一些固定词组，如show great fancy in; sig
139、n up; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。29.(2017年，天津卷）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届
140、全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im glad to hear from you. _Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Mrs Green,_Im so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. Im very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my lif
141、e, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some pr
142、eparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. Yours Li Jin【解析】【分析】本文为提纲类作文。【详解】这是李津给Mrs. Green的一封电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称，基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。首先，内
143、容要点要全，三个要点都要包含: (1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句；非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。第三,要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。最后，要注意一下卷面整洁， 书写工整。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑, 本文要点齐全，适当增加了细节，选择使用了高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量短语,为文章增色不少,如: make great progress取得很大的进步，build
144、up增强。还使用了定语从句，如As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.，又如I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.和宾语从句、条件状语从句，如I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have
145、 a chance.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。30.(2017年6月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Chris,How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at
146、the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will hav
147、e a great time. However, if you dont have spare time for this trip, it is fine. Its just up to you.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。【详解】本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求，本文要涵盖以下三点内容，1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要
148、求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。【点睛】【高分句型1】Im very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。Im very honored to.非常荣幸做某事【高分句型2】I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句，
149、takeinto consideration顾及；考虑到31.(2017年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Leslie,I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tel
150、l you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books relat
151、ed to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Le
152、slie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in
153、 Chinese culture.定语从句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall.非谓语动词Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，
154、上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。32.(2010年，福建卷）假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE“的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。注意：根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；文中不能出现考生的具体信息；词数：120左右参考词汇：短缺 shortage ; 资源 reaourceLadies and gentlemen, Good morning, Im Li Hua from Fujian,China,Its my great honor to be here t
155、o say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it._ Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Good morning. Im Li Hua from Fujian, China. Its my great honor to be here to say somethingabout the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.As we know, the global wat
156、er shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, its high time we did something about it.Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods n
157、eed to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water opllution by law. Last but not least, its everyones responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.In conclusion, peop
158、le around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.Thats all. Thank you.33.(2016年10月，浙江卷）假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生（exchange student）去加拿大一所高中学习，住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：1.介绍自己；2.告知到达时间；3.询问应做何准备。注意:1.词数80
159、左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Lynn,Im Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Im happy to know that Ill be staying with your family in the next few months while Im studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that aftern
160、oon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.Looking forward to seeing you!Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；注意不要遗漏要点。同时要使用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，语言简练，内容齐全，篇幅虽短但运用高级句子。Im Li Hua, an exchange student f
161、rom China.在句中an exchange student是同位语；Im happy to know that Ill be staying with your family in the next few months while Im studying at the local high school.宾语从句和时间状语从句完美结合，同时句中使用了将来进行时态，恰到好处；I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.宾语从
162、句和目的状语从句运用巧妙至极。34.(2016年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In
163、order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont even know if there are somethin
164、g to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】【详解】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意
165、先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to
166、等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。35.(2016年6月，浙江卷）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100120词的短文。要求如下：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is G
167、ood,But Doing Is Better_【答案】Planning Is Good,But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the eve
168、nt,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I
169、know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【解析】试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分
170、明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。考点：考查开放式作文【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简洁，时态、人称准确，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头，作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短语in detail, bear no fruit,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章表达的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do和how I achieved my success,
171、以及句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等，这些都给文章增加了亮点。36.(2016年，天津卷）假设你是某高中的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿: 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； 谈谈收获或感想； 表达祝愿与期望。注意： 词数不少于100； 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。Dear friends，_Thank you.【答案】Dear friends， How time flies！Tw
172、o weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings. As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese tra
173、ditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works. In my opinion, everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope well get t
174、ogether again next year. Thank you.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文写作。【详解】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇
175、作文属于典型的提纲类作文。范文流畅，使用了高级句型：定语从句As scheduled；状语从句的省略While visiting the art exhibition；短语on behalf of；participate in；get together也为文章添彩不少。37.(2016年，全国卷II）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1.主题：环境保护；2.展览时间；3.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow.注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】
176、Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15thand last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictur
177、es and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow.Hope to hear from
178、 you soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。【详解】文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。【
179、点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested is welcome to participate；时间状语从句.the last time you visited our school；条件状语从句If you want to join.等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的英语写作能力。38.(2015年，重庆卷）请就以下话题，按要求用
180、英文写作。If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?要求：（1）作出回答并说出理由；（2）词数不少于60；（3）在答题卡上做答。【答案】Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable a
181、im is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.【解析】试题分析：本文属于考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选
182、择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make on
183、e step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If only I could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。39.(2015年，重庆卷）Bookcrossing. com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：1 表明写信目的2 选择一种分享方式3 简述作出该选择的理由4 希望了解更多信息注意：（1）词数
184、不少于80；（2）在答题卡上做答（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）【答案】 Dear Madam/Sir,Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and contro
185、lled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific informati
186、on, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking for
187、ward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers
188、from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；40.(2015年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1. 栏目介绍。2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度：约400词汇4. 交稿日期：6月28日前天注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3. 开头语已为你写好。【答案】 Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article
189、 for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And w
190、e would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward
191、 to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles wr
192、itten by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as,look forward to , he
193、ar from等。41.(2015年，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。（1）自我介绍；（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；（3）询问对方的其他需求。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：学生会 the Student UnionDear Chris, Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris， I am Li Jin，chairman of the Student Union，f
194、rom Chenguang High School，the sister school of your school in Tianjin. It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture.
195、We will prepare books of many different kinds，such as poetry，fiction，and so on.The 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July. As monitor of the Chinese Class，what other sorts of books do you think will be needed？Im looking forward to your reply.
196、Yours，Li Jin【解析】【分析】本文为提纲类作文。【详解】本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3. 询问对方的其他需求； 4.告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本文行文连贯，结构完整，使用了较多高级句型，如，1.It is my pleasure to tel
197、l you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture.句子里that 引导the news 的同位语从句，解释the news 的内容；is planning 是进行时态表示将来。又如，The 300 books will be brought
198、to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July.句子里will be brought 是一般将来时态的被动语态。 等等。42.(2015年，上海卷）学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,Since the Reading Festival is around
199、 the corner, Im writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. T
200、hough it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as Im concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plot
201、s. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you cant help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My i
202、deal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is qu
203、ite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Pan Yang【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达陈述观点及理由。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读
204、有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确从以上三张图片中选择一张。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentratio
205、n; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimate
206、ly enhance your understanding of the book；运用连词 Though,运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a person
207、al activity；I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如not only but also; as far as Im concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。43.(2015年，湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and s
208、earch for an answer,you will learn.注意：1.无须写标题；2.除诗歌外，文体不限；3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【答案】Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.T
209、wo years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I ma
210、naged to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇开放式作文，沿袭了近几年的高考模式，要求根据提示，并结合具体事例，完成一篇英语短文。考生写作之前必须认真审题，注意描述具体事例
211、时要用过去时态，人称用第一人称，内容紧紧围绕所给的主题，最后要有总结，形成首尾呼应。【亮点说明】首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,”
212、等句型，为文章增色不少。此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如offer sb. sth.，work sth. out，manage to do sth.，praise sb. for sth.，serve as等。44.(2015年，安徽卷）某英文杂志正在举办以Fancy yourself as an interviewer为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview 为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1. 采访的对象；2. 采访的原因；3. 想提的问题。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 短文中
213、不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview【答案】 A Famous Chinese I Would Like to InterviewThe person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astron
214、auts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such
215、great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.【解析】 试题分析：题目是一篇命题材料作文，作文的写作要点已经给出，考生需要根据提示进行写作，必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右，标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性，不能出现与本人有关的信息。【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I would like to i
216、nterview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese.；宾语从句I could learn a great deal from him about it，what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样化；范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only.but also
217、.；one of the.；the first to do sth；be interested in；a great deal；such.as等，使作文的内容得到了丰富；范文注意使用not only.but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子，是范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。45.(2015年，全国卷II）假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.
218、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结语已为你写好。Dear Lucy,_Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lucy,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with th
219、e elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking
220、 forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。Well also spend som
221、e fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。46.(2015年，福建卷）请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。内容包括：1. 描述画面；2. 概述其含义；3. 谈谈个人感想。凿壁偷光注意：1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；2. 可以
222、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；参考词汇：凿，钻：boreIn the picture, 【答案】 In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story f
223、rom ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situatio
224、n may be of course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.【解析】 试题分析：本题为看图写作，主题是古时候的一则成语“凿壁偷光”。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保
225、持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。【亮点分析】文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in th
226、rough a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy, being poor ,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light f
227、rom his neighbour s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。第
228、三段结束Of course, things are totally different today .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not but 结构以及宾语从句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the
229、future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。47.(2015年，北京卷）假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）；2. 说明你打算参加的原因；3. 询问对方的意向。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting pl
230、an for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more in
231、formation.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)期待和感谢。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if youd like to go with me.
232、文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。48.(2015年，陕西卷）假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and
233、English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi.写作要点：1.表示写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear MS Chen ,Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _Looki
234、ng forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【答案】Dear MS Chen ,Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability,
235、communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several Englis
236、h activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于英文书信。【详解】根据提示可知需要结合“英语文化节”的
237、一则招募启事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点从三个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了sothat句型，以及定语从句I have lent a hel
238、ping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文
239、章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。49.(2015年，四川卷）假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that yo
240、u want to improve your Mandarm 【答案】Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think Im fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for
241、 me to communicate with others in my daily life. So Im quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin.Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some
242、 books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. Im eager to improve m
243、y English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.Hope for you early reply!Yours Sincerely,Li Xia【解析】
244、试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体，可分成三段写，第一段写要点1、2；第二段写要点3；第三段写要点4，以及希望得到对方的回信。【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandari
245、n is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。50.(2014年，陕西卷）假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。 写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3.表达对客人的祝愿。 写作要求： 1.词数不少于100；2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear American guests, _【答
246、案】Dear American Guest,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and p
247、ractical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope
248、we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.【解析】试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对美国代表团的欢迎词，所以要用一般现在时。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段欢迎美国朋友的到来；第二段介绍英语周的活动；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅
249、。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist of， benefit from等等；还运用了不定式to have作状语，to develop作表语等，动名词listening等作宾语，hope后宾语从句等等。51.(2014年，重庆卷）请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法； 2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点； 3. 词数不少于60； 4. 在
250、答题卡上作答。【答案】This happens frequently in a teenagers world which depends on cell phones too much. In the eyes of the youngsters, friendship is important. But when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids tends to regard the latter as their bigger share. I dont think it is wise to neglect a d
251、evoted human friend but favor the phone, because human friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. So next time, when your friend falls, dont laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up. 【解析】审题：friend和phone形成对比; laugh和cry形成矛盾。因此有话可说。一般而论，应该选择批驳重电话而轻友谊的
252、信念，即不要重物质而轻友情。写作技巧首先要对材料进行阐释，此时不宜抄袭原材料，而是改写材料。其次是对这中选择进行选择性论述。最后提出建议。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。特别是要尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句等。52.(2014年，重庆卷）青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：*赞同Susan的看法*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么*该礼物的意义*期待大家回复注意：1. 词数不少于80； 2. 符合语言规范； 3. 在答题卡上作答； 4.
253、 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 I am a high school student from China. _.【答案】I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intention so we should devote more to them.The best gift Ive ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, wh
254、ich she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The books name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me beca
255、use she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. Yours ever, Li Hua【解析】审题：该题也具有较大的开放度。但按要求一定要写出Susan的看法，而这个看法就在试题的写作说明里：礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精
256、力。而选择什么样的角度来写一定要根据自己的生活和切身感受，且要量力而行。写作技巧：一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务：1阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。2收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点，应多费笔墨完成。3表期待应另外起段完成，以便阅卷老师发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句，倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调：一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。53.(2014年，浙江卷）学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popu
257、lar science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。Dear Mr. Wang, _ Yours sincerely Li Yue【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popul
258、ar science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category o
259、f books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue【解析】试题分析：根据提示你用英语给图
260、书馆王老师写一封100120词的信，可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式。学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议。在写推荐的两类书时，要写出为什么要推荐这些书。【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩，如：would like to do；help sb do sth；not only.but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why等，还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化，如：What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句；That is why
261、 I recommend another category of books：这里why引导的表语从句；Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句。54.(2014年，全国卷I）假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。参考词汇：住宿accommodation【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan t
262、o go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also lik
263、e to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项，考生要清楚这是一封信，要符合信的格式。这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。考生要注
264、意动词时态的变化，以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，比如：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth;pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and w
265、hether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气，增加了文章的亮点。55.(2014年，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：(1) 表示欢迎 (2) 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）(3) 介绍本班情况 (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊注意：(1) 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。 (2) 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。(1) 参考词汇： 交换生
266、 exchange studentDear Chris, Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. 【答案】Dear Chris， Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcome to our class in China. Im glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each othe
267、r. So if you join us, Im sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too. The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so dont forget to bring different kinds of clothes with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places
268、 of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like. As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if
269、it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And well exchange our different lives and cultures together then.Looking forw
270、ard to your coming!YoursLi Jin【解析】【分析】本文是一封书信。假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请根据提示， 给他写封邮件。【详解】本文要求写一封Email。本文包括了四个要点。1. 表示欢迎。2. 介绍班级情况。3. 注意事项。4. 希望Chris做的事。应该用一般现在时。【点睛】范文要点齐全，全文连贯。运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句；not onlybut also 连接词；用了get along well with，make friends with，as well as， inst
271、ead of， it is convenient to you等短语和固定句型。56.(2014年，四川卷）假设你是李夏I你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加商考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知。1. 考试日期与科目； 2. 考试准备情况；3. 考试吋的状态；4. 对试题的感受； 5. 可能的考试结果。注意：1.词数120左右； 2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好； 3.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯； 4.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：college entrance examinationDear Sam,Thank you for your concern. _【答案】Dear
272、Sam ,Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about our college entrance examination .The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province .Generally speakin
273、g , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period .With the exam approaching , most students will feel nervous and upset .But by now when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too diffic
274、ult . I am sure I will get a good result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effort ,and I wont regret . Best wishes ! Yours , Li Xia【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一封书信，告诉朋友关于高考的一些情况，属于应用文范畴。书信是同学们非常熟悉的一种写作体裁，而且内容也是同学们正在体验着的高考，并且开头和结尾又已经给出，所以同学们写起来应该是游刃有余。在写作时应注意的问题有
275、以下几个方面：首先，因为内容是同学们正在经历着的关于高考的事情，所以要使用一般现在时或者现在进行时。其次，要尽量使用高级词汇和句型来提高作文档次。此外，写作时也要使用恰当的连接词以使行文连贯，层次清晰。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，语言流畅，时态、人称和标点符号的使用正确，很好的完成了写作任务。在作文中作者开门见山提出自己写信的目的，即告诉Sam有关高考的事情，这种结构安排符合书信类文体的结构安排。在句式方面作者使用了定语从句which is considered a vital period，状语从句whatever the result is, 宾语从句what you asked a
276、bout our college entrance examination等，而且还用到了Generally speaking , With the exam approaching , After all ,等短语，这些短语和句式的使用有效地增加了文章的亮点，提高了作文档次。57.(2014年，上海卷）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一
277、个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。【答案】Dear Editor,Ive learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. Im writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.Needles
278、s to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students interest and have positive effects on their study and life.Compared to the entertainment , I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . The main factor is that it is of great si
279、gnificance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening ones horizons, which in turn is beneficial to ones study and the e
280、stablishment of philosophy of life.Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers ones career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to ones career success in the future.What has been mentioned a
281、bove is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.Yours sincerely,Cheng Fei【解析】试题分析：这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版的事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考
282、生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组，如：share with 和分享，Needless to say不必说， according to 根据， have positive effects on对有积极的影响，in turn反之，take into account将考虑在内，make a gre
283、at difference to对有很大的影响，in the hope that希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissi
284、ng goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法， the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening ones horizons, which in turn is beneficial to ones study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句，还有范文还使用了 In addi
285、tion, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。58.(2014年，江西卷）假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。 1.学会学习：方法，习惯等； 2.学会做人：真诚，友善； 3.学会其他：考生自拟。注意：1.词数120左右； 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。Good morning, everyon
286、e! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school._Thank you! 【答案】 Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firs
287、t, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition,
288、we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to
289、build up my body and enrich my school life. No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. Thank you!【解析】【题型分析】 今年江西高考英语书面表达属于演讲稿写作。给予提纲，半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切。让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力。即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。【审题要素】 写作时需注意下列几点。 1. 应该使
290、用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。 2. 按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。 3.注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。【思路导引】首先， 思考出要学会学习，要有个符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；思考出要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of ./ an acce
291、ptable thing is ./get into a habit of ./be active in./go over./behave well/it is kind of ./be involved in.等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly./in addition./last but not the least等。最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但我们别忘了在演讲稿结尾时，或总结，或展望未来，或表决心等。【亮点说明】重点词汇语句Challenging，used to In additionbuild up Develop a good habitget actively
292、 involved in No pains no gains.get along well with .高级句型1. Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）2. .review what had been taught after class. （名词性从句）3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. （强调句）4. I am sure that with great efforts, you wi
293、ll. （名词性从句）.段落框架First,.In addition,.Finally,.59.(2014年，湖南卷）学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。内容：1.说明设计理由2.介绍新功能。注意;:1.词数不少于120个字2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【答案】My magic penIt is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.To make it
294、easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically. More importantly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the
295、text will be shown within a minute. In this way, the time that we spend in taking notes will be saved. We will be able to have more time to go over our lessons or engage in something else that we are interested in.It sounds so great, right?【解析】【分析】本书面表达是一篇说明文。所给出的题材十分贴近学生生活，学生能够从日常生活中的熟悉的物品适当发挥想象。【详
296、解】要求写一篇说明文，所给的要点也很清楚：说明学生所选物品设计理由；介绍此物品新功能。写作的时候注意以下几点：1、切合题意。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、简明扼要。此题材学生都有话可说，但要注意说明清楚：为什么要设计此物品？此物品有哪些新功能？要点要全面。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。【点睛】范文简明扼要的介绍了自己创新作品。使用了些高级句型，使得文章的水平更加高级。例如： It is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by th
297、e school.使用了that引导的定语从句；To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically.使用了不定式短语做目的状语，我which引导的非限制性定语从句，what引导的宾语从句，是典型的高分句型。More important
298、ly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will be shown within a minute. 使用了主语从句。To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class；More importantly；In this way使得文章表达更加准确和到位，也为文章增添了活泼气氛。60.(2014年，广东卷）你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚
299、报写一篇报道。写作内容请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义相关信息：借助当地媒体寻找迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人打算根据此经历写一本书同年同月同日生的人：time twin写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【答案】Richard Avis, a Britis
300、h, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 fem
301、ales. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.【解析】试题分析：根据写作要求可知要考生为当地英语晚报写一篇关于英国人查理德阿维斯的报道，报道中查理德阿维斯以前做过的事情，句子的时态应该用一般过去式，他通过调查而得来的
302、有关其他人现在的情况，叙述这些人的目前的情况应该用一般现在时。根据要求必须用5句话，表示出要表达的那么多的信息量的句子，考生必须有扎实的语法知识的功底，能够正确使用复合句来表达所写的信息。【亮点说明】短文用了短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：in order to do sth; With the help of sb; intend to do sth等；文章用了whom引导的定语从句，把那么多的信息放在了一个句子里来表达，可见写作的功底；增加了文章的亮点。61.(2014年，福建卷）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“S
303、uccess is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.（热情）”Sir Winston, Churchill内容要求：1. 你对该引语的理解；2. 你的相关经历；3. 恰当的结尾。注意：1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3. 词数：120左右。This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that 【答案】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us t
304、hat we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. How
305、ever, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride
306、a bike had I lost heart.ZXXK Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.【解析】试题分析：如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题，自己对于该引语的理解；第二段写出自己的相关经历；第三段恰当地结尾。2. 时态：自己的相关经历用一般过去时；3. 人称：第
307、一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：was about to快要，give up放弃，better and better越来越好，be able to能够，lost heart灰心丧气，succeed in成功，tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged宾语从句，So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it倒装句，I was about to give up when
308、 my father came and encouraged me to keep going.这里含有一个时间状语从句，Whats important is that we should stick at it.这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。文章还运用了However，Worse still等词来连接全文。62.(2014年，北京卷）你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入
309、总词数。Dear Chris,_Yours,Joe【答案】Dear Chris,How is everything going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.Im sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.Im looking forwa
310、rd to hearing from you soon.Yours, Joe【解析】本题考查学生应用文写作，是一封书信，但开头和签名都已给出，学生只需写出要点即可。书信一般开头应有寒暄的句子，然后过渡到想要表达的内容。最后要有结束语。本文的得分点分布在五个内容上：寒暄、三件事和结束语。【亮点说明】文章范文使用了高级从句及省略：1. I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.2.高级短语：put of
311、f look forward to hear from63.(2014年，广西卷）69.一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭：2.工作：3.业余生活。注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._【答案】I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very differen
312、t in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I wil
313、l continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于半开放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”为题，写一篇征文。【详解】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称。因为提
314、示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的
315、单一。此外，还用到了较多的高级语法表达，如I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer.（省略that的宾语从句）Ill do a good job in whatever I do.（whatever引导的宾语从句）In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.（比较级+and+比较级连用）等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。64.(2014年，安徽卷）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑J
316、amie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. Yours,Jamie【答案】Hi Worried， Im sorry to know
317、 that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful ti
318、ps: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your fu
319、ture. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。【详解】内容是用英文写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示：为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容
320、易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信格式。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: that引导的宾语从句Im sorry to know that youre having
321、 such a had time at the moment.定语从句sothat 引导的目的状语从句The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。65.(2012年，上海卷）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions g
322、iven below in Chinese.上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括： 对两堂绘画课的具体描述； 你从中获得的启发。【答案】Date: June 8, 2012Last week, I sat in on two painting classes at a primary school. In one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. By contrast, the same studen
323、t used a brush to make a breath-taking landscape paintingso vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the chirping birds.Though standing in stark contrast, the two paintings both intrigued me. In fact, they reminded me of what Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg said, “Keep your
324、eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” Its this maxim on success that lends insight into the two paintings. The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success. A kite stays afloat because its attached to a reel; otherwis
325、e it will instantly lose its balance before eventually crashing into the ground. So it is with us.However, success requires more than being simply down-to-earth, with a lofty ideal being another crucial factor. So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of o
326、ur dreams. Instead of ignoring the gleam of light, the spark of wisdom that flashes across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of geniuses, wed be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have faith in ourselves.The paintings
327、taught me to dream big and act small. And I believe, by doing so, the warm light of success will cascade into my life.【解析】这是一篇看图写话，体裁是日记的形式。内含两个要点：介绍对两堂绘画课的具体描述和你从中获得的启发。文章要紧紧围绕这两个要点展开。各个要点表达要清晰，要点要根据图的内容进行具体描述。然后谈谈自己的启发。层次要分明，衔接要自然。需要考生自己做合理的联想，启发要有新意，内容要符合图的逻辑。66.(2012年，安徽卷）假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是
328、高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：文科 arts; 理科:scienceGood afternoon, everyone.Welcome to our school! _Thanks！【来源】2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语（安徽卷带解析)【答案】Good afternoon,everyone. Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a
329、choice between arts and science.it was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration,though,I decided on science as my main subject of study. First ,science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second,the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of be
330、coming a scientist. Third,my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe i will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model,whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision. It is for these reasons that I finally made
331、 my choice. Thanks!【解析】试题分析：本文要求写一给美国朋友的回信，介绍你对高中文、理科的选择。要把你的选择和选择的理由说清楚。所以要用一般现在时或一般过去时，情态动词表达应该怎么做。字数要求100词左右。注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如,It was not an easy choice for me to make.和It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.，还运用了 whose 引导的定语从句等复合句。并注意了句子句子之间的衔
332、接如用First, second, Last but not least等。67.(2013年，浙江卷）请以“one thing Im proud of”为题， 用英语写一篇100120个词的短文， 记述一见你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述这件事2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）.One Thing Im Proud of【答案】One Thing Im Proud ofI still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high
333、school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term i b
334、ecame one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”【解析】本题考查记叙文的写作，记一件令自己骄傲的事，记叙+议论型作文，命题开放性作
335、文。高考英语写作的要求在 高考英语写作阅卷的评分标准中的其中有几点是十分值得我们关注的，这么几点提示十分重要：1 丰富的词汇和较多的语法结构的运用 2 高级的词汇和语法的使用 3 连词的使用 4 切题，且完成题目中68.(2013年，全国卷I）假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1. 词数100左右；74.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；75.开头语和结已为你写好。Dear Peter,How are you doing
336、?_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my un
337、cle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!His fight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】
338、试题分析：本题是一篇书信类作文，信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜，航班号：CA985，到达：8月6日上午11:30，需要注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 开头语和结束语已为你写好。亮点说明：本题是一篇书信类作文，作者写出了文章所需要的信息，用了do one a favor表示需要帮一个忙。用了Would you please句式委婉的说出了自己的想法。时间，地点写的都比较明确，My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.详细的描述叔叔的样子，用了现在进行时表示状态
339、。时态转换的比较好，是一篇较为不错的书信类作文。69.(2013年，重庆卷）调查显示，中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一情况并提供帮助。内容应包括： 说明写信目的 简述江豚现状 希望WWF如何帮助(比如: 资助江豚保护项目等) 表示感谢并期待回复注意：1) 词数不少于80；2) 在答题卡上作答。3) 书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Chongqing, China.
340、 I am writing to you to tell you something about Yangtze Finless Porpoise. Due to lack of human protection, the number of Yangtze Finless Porpoise is becoming smaller and smaller, only less than 1000 left. Most of them are dying out. Therefore, its high time we took immediate measures to change the
341、situation. So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fund organization or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on.I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】1. 中文提示更为简洁，开放性更大，给学生的创作发挥提供了更多的空间。2. 考查学生在真实的语境中用英语来解
342、决问题的能力。3. 高考中的“钉子户”李华。这类作文学生都能动手写作，但是如果要得高分，以下几个因素缺一不可：好的开头结尾、行文逻辑清晰、高级词汇及句型的使用、漂亮的书写和卷面。70.(2013年，重庆卷）A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”要求：1) 就此材料发表你的看法；2) 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；3) 词数不少于60；4）在答题卡上作答。【答案】Nowadays, mo
343、re and more young people are always on the phone, sleeping, out with their friends, or in their rooms closing the doors. What they do make their parents feel deep sad and lonely.In my opinion, no matter how busy we may be, we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying
344、them. It is not just because they once gave us so much selfless love, but its our duty to look after them well.【解析】1. 更全面的考查了学生的认知方式和思维能力。2. 进一步释放了学生的想象力和英语语言的表达能力。3. 试题体现对现实的关注，要求学生有一定的生活阅历，引领学生关注社会，思考人生。此开放作文贴近学生生活。基础差的考生容易上手，基础好的学生则有足够发挥空间。这类作文学生都能动手写作，但是如果要得高分，以下几个因素缺一不可：好的开头结尾、行文逻辑清晰、高级词汇及句型的使用
345、、漂亮的书写和卷面。71.(2013年，四川卷）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。Its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. ._【答案】Its useful and necessary to d
346、iscuss learning habits. As is known to us, good learning habits contribute to improving learning efficiency. That is to say, without good learning habits, the efficiency cannot be guaranteed. Therefore, in order to establish a good learning habit, such as reviewing what we have studied regularly, we
347、 should revise the course we have learned and try hard to recite something important. Only by doing this can we learn all the courses well and achieve better grades. However, one of my problems lies in that I cannot stick to reviewing the knowledge regularly, so I ought to make a proper schedule and
348、 persist in it.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】本文探讨学习习惯与学习效率之间的关系，对于学生来说比较熟悉的，但是在写作的过程注意一下几点：文章的时态，本文应以一般现在时为主或者表示建议的情态动词为主；注意要点写全，不能写漏其中一点并且注意要点之间的承接；注意要点的条理性。因此考生应努力把自己掌握的较为复杂的句型和高级表达法运用到写作中去，以增加亮点。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As is known to us, good learning habits contribute to improving
349、learning efficiency. 运用了定语从句；Therefore, in order to establish a good learning habit, such as reviewing what we have studied regularly, we should revise the course we have learned and try hard to recite something important.运用了宾语从句； Only by doing this can we learn all the courses well and achieve bett
350、er grades. 运用了倒装句；However, one of my problems lies in that I cannot stick to reviewing the knowledge regularly, so I ought to make a proper schedule and persist in it.使用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。72.(2013年，上海卷）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150
351、words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）。【答案】Possible version 1Dear Sir or Madam:I have heard from the newspaper that you, the Shanghai Museum, are plan
352、ning to organize a famous painting exhibition. And you are now collecting suggestions about whether to hold it in your museum or the art gallery. I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum. My reasons are as follows.In terms of convenience, the museum has
353、 more advantages over the gallery. First, it is located in the Peoples Square, which is the center of the city. So people can enjoy convenient transportation such as the subway line 1, 2 and 8, which are available to people from nearly every district. It saves the visitors a lot of time and trouble
354、of traffic jam. Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country. After all the Shanghai Museum is a landmark of our city familiar to nearly every Chinese.With regard to the professional function, though it seems natural that an art exhibition be set
355、in the gallery, in a more general sense, I think the museum has more advanced facilities to make the exhibition successful and to preserve the paintings well. As we know, the museum has successfully held many national and international exhibitions and its advertising and organizing experience is of
356、no match; also its staff is qualified and professional.To sum up, I am sure the show will be fantastic if it is held in Shanghai Museum.Wang MinPossible version 2To whom it may concern：Ive learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that youre collecting suggestions on its location. Im writing
357、this letter to share with you my opinions. In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And
358、the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and
359、 advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.Wang Min【解析】这是一篇话题作文，就上海博物馆的展出场所做出自己的判断，并表达出自己的理由。内容比较贴近生活，具有时代性和真实性。因为给出的只是框架性的提示和要求，所以需要考生在写作的时候要根据实际情况，结合所学知识补全文章所需的各项内容。其中，文章需要包括的内容主要有，写信的目的、场所的选
360、择、你的理由（便利性和专业性等方面）。在写作的过程中，除了注意词汇、句型等的正确使用以外，还要做到言之有理，言之有据。同时，多样的句式结构和适当的连词的使用，也会使文章读起来更加的流畅和自然。总体难度不大。73.(2013年，广东卷）阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 写作内容1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现
361、真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【答案】To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant, not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting the house or digging the garden.What is the reason ,the
362、n？In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction .It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as atta
363、ching a door handle to a car .But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something!Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized. No matter how ordinary a job is, it
364、 plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs.【解析】（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；get up early to work, so much work , no matter is raining or snowing. Get little paid and less respect. （2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？Dirty, 虚拟语气，which is b
365、ad for the beauty of the city and bad for our health.（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。The work counts, play an import role in our life. 概括包括内容1. Many people find their work unpleasant 2. They cannot get real satisfaction from the work they are doing because it is boring and ordinary. 3. We should respect ordinary work
366、ers. 写作内容包括：1.清洁工起早摸黑，要在严寒酷暑中工作，但收入不高。2.如果没有清洁工，环境会变得糟糕。街道将会到处是垃圾，臭气冲天，污水横流，在这种环境里，人们的工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。3.社会需要各种职业，离不开普通劳动者。我们应该尊重他们的平凡工作，提高他们的待遇。74.(2013年，广东卷）写作内容 请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯志愿者的选拔 到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星*的志愿者志愿者的条件 至少18岁；做好不回地球的准备；愿与他人保持良好的关系。专家观点 火星生活条件太艰苦；面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。志愿者观点 厌倦地球生活，想体验火
367、星生活； 如果成功，就是人类英雄。*火星： the Mars 写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【答案】Version 1 About thirty volunteers will be chosen from all over the world by 2015 to go to the Mars. The volunteers must be over eighteen years old, prepared not to return to the earth, and willing to keep a good relationship
368、 with other people. Some experts think that the living conditions on the Mars are hard because it is difficult for the volunteers to face the cold weather, loneliness and fear. The volunteers believe that if they are successful, they will become the heroes of human beings. Whats more, they are tired
369、 of living on the earth, so they want to experience the life on the Mars. Version 2By 2015, about thirty volunteers to go to the Mars will be chosen from all over the world. The volunteers, who must be over 18 and would like to keep a good relationship with other people, should be prepared not to re
370、turn to the earth. Some experts believe that it is very difficult to live on the Mars because of the cold weather, loneliness and fear. Some volunteers hold the belief that they will be the heroes if they succeed. Moreover, they want to know what life is like on the Mars because they are tired of th
371、e life on the earth. 【解析】1、 被动句：Up till 2015, about 30 volunteers will be selected to go to the Mars.2、 定语从句：Those volunteers, who are over 18, should be ready to stay at the Mars forever and willing to get along well with others.3、 宾语从句：The experts point out that the life in the Mars will be rather
372、 difficult as a result of the cold weather, loneliness and fear. 也可以考虑使用过去分词作状语 Faced with the cold weather, loneliness and fear, the life in the Mars will be rather difficult. 4、 However, the volunteers say that they are tired of the life in the earth and expect to experience the life in the Mars.
373、可以使用过去分词Tired of life in the earth, the volunteers expect to experience the life in the Mars.5、 Whats more, they believe that they will be heroes once they succeed. 也可以使用if条件句Whats more, they believe that they will be heroes if they are successful. 75.(2013年，湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。We all know th
374、at “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。【答案】My desk-mate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments. One day, where we learned the new word
375、“eccentric”in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him” . Hearing this ,the whole class burst int laughter and my desk-mates face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my desk-ma
376、te would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply. Not until then did I realize words could he powerful in both positive and negative ways . We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.【解析】这是一篇开放式作文，给出
377、写作的事例：We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.我们都知道，“棍棒和石头可能会打断我们的骨头。”但是我们也应该意识到，语言也能伤害人和写作要求，无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。这样就要求考生运用生活中的事例来解释说明文章所列出的这一句话，范文中运用作者用“eccentric”这个生词造句时，说“my desk-mate is a
378、n eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him”伤害了同桌。来说明语言也能伤害人。本文中多次使用了较高级的语法结构，比如：I volunteered to do it by saying “my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him” . 本句使用了by saying短语，同时又使用了定语从句： whose clothes never fit him。Hearing this ,the whole class burst int laughter and my desk-mat
379、es face turned red本句中使用了现在分词短语表伴随。以及较高级的句法： I learned from the teacher that my desk-mate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. 本句中首先使用了that引导的宾语从句，同时又使用了if 引导的条件状语从句。76.(2013年，江西卷）.星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（D
380、aqing Mountain）；2.活动的过程；3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1.词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set
381、out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activit
382、y benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!【解析】试题分析：本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。首先写清写作目的，然后是时间，地点，人物，过程，包括如出发，途中，到达目的地等情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义，即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当
383、增加细节，以使行文连贯。【亮点说明】高级句型结构的运用，如感叹句What a wonderful time及倒装结构not only.but also的运用。好的短语：set out for出发,动身，着手做某事 in high spirits 情绪高昂fall behind落后非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化，如：Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.77.(2013年，山东卷）假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：1.未及
384、时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Tom,How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me fo
385、r my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden
386、my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my
387、 life.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, whats your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本书面表达考查提纲类作文。【详解】整体来看，今年山东卷作文难度不大，沿袭了山东卷提纲类书信体作文的传统，题干依然保持“字数虽少，但信息量不小”的特点，写作试题的考查上体现了命题人稳中求变和创新的原则。今年山东卷考查的书信类型，而为了考查考生审题能力，命
388、题人并没有把如“感谢”、“道歉”、“建议”、“申请”等明显的字眼放在题中，而是通过考查学生对题干的审题能力暗示学生此书信体作文应大体包含道歉和告知两个方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解释原因，后写假期的打算。从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问Tom暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用
389、简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：不定式作目的状语：To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.非谓语动词和定
390、语从句：What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.78.(2013年，安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1. 遵守交通法规；2. 注意举止文明。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 短文的题目已为你拟
391、好，不计入总词数【答案】On the Way to SchoolThese days,breaking traffic rules and lttering are not uncommon,causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires joint effort of everyone.As for me.It should start on my way to school.1 will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.f I r
392、ide a bike,ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. lf I walk,ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, | will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and tidy.Not onlywill I keep from littering and spitting anywhere,but
393、 also I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.【解析】这是一篇命题类作文，本题只给出了写作要点，要求写一篇关于遵守交通法规的英语短文。由于此篇作文非常贴近生活，故我们大部分学生都会感觉有的可写。在写作中主要围绕内容要点选取自己熟悉的内容进行写作。写作中注意选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。写作中注意应用一些比较经典的句式短语等来提高作文的文采，注意不要遗漏要点。为了使表达更有逻辑性，适当使用序
394、数词，连接词等。79.(2013年，陕西卷）假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。I am an 18-year-old middle school student, 【答案】I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the
395、 housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them i
396、n place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never f
397、elt so happy.【解析】今年作文试题从帮助类，家务类话题的角度考查考查考生的书面表达的能力。难度与2012年相比略有下降。做家务的话题应该是中学生熟悉，有话可写的素材，因此难度并不大。题目以周记的形式展现，要求考生先介绍做家务的理由，再介绍做家务的过程，最后写出自己的感受。考生在写作时，一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作，三个要点都十分重要，如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上，抓住语言的准确性，再写出几个亮点词汇和句式，得到高分应该比较轻松。80.(2013年，全国大纲卷）假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom 写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1.外观
398、（尺寸、颜色、材料）2.象征意义3.价格注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Tom,How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Tom，How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other
399、 materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants
400、to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you! Yours,Li Hua.【解析】作文是写一封信，对考生来说，是一种比较熟悉的作文类型。材料联系到了网店，很贴合生活实际；写作时注意书信的格式；三个要点都要包括在作文内，不能有遗漏。81.(2013年，辽宁卷）一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：它是中国传统节日之一；家人团聚；赏月、吃月饼；还有旅游、访友
401、等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已经为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake The Mid-Autumn FestivalThe Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. 【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autum
402、n Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how husy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. THe moon that night looks the brightest
403、 in the whole lunar month.What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky,we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visit
404、ing our relatives or friends.【解析】本题是材料作文，文体是说明文。材料已给出，考生应该不难理解写作内容和写作目的，且文章的题目和首句已给出，要求考生只写书信主体部分。考生应该先注意审题，特别注意主要要点，还应注意采用现在时，说明现在的客观现实。考生还应注意尽可能使用多种句子表达方式，和一些比较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可续性。81.(2013年，广东卷）你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓 名：Allan Stewart国 籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：200
405、6年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。*硕士学位：masters degree; *博士：doctor写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【答案】Allan Stewart, an Australian old man, born on March 7, 1915, is already the holder of the world record f
406、or being the oldest graduate. He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. He got his first degree in 1936, later along with a doctors degree of medicine. He decided to study law in his eighties, and he got the masters degree in 2006, which was his third degre
407、e. In 2012, he received his fourth degree by network learning, who was praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule.【解析】此文是人物介绍，是继2011年的书本介绍后的同类型的文章。对于这一话题，学生很熟悉，有话可说。有9个信息点，比去年多一个。可以使用的句式有强调句，定语从句，with 作状语，分词born作状语，宾语从句。时态使用过去式。学习态度: 挑战自我，永远为时不晚。He believes that one is never too old to
408、 challenge himself. 国 籍：澳大利亚 of Australia nationality 信息点可以分为如下五点：1、姓名，国籍，出生日期 2、学习态度和第一个学位和第二个学位 3、第三个学位和世界纪录 4、第四个学位 5、人物评价。 82.(2012年，湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。【答
409、案】Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the
410、best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties,they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are giv
411、en but how you make use of it that determines who you are.【解析】试题分析：本文只是给出了一个提示：你无法选择别人给你的事物，的是你可以选择你如何使用它们的方式。属于开放性作文。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使
412、用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。要点：1.列举实例来说明重要的是我们利用别人所给事物的方法更为重要，可以使用身边发生的事情。2.表示自己的观点。如：无论以后发生什么事情，我们都要冷静，并仔细选择合适的方法。【亮点说明】范文中对于连接词的使用非常到位，如besides等；另外句中的高级句式，如Disappointed as I felt.;whenever I had difficulties.；It is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are。83.(
413、2012年，全国卷II）假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 时间：周五晚8点至9点 地点：学生俱乐部 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 要求：备小礼物注意： 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯； 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。Hi, Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. 【答案】Hi, Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Wed like to i
414、nvite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. Well gather at the Students Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And its going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, well light the candles and sing “Happy
415、Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. Itll be nice to see how excited he will be. Im sure youll have a good time at the party, too.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇应用文。写信是人们生活中最常见的写作形式，因此，考生会感到亲切、熟悉。写信时应注意以下几点：1. 文体信息：文体：记叙文；语体：非正式语体；人称：第一人称；中心大意：你班同学决定为小明举办生日
416、聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加并通知相关事宜。2. 主导时态：一般将来时。3. 内容要点：时间：周五晚8点至9点；地点：学生俱乐部；内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等；要求：备小礼物。4. 注意使用恰当的连词使行为流畅、自然。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型为文章增光添彩。84.(2012年，福建卷）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。【答案】Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my fri
417、ends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only p
418、eople in the world. Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign,“No Littering”nearby. What a shame! Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned
419、into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.【解析】本文考查看图作文。首先考生要看懂图的中心思想。不能出现审题方面的偏差。本文仍然是关于在公众场合注意自己的言行举止，先描写图画的内容，再说明图画表示的内涵，结合实际谈谈自己的感想，看图作文对考生的要求较高，首先要读懂图形，要求考生筛选出要点或者中心思想，然后再把要点用连接词串联
420、成文。象whats more等，写作时要使用高级的词汇或者句型让文章更有文采。使意思表达清楚，A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.这句话既用到了非谓语动词也用到了as if接从句。85.(2012年，陕西卷）假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点：1.活动的策划； 2.教室的布置； 3.活动的内容； 4.你的感想。注意
421、：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.【答案】Ms. Li, our English teacher,
422、 must have found it strange on Teachers Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.As Teachers Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On
423、the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers Day!”Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing
424、in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their Gongfu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li.Ms. Li spent a wonderful time wi
425、th us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.【解析】本题是一篇材料作文，也是看图作文，材料和图形比较简单，考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，但文章首句已经给出，要求考生续写，这增加了本题的难度和区分度。考生重点要先仔细审题，审题主要包括以下几个方面：（1）主体时态；（2）主体人称；（3）内容要点。尤其是对于内容要点的把握要准确到位。再者考生需注意尽可能使句子表达形式的多样，尽量使用一些较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。86.(2012年，天
426、津卷）假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。 *提出邀请并简述原因； *提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等） *请求对方回复注意： 1.请使用规范英语，词数不少于100； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：越剧：Shaoxing Opera 梁山伯与祝英台 Butterfly Lovers天津大剧院Tianjin Grand Theat
427、erDear Chris, I have good news to tell you._ _ Yours, Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. A Shaoxing Opera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater, which was just completed, at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th. It is because I know you like the culture of China, especia
428、lly drama, that I would like to invite you to admire it.As we all know, Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama, telling about two young persons moving love story. After watching it, shall we visit some places nearby, such as the art museum, in which lots of rich art will appeal to you enormously?I
429、would be very glad if you come. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。内容包括：提出邀请并简述原因；提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）；请求对方回复。人称使用第一
430、、三人称，时态使用一般现在时、一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be on show（上演），was just completed（新落成的），at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th（8月5日下午2：00），because（因为），the culture of China（中国文化），the art museum（艺术博物馆），Looking forward to your early reply.（期待您的早日回复）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定
431、要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如A Shaoxing Opera （过去分词）named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater,（非限定性定语从句）which was just completed, at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th.；（强调句）It is （原因状语从句）because I know you like the culture of China, especially drama,
432、 that I would like to invite you to admire it.； As we all know, Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama,（现在分词）telling about two young persons moving love story.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。87.(2012年，全国课标卷）假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生
433、参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam,_Regards, Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I a
434、m interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hop
435、e I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards, Li Hua【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段自我介绍；参加意图；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。88.(
436、2012年，山东卷）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1. 参加英语角的益处；2. 坚持写英语日记的作用；3. 英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。注意：1. 词数：120-150； 2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。【答案】As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from Engl
437、ish class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved
438、 a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make more progress. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. Through these we
439、bsites, I can read some classicEnglish passages, poems and stories. Whats more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.All in all, every road leads to Roma, but 1 believe hard work pays off.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求介绍你课外学习英语的经验。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的
440、要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。象范文的I will try my best to bring what I have learnt to use.就是用了what连接的宾语从句。考点：提纲类作文点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。89.(
441、2012年，湖南卷）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.生活中.你白己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。 主要内容包括, 1)丢失的物品: 2)物品失而复得的经过; 3) 你的感想。注意：1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.【答案】 Three years ago, just before my departure with my good friend Tommy, h
442、e got me a wonderful watch as my birthday gift, which I had ever since been treasuring all the time before unfortunately I got it lost. I used to go everywhere with company of my watch pet but the other day I could go nowhere for its sign. I was so upset and depressed that I lost any desire for doin
443、g things and I could not even recall where and how I lost it. What happened next on this morning, however, almost sent my spirits flying higher than sky. Guess what? It found its way back to my dormitory, lying on my bed with a note beside it saying: Im sure its yours, so I brought it back from the
444、library assistant. Jack. Ah, my dorm mate Jack found it in the library. Can you imagine how excited I was at that moment? I must offer my thankfulness to Jack for his kindness. And I also need to reflect on my carelessness.【解析】考查提纲类作文的写作。提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。话题是物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，要点是以提纲的形式表示
445、的，要适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。he got me a wonderful watch as my birthday gift, which I had ever since been treasuring all the time before unfortunately I got it lost.这句话用了非限制性定语从句What happened next on this morning, however, almost sent my spirit
446、s flying higher than sky. Guess what?这句话是what引导的主语从句，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。90.(2012年，江西卷）某英文报社举办以 “I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动， 你打算投稿。 请根据以下要点些一篇短文：1.你为什么喜欢读书；2.你喜欢读哪一类的书（例如：历史、科学、文学等）？请给出至少两个理由。注意：词数120左右；【答案】91.(2012年，四川卷）假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语
447、学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li,Im very happy to have you as our English teacher. Thank you!Li Hua【答案】Dear Ms Li, I am very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more import
448、ant, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to m
449、emorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.Thank you!Li Hua【解析】这是一封英文稿件，写作内容包括五个主要要点：1. 对英语学习的认识；（一个要点）2. 自己目前的英语水平；（一个要点）3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；（一个要点）4. 对英语教学的两点建议。（两个要点）文章应围绕这五个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自
450、然、层次分明。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际，符合逻辑。92.(2012年，江苏卷）生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。简要描述事情的经过打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等分析发生冲突的原因1. 遇事不够冷静2. 谈谈避免冲突的做法(请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息
451、,如校名、人名等。Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.【答案】Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horribl
452、e quarrel.To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind
453、to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in othersplace.Dont be self-centered and try to be consider
454、ate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.【解析】这是一篇表格类的看图作文，要求以冲突为话题，描述给定情境，分析现象并提出建议。话题贴近时代，贴近生活，贴近学生，提示内容少，发挥空间大，考生有话可写，体现了新课标背景下的命题方向。范文思路清晰，结构合理，内容涵盖了表格内的所有要点，有适当发挥，主题得到了升华。此外，文章句式多样，有状语从句（不定式/分词做状语）、定语从句、主语从句（it做形式主语）、祈使句等；衔接词的选用增强了文章的连贯与流畅度，如：“Then” , “As a matter of fact”，“ espe
455、cially”等。93.(2011年，浙江卷）假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾（to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1. 说明写信目的；2. 对这些行为进行批评；3. 提出建议。注意：信的抬头、落款及信得第一句已给出（不计词数）。June 8 , 2011Dear Mr. Headmaster ,I am Li Yue ,a student from Class 1 ,Senior II ._ Yours faithfullyLi Yue【答案】Dear Mr Headmaster,I
456、am Li Yue, a student from Class I, Senior I. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students: Littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not app
457、ropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of
458、 both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.Yours faithfully,Li Yue分析这是一篇应用文写作。详解第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为-封电子邮件;假设你是高中生李越,有感于校园中存在的随意涂写弓(to scribble)和乱丢垃圾to ltter)的行为,请用英语给校长写- -个100词左右的邮件。邮件中应包括以下内容: 1.说明写邮件目的; 2.对这些行为进行批评; 3
459、.提出建议。第2步:根据写作要求，确定关键词(组),如: draw your attention (提醒你注意) ; improper behavior (不恰当行为) ; scribble (随意涂写) ; ltter (乱丢垃圾) ; ashamed (羞愧的) ; dustbins (垃圾箱)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行追词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡泻-定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。点睛范文内容完整语言规范语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I always feel ash
460、amed whenever I see this.运用了时间状语从句; I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior运用了宾语从句。文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另 外,文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩。94.(2011年，四川卷）最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1. 你校
461、开展课外活动的情况；2. 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处3. 为同学选择课外活动提出建议4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议注意：1.词数100左右；2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名3. 稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）After-class ActivitiesNowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. 【答案】After-class ActivitiesNowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and
462、more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.Here I have some suggestions. To students, youd better choose the activities which
463、 interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve y
464、our learning.【解析】思路点拨：这是一封英文稿件，写作内容包括五个主要要点：1。你校开展课外活动的情况；2。你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；3。为同学选择课外活动提出建议；4。为学校开展课外活动提出建议；5。鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。文章应围绕这五个要点展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次分明。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际，符合逻辑。95.(2011年，湖北卷）请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunit
465、y to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为100左右。【答案】 Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of w
466、hich teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students care little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I
467、 turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate withothers. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently.【解析】试题分析：本文属于材料作文，此类文章首先要简要概述
468、材料内容，然后就此发表议论和看法。写这种作文时考生发挥的余地较大，要根据要求明确提出观点，然后充分展开想象与联想，围绕材料展开行文。为了提高分数，写作时要注意句式的多样化和高级词汇的使用，还要使用适当的时态，此外注意字数不能少于80字。可参考词汇：I think, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, in my view。【亮点说明】作者在本篇范文中首先用一个长句Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me介绍材料内容，然后对此发表看法，不仅在结构安排上符合材料作文的写作要求，而且也完成了本文的写作要求。实际上本文的最大亮点就是涵盖信息量大的长句的使用，作者一共用了两个长句，其中包括定语从句和强调句，这充分显示了作者深厚的写作功底，此外，在本文中作者还使用了高级词汇词组in face, as a result, tired out and depressed, efficient等，这是文章的另一个亮点所在。
