1、Section 写作指导写作方法指导写一篇健康报告书写作储备阅读教材P42健康报告，提炼健康报告的写作特点。黄金写作模板健康报告书)写作语言特色使用恰当的描绘性语言，准确地表达出自己或他人在过去及现在的健康状况。写作常用词汇1slim adj. 苗条的；单薄的2weight n. 体重3diet n. 饮食4challenge v. 挑战5refreshed adj. 恢复精神的6energetic adj. 充满活力的7worry about担心8keep fit保持健康9catch a cold now and then时常感冒写作常用句型1I add healthy food to my
2、 meals. 我把健康食品加到我的饮食中。2I made a list of the things I liked about myself. 我对自己喜欢的东西列了一个清单。3By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier. 对自己和自己的身体有了积极肯定的态度后，我变得更幸福，更健康了。4I read an article that said performing tai chi would make a difference. 我读过一篇文章，上面写道打太极拳会有作用。5I
3、make it a rule to get up early. 早起成了我的一项有规律的活动。6My body is building up by working out every day. 通过天天锻炼，我的身体正在慢慢强壮起来。典例剖析请根据上面关于健康报告书的框架结构，写一篇短文。过去幼年时期，身体虚弱；经常感冒不能够正常上学转折点读到一篇关于早晨慢跑的文章现在养成早起和慢跑的习惯感到精神焕发，精力充沛身体逐步恢复；日常生活从中受益注意：词数80左右。审题谋篇定框架好的开始，成功的一半体裁健康报告书人称第一人称时态一般过去时和一般现在时框架第一段：描述过去状况第二段：现在状况第三段：总
4、结定要点、关键词及动词时态打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一：幼年时期，我身体虚弱。(weak)_When I was a little child，I was weak. _要点二：我经常感冒。(catch a cold)_I caught a cold now and then. _要点三：正常上学很困难。(动名词短语作主语；difficult)_Going to school regularly was difficult. _要点四：我读到一篇文章。(article)_I read an article. _要点五：这篇文章上说早晨慢跑有效果。(jog；make
5、a difference)_The article said jogging in the morning would make a real difference. _要点六：我起得很早；慢跑半个小时。(get up)_I get up early and jog for about half an hour. _要点七：我感到精神焕发，精力充沛。(refresh；energetic)_I feel refreshed and energetic. _要点八：通过每天锻炼，我的身体正在逐步恢复。(build up；work out)_My body is building up by wor
6、king out every day. _要点九：它对我的日常生活有极大的益处。(benefit)_It benefits my daily life greatly. _词汇、句式升级创造极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用sothat连接要点一和要点二_When I was a little child，I was so weak that I caught a cold now and then. _升级句式二：用定语从句连接要点四和要点五_I read an article，which said jogging in the morning would make a real differ
7、ence. _升级句式三：用make it a rule to改写要点六_I make it a rule to get up early and jog for about half an hour. _升级句式四：用定语从句连接要点八和要点九_My body is building up by working out every day，which benefits my daily life greatly. _组建极优作文水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉_参考范文：When I was a little child, I was so weak that I caught a cold n
8、ow and then. As a result, going to school regularly was a big challenge to me. Then I read an article, which said jogging in the morning would make a real difference. So I follow the advice and put it into practice every day. Now, I make it a rule to get up early and jog for about half an hour. Afte
9、r that, I feel refreshed and energetic. At present, my body is building up by working out every day, which benefits my daily life greatly. 即学即练你校学生会做了一个关于中学生睡眠、饮食和休闲等方面的调查，发现学生有许多不良的生活习惯。请根据以上信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文。要求如下：1简述一些坏习惯可能产生的不良影响；2呼吁广大中学生培养健康的睡眠、饮食和休闲习惯。注意：文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Lets develop a healthy lif
10、estyleAccording to a survey among middle school students, many students have the following bad habits：_ _参考范文：Lets develop a healthy lifestyleAccording to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits： staying up late; going to school without breakfast and often e
11、ating instant noodles; spending much time chatting on QQ or playing computer games. As we know, if we often stay up late, we will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrate in class. Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles will cause a lack of nutrition. Spen
12、ding too much time on QQ or computer games will do harm to our eyes. In terms of study and health, we should develop a healthy lifestyle. First, go to bed earlier instead of staying up late. Second, keep a balanced diet to build up our bodies. Third, dont spend too much time on the Internet. Actually, there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves, such as doing sports or listening to music.
