1、Correcting 6 When I was four years old I got ill. I took medicine twice a day. The medicine had so a bitter taste that I took it mixing inorange juice. The problem was that I can still taste the medicine.In a particular afternoon my mother brought the drink in. Asshe gave it to me, when the phone ra
2、ng and she went to answerit. I looked at the orange drink and decided I couldnt face them,so I hid the glass behind a pile magazines. Of course, whenmy mother was asked, “Have you already taken your medicine?”I said, Yes.” I felt very pleased with me. The next day, mymother found drink when she was
3、doing the housework. Shelooked at me serious and said, Its bad to tell lies!Correcting 7I was real nervous when I got to my new school. I grabbed our bag and walked down toward the dormitory building. With my joy, I got warm welcome, and was shown to my room. After setting down my stuff and chose my
4、 bed, I was led to the Fog room. I saw some girl sitting in the middle of the floor, played games. A girl saw me, but she said, “Pleased to meet you.” Everyone had turned around, came running at me and formed a circle around me. After a while, I sat down by Hailey, that was my first friend there.Cor
5、recting 8I have been a member of our local Community Youth Club for four years. So far I have took part in a lot of interesting projects including activity such as holiday camps and discos. We have organized different groups to help people in the need. We are particular proud of the most recent grou
6、p we have created, that organizes regular visits to the local old people homes. The old people there tell us their personal story. Some of them are in poor health but very unhappy. My friends and I make up our mind to do more to help. Because our work is tiring, we think worthwhile.Keys to exe 8:Too
7、k-taken; activity-activities; in the need- in need; particular-particularly; that-which; people-peoples; story-stories; but-and; Because-Though; 在think后加it; Correcting 9A big storm destroyed two villages in South Africa on last Friday, causing four death. Over 200 people became homeless as the resul
8、t of the storm. A farmer said the storm began early in the morning and last one hour. He said, “I was in the kitchen with my wife and children while I heard a loud noise. A few minutes late, our house fell down. I managed to climbed out, but much to my shocking, one of our boys were missing. I quick
9、ly went back inside and found them safe but frightened.” Soldiers came to rescue those burying under the ruins, and government provided food, clothes and shelters for the homeless. Correcting 10Dear SmithHow are you doing these days? I am writing to you to ask your help again. Recently I had no diff
10、iculty keeping myself busy or crossing thing off my to-do list. So I cant figure out what Ive actually accomplished. It seemed that time continues to fly by, which makes me anxious and discouraging. As you know, we are busy prepare the college entrance examination and its stressing me out. You are,
11、as usual, the first person I turn for help whenever I have any difficulty. Which you have done for me has always been of a great help. I hope you will be able to help us out again.Keys to correcting 9-10:去掉on; death-deaths; the-a; last-lasted; while-when; late-later; shocking-shock; were-was; them-him; burying-buried;Ask for your help; thing-things; so-but; seemed-seems; discouraging-discouraged; prepare-preparing; turn-turn to; which-what; 去掉of或者去掉a; us-me
