1、热点01 书面表达读后续写【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型1. 题型介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆 盖 情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。【满分技巧】（1
2、）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；（2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面： 1. 把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力； 2. 语言运用的准确性和丰富性； 3. 对语篇结构的把握能力； 4. 创造性思维能力。【热点话题】假期生活；生活小故事；哲理故事；寓言故事；学生生活。【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）A（2018年浙江省高考真题）话题：假期里发生的故事难度：建议用时
3、：7分1. It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the
4、airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul wok
5、e us up to have breakfast. The day starts at dawn on my farm, he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afterno
6、on, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Dont be late for supper, Uncle Paul crie
7、d, and keep to the track so that you dont get lost! OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked lik
8、e a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _Para
9、graph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. _【参考范文】Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the hor
10、se began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when w
11、e were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!【解析】读后续写要求考
12、生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要
13、注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。B（山东省2020年普通高等学校招生模拟卷）话题：救治流浪狗的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Thou
14、gh it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray (流浪) dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik.
15、 We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved. It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused wit
16、h what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the lite one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoi
17、d the cold air outside and it had managed toget in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took
18、him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest “Shall we keep him with us? I questioned my mom.Like a
19、ny other parents would, my parents first tally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Para. 1：One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. _Para. 2: Almost a year later, one midnight
20、 we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. _【参考范文】Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted. He came to my room and sat near me. It was then that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bleeding. I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandag
21、e around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit. After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him a lot for his courage.Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barki
22、ng breathlessly. We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere. After some time Spotty became quiet. I patted him on his back and came inside. The next day morning, my heart skipped a beat when I didnt see Spotty. I searched for him in each and every corner but he was nowher
23、e. And this time he had gone and would never come back. I cried and waited for him. We waited for one long week. But there were no signs of him. Then one day my Dad got transferred to Mumbai. We shifted back to Mumbai. What would have happened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only quest
24、ions in my mind, but they all remained unanswered forever.C（2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）话题：Abbie和 Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“What do you think about my audition(试奏) yesterday？My trill(颤音) should have been better，dont you think？” Abbie asked Mel and closed the lid of her viol
25、in case before school.“Its no big deal，Abbie，” Mel said as they walked out the door.Mel didnt have time to worry about her little sisters mood.It turned out to be a busy day.She had a test in science class.She hit two home runs in softball.After school，she and her friends talked about their summer p
26、lans.She forgot about the audition results until Abbie dragged her to the music room.Mel thought shed probably be in the first violins.Mel and Abbie found the list of names on the board.Abbie.Concertmaster.Abbie screamed，“I cant believe it！”“I cant wait to tell Mum and Dad！” Abbie rushed toward home
27、.Mel kept reading.Mel.Second violins.What？There had to be some mistake.Shed figure out tomorrow.When Mel got home，Abbie was playing her audition piece there. Music poured from Abbies bow like water from a teapotpure and perfect.And the trill sounded like a bird singing.Abbie was goodreally goodbut t
28、hat wasnt the point.“Mr Benson must have made a mistake，” Mel thought.The next morning，Mel slipped into the music room. Gathering her courage，Mel said，“Mr Benson，I want to talk to you about the orchestra(管弦乐队) seats.”“Yesyou must be proud of your sister，” Mr Benson smiled.“Abbie is a rare student.If
29、 she continues to practice hard and grow as a musician，she could become a professional.Then well look back on our little orchestra and think about how lucky we are.”注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Mel froze as there wasnt any mixup.
30、Paragraph 2：After school，Mel found Abbie on a bench outside，playing the violin. 【背诵范文】Mel froze as there wasnt any mixup. She realized she was the one whod made a mistake. Her little sister had earned the first chair through effortsand she hadnt even congratulated her. Mel walked down the hall. Most
31、 days, she spent her time thinking about softball, her classes and her friends. Every day was so full that she didnt always practice her violin while Abbie played every day. Determined to make a change, Mel decided to have a talk with Abbie.After school, Mel found Abbie on a bench outside, playing t
32、he violin. Mel made up her mind to apologize to Abbie after a brief inner struggle. She cleared her throat and started, “Im so proud that youre concertmaster. Im sorry Ive been so mean. I guess I was jealous.” Abbie was surprised.“But youre popular, Mel. You get better grades. Youre better at sports
33、. You can do everything.” Mel shook her head.“I cant make a trill like you can.” “You can if you keep practicing.” Abbie smiled and asked if Mel would like to play with her. Mel agreed delightedly.D（2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14）话题：农民Rip Van Winkle的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Once upon a time,
34、there was a farmer called Rip Van Winkle. He lived in a village in the mountains with his wife and two young children, a daughter and a son. Rip was a very happy and kind man and he got on well with all the children in the village. They loved him because he played games with them and often told them
35、 stories while he was sitting outside the “King George”, the village inn.He spend a lot of time in the inn because he was a very lazy man. Instead of working on his farm, he would go fishing or hunting, or sit in the village inn talking to his friends. His family was poor and his wife used to get an
36、gry with him. “What kind of farmer are you?” She would say. “Why dont you get down to some work, you lazy man!”After arguments with his wife, Rip always went off hunting with his dog, Wolf. One day, after another argument, Rip went further than usual in the woods and came to a beautiful valley. Sudd
37、enly, he heard a strange voice calling his name. An old man, dressed in old-fashioned clothes, was trying to carry a barrel(木桶) and asked Rip to help him. Rip agreed. They took the barrel to a cave, where there were more people, all dressed in the same strange clothes. After that, the old man gave R
38、ip a drink from the barrel. Rip immediately fell into a deep sleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1：Some time later, he woke up under a tree in the same valley. _Para2：When he got to his house, he saw that it was old and abandoned. _ 【背诵
39、范文】Compared with paper towels, hand dryers have more advantages, which will benefit school in four ways. First, they are clean and healthy because bacteria cant touch kids. Additionally, it can help school save money. Thirdly, our bathroom can be kept clean and neat. Besides, it can dry our hands mo
40、re effectively if we take longer time. Therefore, school is advisable to fix the equipment at once.(66)E（2020届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题）话题：寓言故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer was eating grass and le
41、aves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. The deer followed her fawns （幼鹿）into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tigers cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.The deer was
42、 trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture （捕捉）a tige
43、r for you to eat. You can have a good dinner.The tiger heard these words and became frightened. He thought, Whose is that strange voice from the cave? A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death. The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.A ja
44、ckal （胡狼）saw the running tiger. Why are you running in great fear? the jackal asked. The tiger said, My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away.The cunning jackal was
45、now sure the tiger was a coward （懦夫）. It said, Dont be afraid. No animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.But the tiger said, I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will not come with you.The jackal said, Trust me. Let u
46、s knot （打结）our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you. The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.Para.1The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. Para.2The tiger was shocked to hear thi
47、s and he was sure now the jackal cheated him【参考范文】The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. She again raised her voice. She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave, My dear children, I requested my friend, the clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us. Now look the jackal h
48、as captured a tiger for us. He has tied the tigers tail to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner.The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. So, the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing in
49、side his cave. He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns. In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might. His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this incident. The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tigers cave. They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.
