1、要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面(词汇、句式)、18个角度给予细化讲解。第一讲 词汇营造亮点4角度扮亮词汇(一)特别的爱给特别的你名词名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。名词的种类：普通名词专有名词可数名词不可数名词专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词个体名词集体名词物质名词抽象名词典题1(一般词)Now we have a chance to develop a greater understanding of
2、 each other.(高级词)Now we have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。典题2(一般词)There are four basic choices; they are described briefly below.(高级词)There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.有四个基本的选择，简述如下。高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇机会 c
3、hanceopportunity选择 choicealternative课程 coursecurriculum影响 effectinfluence/impact后果 resultconsequence缺点 shortcomingdrawback方法wayapproach职业careerprofession建议adviceguidance老人old peoplethe old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens青少年young peopleyoungsters/youths/adolescents几天前a few days agothe other day一
4、个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper waya wellbehaved child专题过关训练先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。As_a_result,_I dont have enough time to take exercise.(result)As_a_consequence,_I dont have enough time to take exercise.2所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_th
5、e_course.(course)All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_curriculum.3他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_effect_on_the_future of_the_country.(effect)They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_impact/influence_on_the_future_of_the_c
6、ountry.4(2018全国卷书面表达)最重要的是，老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。Most importantly, old_people_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)Most importantly, the_old/the_elderly/the_aged/senior_citizens_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the fo
7、od served on the table because they are well respected in China.5(2018天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_chance_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_advice.(chance, advice)Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golde
8、n_opportunity_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_guidance.6在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_careers are held by women.(career)Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_professions are held by women.7激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。These_young_people_are_motivated not by
9、 a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.(young people)These_youngsters/youths/adolescents_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.8我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。We will be exploring different_ways_to_gather_information.(way)We will be exploring different_approaches_to_gathering_inform
10、ation.扮亮词汇(二)炫酷亮闪你的眼动词(短语)动词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类，分别是：及物动词(Transitive Verb)、不及物动词(Intransitive Verb)，缩写形式分别为vt.和vi.。典题1(一般词)He likes playing football, which is his favourite.(高级词)He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite.他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。典题2(一般词)As for me, I believe that the number of touris
11、ts should be limited for the following reasons.(高级词)As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇看见seecatch sight of遇见meetcome across引起causelead to/result in/give rise to拥有havepossess提高develop/i
12、mprovepromote替代replacesubstitute面对facebe faced with容忍bearput up with处理do withdeal with/cope with决定decidedetermine/make up ones mind考虑considertake into account/consideration应该shouldbe supposed to理解understandmake sense of/figure out使用useemploy/make use of/take advantage of道歉apologizemake an apology记住r
13、ememberkeep in mind发生happenoccur/come about想起think ofoccur to/come up with感谢thankappreciate帮助某人help sb.do sb.a favor节省saveset aside参观visittour/pay a visit to分发hand outdistribute站起来stand upget to ones feet习惯于be used tobe accustomed to一定be sure tobe bound to为做准备prepare formake preparations for/be prep
14、ared for反对be againstobject to厌烦be bored withbe fed up with/be tired of忙于be busy in (with)be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in闻名be famous forhave a reputation for感到舒服feel comfortablefeel at ease美化学校make the school beautifulbeautify the school置若罔闻refuse to listen toturn a deaf ear to成功做某事s
15、ucceed in doing sth.make it想做某事want to do sth.seek/intend/desire to do sth.照看look afterattend to尽力做某事try ones best to do sth.spare no effort to do sth.向某人寻求帮助ask someone for helpturn to sb.for help我认为I thinkin my opinion/as far as Im concerned专题过关训练.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分put up with， consist of， be devo
16、ted to， make use of， fix ones eyes upon1The little boy looked at the picture on the wall.fixed_his_eyes_upon2The small group has six people.consists_of3She was afraid she couldnt bear the pain.put_up_with4All his life was given to the Partys educational cause.was_devoted_to5We will use her vast expe
17、rience.make_use_of.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1(20186月浙江高考写作)I will be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.give_me_a_kind_consideration2(2016北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with3(2015湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than
18、waste precious time on those useless things.made_up_my_mind4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.promote5Would you please help me to turn down the radio？do_me_a_favor6Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.gives_rise_to7Wh
19、en you are bored with the people sometimes, youd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.fed_up_with8So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_to.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子1几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。I purchased_a_cellphone_at_your_store the other day.(buy)2更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致
20、进攻性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。Whats worse, violent video games can_lead_to/result_in_aggressive_behaviours,_which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)3所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。All the visitors were_requested_not_to_throw_litter_about in the park.(ask)4或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。Maybe we can_come_up_with_a_better_solut
21、ion_to_the_problem.(think of)5我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。Well_spare_no_effort_to_catch_up_with the developed industrial countries.(try ones best)6我们应该尝试彻底解决这个问题。We should_make_an_attempt/attempt_to_thoroughly_solve_this_problem.(try)扮亮词汇(三)浓妆淡抹总相宜形容词(短语)形容词是很多语言中均有的主要词类中的一种。形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词主
22、要用来修饰名词和代词。典题1(一般词)Sports are helpful to building our bodies.(高级词)Sports are beneficial to building our bodies.体育运动有益于增强我们的体质。典题2(一般词)He is an excellent scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.他
23、是一位杰出的科学家，对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。高中阶段常见的形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇令人惊奇的surprisingamazing/astonishing/shocking贫穷的poorneedy/povertystricken优秀的excellentoutstanding明显的obviousapparent/evident常见的commonuniversal充足的enoughadequate勤奋的hardworkingdiligent可用的useableavailable困难的difficultchallenging坚强的strongtough重要的importantvital/sig
24、nificant不可能的impossibleout of the question有趣的interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing小心谨慎的carefulcautious幸运的luckyfortunate巨大的largeenormous合适的properappropriate丰富的richabundant古老的oldancient唯一的onlyunique全部的wholeentire富裕的richwealthy有意义的meaningfulrewarding许多的manya large quantity of有吸引力的attractiveappealing有空
25、的freeavailable有益处的be usefulbe of benefit不同种类的different/kinds ofa variety of/various高兴的gladdelighted激动的excitedthrilled 专题过关训练.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1(2018天津高考书面表达)The training schedule, apart from regular training, includes joining in various activities, such as participating in some national competitions.
26、a_variety_of2(2017全国卷书面表达)I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.more_than_delighted3(2016全国卷书面表达)I should be free any time after school next week.available4In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.challenging5Developing a good habit is also very important.of_gre
27、at_importance/significance6I was excited when I heard the good news.thrilled 7She is energetic, clever and lively.intelligent8To our great glad, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.delighted,_appealing,_abundant.用所给形容词的高级词汇补全句子1我的同桌是一个动人的、文雅的
28、女孩。My deskmate is a_charming/attractive_and_elegant_girl.(beautiful)2我的薪水不够维持一家的生活。My salary is_not_adequate_to_support_my_family.(enough)3改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。Changing this situation requires_enormous_effort on the part of everyone.(large)4她是一位辛勤的老师，她工作非常勤奋。She is a_diligent_teacher and she is_dilige
29、nt_in_her_work.(hardworking)5所获得的经验对我们有很大价值。The experience gained will_be_of_great_value_to_us.(valuable)6我的手机非常有用。My mobile phone is_of_great_benefit.(useful)7由于夜里休息不好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。Not sleeping well, I always feel_exhausted in class.(tired)8学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。Learning English well is_significant/vital_
30、to_your_future_employment.(important)扮亮词汇(四)不想太低调，副词及其他词放大招大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级词汇，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉，从而可以提高文章的得分档次。典题1(一般词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be very glad to help.(高级词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to hel
31、p.如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意帮忙。典题2(一般词)He comes to our room for a chat sometimes.(高级词)He comes to our room for a chat once in a while/occasionally.他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。高中阶段常见的副词及其他写作高级词汇突然suddenlyall of a sudden立即 immediatelyin a flash有时sometimesoccasionally/once in a while/from time to time另外；况且besidesin addition/wh
32、ats more/moreover因此sotherefore第一，首先 firstto begin/start with第二，其次 secondin addition/whats more最终 finallyeventually和，也andas well as大多数mostthe majority许多 a lot ofa large quantity/amount of/endless完成finishaccomplish事实上in factas a matter of fact/actually也tooas well几天前a few days agothe other day故意 on pur
33、posedeliberately/by design因为 because ofon account of/due to/owing to/thanks to总之 in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary由构成be made up ofconsist of越来越多more and morean increasing number of否则orotherwise/or else应当shouldbe supposed to如果ifsuppose/supposing/on condition that即将到来coming soonaround/round
34、the corner使某人意识到make sb. realizeraise sb.s awareness of专题过关训练.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1(2018浙江高考写作)And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective and improve my spoken English.as_well_as2(2017全国卷书面表达)In fact, I am very fond of Tang poems.Actually3A few days ago, I went out and I almost had
35、 an accident.The_other_day4You must have noticed how tired he sometimes looks.occasionally/once_in_a_while5The most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.majority 6As high school students, we should be neatly dressed at school.are_supposed_to.用所给词的高级词汇补全句子1我们的人口在增长，因此
36、我们需要更多的食物。We have a growing population and therefore_we_need_more_food.(so)2抓住这个机会，否则你会后悔的。Seize the chance, otherwise/or_else_youll_regret_it.(or)3这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加，而且业余运动员也可以参加。The tournament is open to amateurs_as_well_as_professionals.(and)4第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。Thirdly, you say that there is a d
37、iscount suppose/supposing_(that)_I_pay_in_advance.(if)5我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。I like playing football and I_enjoy_swimming_as_well.(too).请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容包括：1自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；2发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；4对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1
38、.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building考生作文Dear Jason，Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing fast duri
39、ng the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been built, with highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful city.But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in r
40、ush hours and serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on peoples daily life.I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in the future.Yours，Li Hua升格作文Dear Jason，Im more_than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home cit
41、y London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been set_up,_with highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.An_increasing
42、_number_of schools and hospitals are available for the native people.It is developing into a modern and attractive/charming city.However,_there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence/impact on peoples daily life.In_my_opinion/As_far_as_I_am_concerned,_Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in the future.Yours，Li Hua
