1、Section 写作指导写作方法指导 地点描写写作储备阅读P44课文，总结关于描写地点类文章的注意事项。.地点描写的格式1一个让人惊讶的开头；2详实的主体段落；3回味无穷的结尾。.地点描写的架构.地点描写的语言特点1surprisingmake the readers eager to read your writing(新颖性，令人惊讶的)2use sensory details(使用感官性的细节)3give examples(给出例子)4inviting(吸引人的).地点描写的常用词汇1be located/lies in.位于2cover an area of.占地3with a his
2、tory of.有的历史4date back to/from.追溯到5the most popular tourist attraction最受欢迎的景点6places of interest名胜7enjoy great popularity深受欢迎8attract vt. 吸引9feature n. 特色10be worth doing值得做11make sb. unwilling to leave使某人流连忘返.地点描写的常用句型(一)基本信息1It is located/lies in., with an area of.2It covers an area of.，with a his
3、tory of.3.，located in. and covering an area of., is one of Chinas most famous scenic spots.4The history of. dates back to.5It has become the most popular tourist attraction since.(二)特色1There are many places of interest, such as.2You can enjoy., which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.3Wi
4、th., . is/are attracting more and more tourists.4An interesting feature of. is.5With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and beautiful scenery, . is one of Chinas major tourist cities.6A trip along. will enable you to get to know.(三)总结陈述1.is well worth visiting.2.is a place you have to visi
5、t and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.典例剖析假设你是河源市的李华，你市为吸引国外游客，拟制作英文版河源旅游宣传手册，并公开征稿。请根据下面信息，用英语写一篇短文应征。1位于广州的东北方向，离广州约198千米。2由五个县组成，人口约324万。3历史悠久，名胜众多；万绿湖(Wanlu Lake)景色优美；湖水清澈；鱼类繁多。4博物馆中有各种恐龙蛋化石(fossil)，吸引了来自全世界的游客。注意：词数80左右。审题谋篇.定框架好的开始，成功的一半体裁地点说明文人称第三人称为主时态一般现在时为主框架第一段：总体介
6、绍；第二段：详细介绍其各个方面的特点；第三段：发出邀请.定要点、关键词及动词时态打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一：河源市由五个县组成。(主谓结构)The_city_of_Heyuan_consists_of_5_counties.要点二：它大约有3 240 000人口。(主谓宾结构)It_has_a_population_of_about_3,240,000.要点三：河源市有许多名胜。(There be句型；places of interest)There_are_many_places_of_interest_in_Heyuan.要点四：万绿湖是其中一个典型。(主系表
7、结构；one of.；outstanding)Wanlu_Lake_is_one_of_outstanding_examples.要点五：湖水清澈，鱼类繁多。(so.that.；a variety of)The_water_there_is_so_clean_that_there_are_a_variety_of_fishes_in_it.要点六：有很多恐龙蛋化石。(There be句型)There_are_many_dinosaur_egg_fossils.要点七：它们在当地博物馆中展出。(被动语态；display)They_are_displayed_in_the_local_museum
8、.要点八：它们吸引了来自全世界的游客。(主谓宾结构；from every corner of the world)They_attract_visitors_from_every_corner_of_the_world.词汇、句式升级创造极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用现在分词短语作定语连接要点一和二The_city_of_Heyuan,_consisting_of_5_counties,_has_a_population_of_about_3,240,000.升级句式二：用one example of which引导定语从句连接要点三和四There_are_many_places_of_in
9、terest_in_Heyuan,_one_example_of_which_is_Wanlu_Lake.升级句式三：用倒装句改写要点五So_clean_is_the_water_there_that_there_are_a_variety_of_fish_in_it.升级句式四：用句型“There ben.过去分词作定语现在分词作结果状语”改写要点六、七和八There_are_many_dinosaur_egg_fossils_displayed_in_the_local_museum,_attracting_visitors_from_every_corner_of_the_world.组
10、建极优作文水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉_参考范文：Heyuan, with a long history, lies to the northeast of Guangzhou, from which it is about 198 kilometers away. The city of Heyuan, consisting of 5 counties, has a population of about 3,240,000. There are many famous places of interest in Heyuan, one example of which is Wanlu L
11、ake, an inviting tourist destination. So clean is the water there that there are a variety of fishes in it. In addition, there are many dinosaur egg fossils displayed in the local museum, attracting visitors from every corner of the world.Why not give it a try? Your trip to Heyuan is sure to be enjo
12、yable and worthwhile.即学即练假设你是丽江市某中学的学生李华。你市为吸引国外游客，拟制作英语版丽江古城旅游宣传手册，并公开征稿。请你根据表格中所给提示信息，用英语写一篇短文应征。景点概况位于云南省西北部，是纳西族人的聚居地特色1.拥有大量土木结构的房屋、鹅卵石道路，以及许多明清时期的石桥和拱门2宗教壁画和东巴文化历史悠久，风格迥异注意：词数80左右。参考词汇：鹅卵石pebble；拱门archway_参考范文：The Old Town of LijiangThe Old Town of Lijiang, located in the northwest of Yunnan P
13、rovince, is an ancient town where the Naxi people live. Most of the houses are made of earth and wood. The roads in the town are covered with coloured pebbles produced in Lijiang, and there are many stone bridges and archways built during the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Wandering in the town, you can see many religious wallpaintings and experience the traditional Dongba Culture which is totally different and amazing.Why not give it a try? The extraordinary view and unique culture of the Old Town of Lijiang will make you unwilling to leave.
