1、海安市2022届高三期中学业质量检测试卷英语注意事项:1.本试卷满分150分。 考试时间120分钟。2. 答题前，务必将自己的学校、姓名、考试号等相关信息写在答题卡上规定的地方。3.回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑，如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上，写在 本试试卷上无效，第一部分听力 (共两节，满分30分)做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分，满分7.5分)听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题， 从题中所给的A、 B、C三
2、个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10 秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读遍。1. What did the man do yesterday?A. He played music.B. He watched a competition.C. He practiced running in the track.2. What did the woman order for lunch?A. Fries. B. A sandwich. C. Mushroom soup.3. What kind of movie does the man want to watch?A
3、. An action movie. B. A comedy. C. A horror film.4. Why is the man in a hurry?A. He is rushing home.B. He is late for a meeting.C. He is doing the running exercise.5. What does the woman mean?A. She thinks the man told a lie.B. She believes it was dangerous for the man.C. She feels sorry about the m
4、ans experience.第二节(共15小题; 每小题1.5分, 满分22.5分)听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听年段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题, 每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。6. How many daily things did the woman do yesterday?A. Three B. Four C. Five7. Where does the man need to go today?A. To the bank. B.
5、To the supermarket. C. To the post office.听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。8. According to the man, what do you know about his wife?A. She is fond of shopping.B. She is only likes certain things.C. She works in a department store.9. What color did the man want?A. Black. B. Brown C. Blue.10. What did the man buy?A. A
6、 scarf. B. A pair of gloves. C. A sweater.听第8段材料，回答第11至13题。11. Which state does the woman think had the best weather?A South Carolina. B. Geogia. C. North Carolina.12. How many types of fish did the woman catch?A. One. B. Two C. Three.13. When might the woman go back to fish next time?A. On July. B.
7、 In October. C. In December.听第9段材料，回答第14至16题。14. What is the probable relationship between the speakers?A. Colleagues. B. Teacher and student. C. Parent and child.15. What does the woman suggest the man do?A. Save all the work for the final week.B. Use the trip time to study for the exams.C. Form go
8、od habits and get started early.16. What are the speakers mainly talk about?A. A research paper.B. The classroom management.C. The plan for the end of term.听第10段材料，回答第17至20题。17. What did the customer think of the first fries?A. They were unsatisfying.B. They were delicious.C. They were salty.18. Why
9、 did George Crum serve the customer extremely thin fries?A. He wanted the customer to be happy.B. He was bothered by the customers requests.C. He wanted to try making a new style of fries.19. How did the customer react to the last plate of fries?A. He found them nice.B. He refused to eat them.C. He
10、complained to the chef.20. What did George Crum do with his new invention?A. He sold the chips in stores.B. He sold the recipe to his customer.C. He sold the snack idea to other restaurants.第二部分 阅读理解(共两节, 满分50分)第一节(共15小题; 每小题2.5分, 满分37.5分)阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。A4 Study and Homework Apps f
11、or Android!BrainlyPrice：Free/$15per 3 months/$24 per yearBrainly is a social network for learners. You sign up, ask questions, and get answers (usually). Additionally, you can browse the site, answer other peoples questions, and help them out as well. They charge on a quarter basis ($15) or a yearly
12、 basis ($24).ForestPrice: Free/Up to $1.99Forest is a different type of app. One of the biggest distractions during study is your smartphone. Forest helps put a stop to that. You open the app and a tree grows. The tree dies if you leave the app. Thus, there is a little motivation to leave the thing
13、alone while you study or do homework.Google Play BooksPrice: Free app, book costs vary Google Play Books is an excellent source of learning material. Sometimes your textbook just isnt enough and apps like this have plenty of additional resources. Books cost money obviously. However, you only pay for
14、 them once. Books are available offline on your smartphone or tablet.QuizletPrice: Free/$19.99 per year Quizlet is one of the most popular flashcard apps for language learning. You can create flashcards play memory games, and even share flashcards with classmates. It also supports 18 languages for a
15、bout any subject or topic. The free version should work just fine for simple uses, though. The premium version costs $19.99 per year, which isnt expensive for a study aid.21. What is special about Forest?A. It answers your questions.B. It helps keep you focused.C. It provides textbooks for your stud
16、y.D. It motivates you to plant more trees.22. Which app can you choose to learn languages?A. Brainy B. Forest C. QuizletD. Google Play Books23. What do these apps have in common?A. They have enough learning resources. B. They are designed to do homework quickly. C. They have no advertisements D. The
17、y charge for some services.BAfter braving wind, snow, and dizzying heights in the mountains, a dog named Mera may have broken a world record without even knowing it. She began following a group of climbers who were getting ready to climb up to the top of Mount Baruntse in Nepal-it stands just south
18、of Mount Qomolangma at 23, 389 feet tall. Mera was easily frightened when the climbers first met her down in the village of Khare, so they were shocked when she suddenly bounded up next to them while they were coming down another mountain at 17, 000 feet. Mera had passed dozens of other climbers tha
19、t she could have pleased, and focused her eyes on the leader of this month-long expedition, Seattle-based Don Wargowsky. In no time they were like peas and carrots. Don happily shared his sleeping bag, tent, and meals with his new companion while the crew was hiking to the Mount Baruntse Base Camp o
20、ver the next two weeks. When it finally came time to depart from the base camp and begin their climb up the mountain, Don knew the walk was not easy for a dog, so he tied her up near the camp. She kept barking as we walked away, said Don. “Half an hour into our climb I felt a tickle(发痒）on the back o
21、f my knee. I looked down and saw Mera following right behind me just like before. After reaching the last mountain camp before the summit, the climbing crew left Mera sleeping in Dons tent with the hope that she would not try to follow them up the steep climb. Don was then surprised when he later tu
22、rned around at 22, 000 feet in order to take a photo only to see Mera climbing towards them slowly. Finally, after a long climb, they reached the summit and took photos celebrating the first dog to top Mount Baruntse. 24. What was true about Mera when the climbers first met her?A. She had just broke
23、n a world record. B. The heights of the mountains dizzied her. C. Clearly it was easy for her to be scared. D. She bounded up next to them now and then. 25. The sentence they were like peas and carrots in Paragraph 2 suggests that_.A. they preferred peas and carrotsB. they got along very well togeth
24、er C.they knew how to survive the cold D. they were faithful climbing lovers26. The climbers left Mera sleeping in Dons tent because_.A. it was difficult to wake her upB. the climb was more dangerous for her C. she was too weak to go on climbingD. she kept troubling them on the way27. Which words ca
25、n best describe Mera?A. Poor but lovely. B. Strong and helpful. C. Smart but noisy. D. Brave and determined. CTime and how we experience it have always puzzled us. Physicists have created fascinating theories, but their time is measured by a pendulum (钟摆) and is not psychological time, which leaps w
26、ith little regard to the clock or calendar. As someone who understood the distinction observed, When you sit with a nice girl for two hours it seems like a minute, but when you sit on a hot stove, a minute seems like two hours. Psychologists have long noticed that larger units of time, such as month
27、s and years, fly on swifter wings as we age. They also note that the more time is structured with schedules and appointments, the more rapidly it seems to pass. For example, a day at the office flies compared with a day at the beach. Expectation and familiarity also make time seem to flow more rapid
28、ly. Almost all of us have had the experience of driving somewhere weve never been before. Surrounded by unfamiliar scenery, with no real idea of when well arrive, we experience the trip as if lasting a long time. But the return trip, although exactly as long, seems to take far less time. The novelty
29、 of the outward journey has become routine. When days become as identical as beads(小珠子)on a string, they mix together, and even months become a single day. To counter this, try to find ways to interrupt the structure of your day-to stop time, so to speak. Learning something new is one of the ways to
30、 slow the passage of time. One of the reasons the days of our youth seems so full and long is that these are the days of learning and discovery. For many of us, learning ends when we leave school, but this doesnt have to be. 28. What is the underlined sentence in Paragraph 1 is used to show?A. physi
31、cal theory has nothing to do with the true sense of time B. physical time is different from psychological time C. time should not be measured by a pendulumD. psychological time is quite puzzling29.Which of the following will make you feel time flies faster? A. A day spent exploring something unknown
32、.B. Staying with a person who you dislike.C. A day packed with appointments to handle.D. Driving to a new place for the first time. 30. What does novelty in Paragraph 3 probably means?A. amusementB. excitementC. imaginationD. unfamiliarity31. What is the purpose of the passage?A. To explain why time
33、 flies and how to slow it down psychologicallyB. To describe how we experience time psychologicallyC. To show the different ideas of physicists and psychologists on timeD. To give various explanations about timeDFor many businesses, the Internet has created benefits that go beyond their wildest drea
34、ms. It has reduced the costs of advertising and increased visibility for companies all over the world. Such freedom of access to information has a dark side, though, and many businesses are learning about the hard way.These days, if you want to find a particular shop, just type in the name of the pl
35、ace youre looking for on Google Maps to get directions instantly. You can also get information about hours of operation, the businesss telephone number, and more.Unfortunately, some dishonest folks are using dirty tricks to manipulate（暗中控制）the system and deceive users. The problem exists because Goo
36、gle Maps is partly a crowdsourced undertaking, meaning anyone can enter information about a business whether it is true or false. All dishonest competitors have to do is enter a fake address, incorrect business hours, or any other lie about their competitors.Google Maps is also littered with thousan
37、ds of businesses that dont even exist. Clicking on their links directs users to ill-intentioned sites. One particular group of businesses that have been taken over by liars almost completely are locksmiths. A large percentage of them are illegal businesses that arent licensed. These dishonest artist
38、s know how vulnerable you are, and they only take cash.Using Google Maps isnt the only way that businesses are waging war against one another on the Internet. Some shady businesses post fake negative reviews of their competitors on websites such as Yelp. It is so common that it can be difficult to t
39、ell the genuine reviews from the fake ones.Crowdsourcing allows us to find out the good and the bad about businesses. Unfortunately, the fake reviews and the cheat make finding reliable businesses online far less convenient. For business owner, being the victims of effective cyber-attacks can actual
40、ly be nails in their coffins.32. The benefit of using the Internet for business listed in the passage is _.A. making it cheaper to promote ones companyB. making it easier for customers to contact ones companyC. making it convenient for one to communicate with clientsD. making it simpler for one to f
41、ind top-quality employees33. According to the article, we know about Google Maps that _.A. it provides a filter system to tell registered businesses from fake ones.B. it is hard for users to manipulate information without permissionC. it will easily make users become virus-infectedD. it is difficult
42、 to find a legal locksmith on there34. What does “nails in their coffins” mean in the final paragraph?A. The businesses will start to take off.B. The businesses will go out of business.C. The businesses will need to advertise less often.D. The businesses will need to invest more money.35. What is th
43、e main idea of this article?A. The Internet has caused a lot of trouble for some businesses.B. The Internet has resulted in the death of traditional businesses.C. The Internet creates both benefits and problems for businesses.D. The Internet has brought more positive than negative results for busine
44、ss.第二节(共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分)阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。What is culture?Culture is too complex to define in simple terms. _36_ One is that culture is a total pattern of behaviour that is consistent in its components. Another fundamental is that culture is learned behaviour. The third i
45、s that culture is behaviour that is shared by a group of people.To understand the culture of a particular country or region, one could examine its components, among which are material culture, language, and social organization. Material culture includes the tools and symbols in a society, not includ
46、ing those physical things found in nature, unless they have undergone some change or have been given meaning by people. _37_ The way we consume and what we consume are heavily influenced by material culture._38_ Linked with all other aspects of culture, it reflects the nature and values of that cult
47、ure. Industrialized societies have a rich vocabulary for commercial and industrial activities, while less industrialized societies may have richer vocabularies for matters important to their societies. The Eskimos in Alaska have many words to describe snow whereas English has only one general term.S
48、ocial organization differs somewhat from society to society. The primary kind of community association is based on blood ties. _39_ It provides mutual protection, psychological support and a kind of economic insurance or social security for its members. The term brothers in Zaire includes those whom
49、 we call cousins and uncles.Cultural analysis serves a variety of purposes. Understanding the various dimensions and their inter-relatedness helps promote cross-cultural awareness. _40_A. Language is the most obvious difference between cultures.B. Some scholars even suggest that it is useless to try
50、.C. The values represented within a culture can also change with the passing of time.D. However, there are certain agreed-on fundamentals that can be easily identified.E. In many developing countries, the extended family fulfils several social and economic roles.F. For example, a mouse running on a
51、street is not part of a culture, but the Mickey Mouse is.G. It leads on to the promotion of goodwill, social and economic planning and harmony between social groupings or societies.第三部分语言运用(共两节，满分30分)第一节(共15小题;每小题1分，满分15分)阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、 C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。When Matthew Shifrin turned 13, he go
52、t a life-changing birthday present from his friend, Lilya Finkel.It was an 843-piece Middle Eastern _41_ palace. And with it were instructions that Finkel made_42_for it. Finkel invented a unique name for every piece in the palace set. Then she spent countless hours typing building_43_in Braille (盲文
53、) that spelled out how to_44_them all together. His mind was_45_.As a blind person, he had never before been able to complete a Lego set on his own. Shifrin knew immediately that he had to help other blind children find the same_46_. Shifrin says, “For blind people, Lego sets act as small 3D_47_for
54、real-life buildings instead of two-dimensional photographs. Lego bricks allow me to see things that are_48_ to explore by touch.” For years after that incredible Lego experience, he created similar instructions for about 45 other Lego sets, together with Finkel, all published on a website they creat
55、ed, “Lego for the_49_.” Shifrin began_50_to Lego several years ago to discuss his work, _51_it was in 2017, when Finkel died of cancer, that he finally connected with the right person. His years-long devotion_52_when the Lego company released its first audio and Braille building instructions. The pr
56、oject is a high-tech version of what Shifrin and Finkel did for their_53_. It couldnt have been completed without Shifrins_54_or without his determination. He just wished Finkel had been here to see it. “I think shed be very glad that we came this_55_.” Shifrin said. 41. A. wood B. Lego C. paper D.
57、puzzle42. A. directly B. cautiously C. especially D. regularly43. A. regulations B. instructions C. requirementsD. competence44. A. fit B. fix C. mix D. gather45. A. shocked B. challenged C. troubled D. eased46. A. truth B. independence C. balance D. connection47. A. substitutes B. designs C. patter
58、ns D. arrangements48. A. natural B. easy C. impossible D. normal49. A. Young B. Inventive C. Curious D. Blind50. A. reaching out B. hiring himself out C. catching on D. looking up51. A. so B. and C.but D. though52. A. made up B. took off C. got through D. paid off53. A. website B. company C. school
59、D. friends54.A. encouragementB. involvement C. preparation D. recommendation55. A. deep B. long C.far D. fast第二节(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。While its _56_ (absolute) natural and normal for humans to want routine, theres much to be discovered out of our comfort zones. When we
60、 begin to see things differently around us, we can open _57_ (us) to new _58_ (possible) and new opportunities and clear out fear. Its usually, the fear, or the energy of the fear, that is greater than _59_ we actually have to do and change.Its never too late to change your life. It is especially tr
61、ue to Scott Sharon, _60_ 54-year-old man like Saint Charles. Saint Charles, who _61_ (weigh) 360 pounds in his forties, lost more than 180 pounds after struggling with obesity for several years. Scott didnt want to spend his whole life being sad, depressed and obese. He couldnt stand it anymore and
62、he knew _62_ he didnt change, he was going to die. He wanted to be happy, healthy and full of love and life. From that aspect, he started on his journey to change how his mind thought and worked. He walked away from his real estate career to commit his life to _63_ (help) others change their lives a
63、nd overcome their challenges. He became a public speaker. That was 15 years ago and he is now _64_ the best physical, mental and_65_ (spirit) condition. He is now 175 pounds and his life and career is helping people create and live out their dreams.第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)假如你叫李华，你的英语老师Peter
64、在你因病住院期间经常在线辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难，请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾帮助；3. 邀请来中国游玩。注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右:2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_Yours,Li Hua第二节(满分25分)67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling ha
65、rd to make our needs meet.One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.On impulse(冲动) I determined to find the owner myse
66、lf. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.“Yes,” she said in surprise, with extreme excitement. “It was my umbrel
67、la which had been stolen a year ago.”So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving (找回)
68、this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen
69、dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the
70、evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.Thinking of this, I couldnt control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demandin
71、g desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.注意:（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经给出Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.答案解析阅读理解21-23 BCD【解析】本文是一
72、篇应用文。介绍了四个安卓系统的学习应用程序。21. 细节理解题。根据Forest部分中“One of the biggest distractions during study is your smartphone. Forest helps put a stop to that.(学习时最大的干扰之一就是你的智能手机。Forest有助于阻止发生这种情况)”可知，Forest的特别之处是能够帮助你集中注意力。故选B。22. 细节理解题。根据最后一段中“Quizlet is one of the most popular flashcard apps for language learning.
73、( Quizlet是最受欢迎的语言学习抽认卡应用程序之一)”可知，Quizlet是为语言学习者设计的。故选C。23. 细节理解题。根据第一段中的“Price: Free/15per3months/24 per year(价格：免费/3个月15美元/每年24美元)”；第二段中“Price: Free/Up to 1.99(价格：免费/最高1.99美元)”；第三段中“Price:Freeapp,bookcostsvary(价格：免费的应用程序，书的价格不同)”及第四段中“Price:Free/19.99 per year(价格：免费/$19.99每年)”等信息可知，这四个应用程序的共同点是都要收取
74、一些服务费。故选D。24-27 BBBD28-31 BCDA32-35 BDBC36-40 DFAEG完形填空语篇解读:主题语境人与自我话题盲人乐高这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了盲人Matthew Shifrin和他的朋友Lilya Finkel共同为盲人制作乐高拼装说明,文章说明了这一想法开始的原因,以及他们为之付出的多年努力。此话题启示我们要关怀弱势群体和坚持梦想。41.BLego乐高积木;wood木材;paper纸;puzzle智力游戏。结合后文As a blind person, Shifrin had never before been able to complete a Lego s
75、et on his own.可知,这是一座由843件积木组成的中东乐高宫殿。故选B。42.Cdirectly直接地;especially专门,特别;cautiously谨慎地;regularly定期地。结合后文可知,说明书是盲文的,是Finkel专门为这个积木制作的。故选C。43.B句意:然后她花了无数个小时用盲文输入拼装说明,用来解释如何将它们拼装在一起。regulations规则;competence技能;requirements要求;instructions说明。结合上文And with it were instructions that Finkel made可知,Finkel花费了无
76、数个小时输入拼装说明。故选B。44.B句意见上题解析。mix混合;fix修理;fit组装,安装;gather聚集。有了盲文的拼装说明盲人才知道如何将这些积木安装在一起。故选B。45.Ashocked吹;challenged挑战;troubled麻烦;eased放松。结合后文Shifrin意识到他的这一举动可以帮助其他盲人儿童获得独立性可知Shifrin因此变得兴奋起来。固定短语shock ones mind意思为“使某人感到极度激动或兴奋”。故选A。46.Btruth真理;connection连接;balance平衡;independence独立。结合上文As a blind person,
77、Shifrin had never before been able to complete a Lego set on his own.可知,Shifrin意识到自己的行为能够帮助盲人儿童独立,即可以在没有人的帮助下拼好积木。故选B。47.A句意:对于盲人来说,乐高积木是现实生活中建筑物的小型3D替代品,而不是二维照片。patterns模式;designs设计; substitutes替代;arrangements安排。故选A。48.Cnatural自然的;impossible不可能的;easy容易的;normal正常的。结合上文for real-life buildings可知,这些积木是
78、现实生活中建筑物的替代品,可以帮助盲人“看到”不可能靠触摸就能看见的东西。故选C。49.D句意:在那次不可思议的乐高体验之后的很多年里,他和Finkel一起为另外的大约45套乐高玩具制作了类似的说明,这些说明都发布在他们创建的网站“盲人乐高”(Lego For the Blind)上。Young年轻的;Blind失明的;Curious好奇的;Inventive有发明才能的。故选D。50.A句意:几年前,Shifrin开始接触乐高积木,讨论他的作品,但直到2017年,Finkel死于癌症,他才终于找到了合适的人。reaching out接触; hiring himself out应聘；catch
79、ing on流行，理解；looking up查找。结合后文to Lego several years ago可知几年前,Shifrin就开始接触乐高积木了。故选A。51.C句意见上题解析。but但是;and并且;so因此;though虽然。根据上下文语境可知为转折关系应用but。故选C。52.D句意:当乐高公司发布了第一个音频和盲文建筑说明时,他多年的奉献得到了回报。made up编造;took off起飞;got through通过;paid off得到回报,付清。故选D。53.A句意:这个项目是Shifrin和Finkel为他们的网站所做的一个高科技版本。company公司;website
80、网站;school学校;friends朋友。结合上文all published on a website they created, “Lego for the Blind.”可知这个项目是Shifrin和Finkel为他们的网站所做的一个高科技版本。故选A。54.B句意:没有Shifrin的参与,没有他的决心,这一切都不可能完成。encouragement鼓励;preparation准备;involvement参与;recommendation推荐。结合上文Shifrin为这些积木输入盲文可知,Shifrin参与了盲人乐高的制作,故选B。55.C句意:“我想她会很高兴我们走了这么远,”Shi
81、frin说。far遥远地;long长期地;deep深深地;fast快地。结合上文Shifrin和Finkel所做的盲人乐高积木最终得到了乐高公司的认可,他们为之付出了多年的努力得到了回报可知,去世的Finkel也会为他们走到今天这么远而高兴。故选C。语法填空56. absolutely 57. ourselves 58. possibilities 59. what 60. a61. weighed 62. if 63. helping 64. being 65. spiritual应用文写作【答案】Dear Peter,Im writing to express my gratitude t
82、o you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.Undoubtedly, without your help with my English online every day, I couldnt have made my English study go smoothly as usual. And its your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to dea
83、l with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip where you can witness in person the perfect combination of culture and nature.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第一步：假如你叫李华，你的英语老师 Peter在你因病住院
84、期间经常在线辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难，请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回顾帮助；3.邀请来中国游玩。第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)：write to(写信给)；in hospital(生病住院)；as usual (像平常一样)；deal with(处理)；in person(亲自)。第三步：根据提及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达感谢，清晰明确，简单明了。第二
85、段，说明老师怎么帮助自己，结构清晰，语意连贯。第三段，邀请老师来中国游玩，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如And its your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.(正是你频繁的鼓励和积极的态度，引导我走出低落的精神，以如此合理的方式处理
86、我的疾病，学习和生活。)(强调句型的运用)读后续写情节构思的一个重要原则：合情合理，简洁明了。通过文本研读我们发现，有人来敲门了，孩子喊着一定是圣诞老人，因为孩子对圣诞礼物充满期待，所以在她的心里来敲门的一定是圣诞老人。门铃响起应该是有人来了，当然肯定不是圣诞老人，那么是谁呢？有同学将情节创设为是我返还伞给她的那位女士来敲门，而且我开门以后还和她交谈，她送了我礼物甚至给我提供了工作，这样的情节设置不尽合理，因为和第二段的开头衔接不是十分紧密：Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes（突然之间贴在一个包裹上的一张便条吸引了我的
87、注意力），可见拿到的包裹应该是不知道何人所送，否则为何会有suddenly这样的描写？正因为不知情，所以便条吸引了我的注意，并且通过便条我了解了事情的真相，所以第二部分要通过便条内容揭示事实真相。那么第一部分中来敲门的人我们可以设计为是一个快递员，这样情节就比较合理，也比较容易展开。情节设置一定要遵循合情合理这样一个原则，同时要注意情节设置简洁明了，推动发展，产生合理结果就可以了。过于繁复的情节，无疑增加了写作的难度，并且让文章看上去很啰嗦，故事拖沓冗长，反而起不到好的作用和效果。上述例文的情节设置有学生存在如下的问题【1】有学生缺乏语言常识，不知道Santa Claus是何人，将其当成了“我
88、”的一个朋友，这样的理解导致后续情节的创设都是偏离方向的。【2】有学生在第二段中礼物上的贴的便条中赋予了太多的内容，仿佛一张便条能承载一篇洋洋洒洒的长篇大论，便条只是用于书写简单信息的纸条，几个单词一二句话而已，而有的学生写到了那位女士在便条上写了长长的一封信，这是一个细节创设，然而也不尽合理。【3】也有学生在情节创设时出现价值观的偏差，我帮助过那位女士，为她找回了丢失的雨伞，这是善意的举动，是不求回报的，有学生写到因为我做了好事，因此那位女士给我送礼物甚至给我提供工作都是我应得的，做好事就应该得到回报，这样的设置也是不合理的，是违背普适的价值观的。【4】有学生对包裹中的礼物进行了详细的描写，
89、并且使用了较多篇幅，礼物的描写是与故事情节无关的细节，对于推动故事发展无益，因此不宜展开。【5】有学生写到该女士通过便条，告知我给我提供了工作面试的机会，然后还写到我去参加了面试并且得到了工作机会，本文的故事就发生在我家和家门口，突然发生了我去面试并通过的面试的情节也是不合理的。【附录】One possible Version:Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard a man talking kindly to he
90、r. So I went to the door and saw a delivery man/postman, whose arms were full of parcels. “This must be a mistake,” I said, but he read the name on the parcels, saying they were for me. With these words, he left. I didnt know what to do. Peggy and I took these parcels in, exchanging a confused look.
91、 What a surprise! I looked for the name of the sender on the parcels.Paragraph 2：Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. I picked up the note, which read “Thanks for returning of the umbrella. Merry Christmas！” It was sent by the lady, the owner of the umbrella. Holding the note tightly, I couldnt control my tears, a stream of warmth coming over me. On that cold Christmas, I forgot I had only fifteen dollars left in my pocket. Looking at Peggy unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness, I felt my life was full of hope again.
