1、2016河南省尉氏县高考英语二轮书面表达品析（6）及参考范文书面表达(满分25分)现在,学生的零花钱越来越多,但是乱花钱现象很严重。下面是你应某晚报教育在线栏目之约针对学生的零用钱(pocket money)的消费方向,对某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行问卷调查所得出数据。请你用英文写一篇调查报告,反映调查结果,并呼吁中学生应树立正确的消费观。注意:1、书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要抓住主要问题和数据说明的问题即可; 2、开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3、词数120左右。【参考范文】书面表达Dear Editor,Recently a survey has been carried out t
2、o find out how middle school students spend their pocket money. In this survey, both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books , snacks and playing games , still some money goes to clothes , banks , sports , and so on. The survey shows that about 44% of seniors prefer books
3、 to snacks (37% )and playing games (31% ). On the other hand, only 32% of juniors spend their pocket money buying books, while over a half buy snacks and 44% spend in playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money on clothes or put it in banks.I think a lot of snacks will not
4、 only make us put on weight but also do harm to our health. In addition , if we play games without limit, we 11 lose much precious time , which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. I hope we students value our money as well as our time.【2014唐山一中调研考试（二）】书面表达（满分25分）当前不少文学作品被改编
5、成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英文短文：1.看电影的好处2.读原著的好处3.我的看法及理由注意：1.词数100120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：(the) original work 或(the) book in the original（原著）重要要求：1、 注意书法，书法分4分；2、 句式要求：文中要有一句话使用从句、倒装或者强调句；有一句话使用非谓语。每句话3分，共计6分，请考生在自己作文中的这两句话下面下划线，如果全文无下划线的句子，则以0分记入作文总分
6、；3、 作文内容分：15分。Film or book, which do you preferSome of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.【参考范文】Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less t
7、ime to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful
8、.Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.【201
9、4陕西省西安市长安区第一中学一模】书面表达（满分30分） 最近你班举行了一场关于“动物园里圈养动物好不好”的讨论。假如你是李涛，请你根据下列提示，用英语将讨论的结果向English Weekly投稿。注意：字数120左右。要求如下:1. 赞成的理由；(至少3条理由)2. 反对的理由；(至少3条理由)3. 你的观点Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good or bad to keep animals in zoos. 【参考范文】书面表达（满分30分）Dear ed
10、itor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. Those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals. It might also develop peoples love for animals and nature. Besides, animals in zoos can be protected from danger
11、s in the wild.However, those who are against the idea think that its a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos. Itll also damage the balance of nature. Animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos. I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and ke
12、ep them locked up. Yours sincerely,Li Tao（2014广东卷）第一节 基础习作你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。写作内容请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义相关信息： 借助当地媒体寻找 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人 打算根据此经历写一本书 同年同月同日
13、生的人：time twin写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【考点】考察提纲类短文【写作指导】本文属于提纲类短文，叙述寻找同年同月同日生的人的Richard Avis所做事情的具体信息。使用第三人称和一般现在时为主（在叙述过去发生的事情时使用一般过去时）。要点：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日；时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人；目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义：借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师
14、、艺术家等；计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人；打算根据此经历写一本书提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。【一句多译】借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；（1）With the help of the local media, h
15、e has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.（2）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17
16、 males and 15 females, including government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.【参考范文】Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the wo
17、rld. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.
