1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 2 Be sporty，be healthy如何写建议信建议信属于半开放式文章，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得语气诚恳、目的明确、简明扼要、具有合理性和说服力。文本表达通常以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；主体人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。基本框架 1开头简要描述现象，表示理解；2主体对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，提出自己的建议；3结尾希望建议有帮助，并给予适当鼓励。常用词块 1offer some suggestions 提一些建议 2go jogging every evening 每天晚上慢跑锻炼 3join one or two spor
2、ts clubs 加入一两个体育俱乐部 4a number of sports 许多体育运动 5provide a wide variety of activities 提供丰富的活动 6as far as I am concerned 就我而言 7spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力去做 8make good use of 充分利用 常用语句 精彩开头 1I have the honour to give my suggestions on how to use the ten-minute break.我荣幸地就如何利用 10 分钟的休息时间提出我的建议。2I am
3、 writing to express my views concerning environment protection.我写信是为了表达我对环境保护的看法。3My suggestions are as follows.建议如下。4Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.我很高兴收到你征求我对的意见的来信。5Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有一些对你有帮助的建议。6I think you can make it if you follow the ad
4、vice below.我认为如果你遵循下面的建议，你可以成功。正文佳句 1Id like to suggest that you stick to taking some exercise every day.我建议你每天坚持锻炼一下。2In my opinion/As far as Im concerned，you had better take part in some after-school activities.在我看来/就我而言，你最好参加一些课外活动。3I think you really need to lose some weight.我想你真的需要减肥了。4It is a
5、good idea to go to a fitness center.去健身中心是个好主意。5Why not do/Why dont you do.?为什么你不呢？6If I were you，I would think about exercising to keep fit.如果我是你，我会考虑锻炼以保持健康。余味结尾 1Cheer up！Your troubles will soon be over.振作起来！你的麻烦很快就会过去的。2Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者事竟成。3Dont lose heart，whatever happen
6、s.不要灰心，不管发生什么事。4I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.如果你觉得我的建议有用，我会很高兴的。5I hope you will find my suggestions/tips/proposals/advice very useful/helpful.我希望你会发现我的建议非常有用/有帮助的。假如你是李华。你的好朋友 Peter 最近身体很弱，想参加一些运动，但是不知道什么运动合适，特写信来征求你的建议。请你回一封信，建议他去打乒乓球，内容包括：1对乒乓球的认识；2打乒乓球的要领；3打乒乓球的好处。注意：1.词
7、数 80 左右；2可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯、通顺。_ _ _ _ 学生习作 Dear Peter，Im sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.I recommend you table tennis.Table tennis is a sport and an art，because it need strength and skill.When you play table tennis，you should judge the direction of the ball，and hitted it back
8、 with great strength.And after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.So，it is not a socalled“light exercise”I think playing table tennis can build you up.Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.Yours，Li Hua 点评：1本篇习作结构布局合理，但出现了两处低级语病，如 it need和 hitted。2某些句子还可以升格，如句和句。3文中一些
9、词汇运用的比较好，比如 recommend sb.sth.，with great strength 等。升格作文 Dear Peter，Im sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.I recommend you table tennis.Table tennis is not only a sport but also an art，because it is a game that needs strength and skill.When playing table tennis，you should jud
10、ge the direction of the ball，and hit it back with great strength.And after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.So，it is not asocalled“light exercise”I think playing table tennis can build you up.Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.Yours，Li Hua 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英
11、语老师 Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请用英语给她写一封信，内容包括：1你对英语学习的认识；2英语学习存在的主要问题；3对英语教学的建议(至少两条)。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Ms Li，Im very happy to have you as our English teacher._ _ _ _ _ _ Thank you!Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Ms Li，Im very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is be
12、coming a global village，English is getting more and more important，so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.My English is just OK but I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me some advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.Thank you!Yours，Li Hua 点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
