1、2021高考英语读后续写讲练结合（六）Part one 小试身手读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Have you ever had to overcome an extreme challenge in your life?My teenage years had been insane. From schoolwork to athletics, I had always been running around. Everything was so difficult.Throughout my hectic teenage years I have be
2、en faced with many extreme challenges that have required extreme focus and hard work to overcome. If it hadnt been for hard work, none of these challenges that I faced would have been conquered.Two years ago, when I was a freshman in high school, I dealt with an extremely significant injury. This to
3、ok place in my tennis tournament in Januaty. In the climax of my match, I jolted my back to the left and soon after felt a sharp, painful shock run through my spine. I knew at that difficult moment I seriously injured my back. I was rushed off the court and my parents made an appointment with an ort
4、hopedist (矫形外科医生) for the next morning.I walked into the office extremely nervous and suffering from excruciating pain. My tennis season for school started in three months and I absolutely needed to build up the strength. After about twenty minutes of waiting in the office, which felt like an eterni
5、ty, the doctor walked in to examine my X-rays. With a sorrowful face, the doctor looked into mine and my mothers eyes and said, There is a 50/50 chance that Lucas will be able to participate in this yearns tennis season. Lucas broke his L5 vertebrae in his lower back. My heart dropped and I felt a s
6、adness come over me. The doctor said that I would be sitting out of physical activity for two and a half to three months.Those three months were the longest three months of my life. I was so eager to get back to practices for the season.Every day, I would think about how it was going to be when I wa
7、s fully healthy. I asked myself, Am I going to be out of shape? Should I even play this year? I probably wont have a successful season. From that dreadful day on, I decided that I was going to put in the work to be back in top form and have a successful season.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线
8、的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:After I got the all clear from my orthopedist l was going to get to work. _ Paragraph 2:My hard work proved to be very effective._ Part two 知识及技巧分享1-1.The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue. Snow blank
9、eted every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees that lined our street. Overnight, snow had nudged its way into every crack and gutter.译文：街上白雪皑皑，天空一片湛蓝。雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在我们街两旁发育不良的桑树枝上。一夜之间，雪就挤满了每一个裂缝和水沟。亮点词汇glistened闪光; 闪亮;glisten的过去分词和过去式；这里形容雪铺在路上亮晶晶的样子 blameless无过错的; 无可指责的；
10、blameless blue 湛蓝，蓝得毫无瑕疵 blanketed以厚层覆盖; blanket的过去式，blanket有毯子的意思，隐喻雪像一层毯子 weighed有重; 重; 称重量，量体重; 认真考虑; 权衡; 斟酌; weigh的过去分词和过去式，这里指雪压弯了树梢。 nudged轻推，轻触; 轻推，渐渐推动; 用胳膊肘挤开往前走; nudge的过去分词和过去式 生词难词stunted发育不足的; 生长不良的; 未能充分发展的; 阻碍生长; 妨碍发展; 遏制; stunt的过去分词和过去式 rooftop屋顶外部; 外屋顶 mulberry桑树; 桑葚; 深紫红色 gutter檐沟;
11、天沟; 路旁排水沟; 阴沟; 恶劣的社会环境; 道德沦落的社会最低阶 1-2 The park was covered in a thick blanket of white, statues peeked out under their new white caps, footsteps and paw prints crisscrossed each other around the labyrinth of paths. Aside from the brown of the denuded trees, the only other color was the vivid saffro
12、n staining around the base of each lamppost, tree and shrub.译文：公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖，公园里的雕像从它的崭新的白色帽子下露出头来，在迷宫般的小路上，足迹和爪印交错。除了光秃秃的树的棕色外，唯一的另一种颜色是每个灯柱、树和灌木底部的鲜艳的橘黄色。 亮点词汇peeked v.窥视; 偷看; 微露出; 探出; peek的过去分词和过去式 ；这里用了拟人化手法 crisscross v.在交叉往返;纵横交错于;(两组线或事物)相互交叉，相互交错adj.(图案或设计)纵横交错的，十字交叉的 labyrinth n.迷宫;曲径 生词
13、难词denuded剥光; 使裸露; 使光秃; denude的过去分词和过去式 saffron藏红花粉; 橘黄色; 橘黄色的; 藏红花色的 staining玷污; 留下污渍; 给染色; 玷污，败坏; stain的现在分词 lamppost灯杆; 路灯柱 shrub灌木 1-3 The wind howled, piling up snow in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust. I walked bend over against the cold, protecting my eyes with my arms. Trees, po
14、sts, cowsheds loomed into my vision, then vanished, swallowed in white.译文：风呼啸着，堆着阵阵飘动的雪，用雪白的颗粒蒙蔽了黑夜。我弯下腰来抵御寒冷，用胳膊护着眼睛。树、柱子、牛棚隐约出现在我的视线中，然后消失了，淹没在白色之中。亮点词汇howled长嚎; 嗥叫; 大声叫喊; 怒号; 呼啸; howl的过去分词和过去式 piling up堆起； blinding雪亮的; 刺眼的; 使人视线模糊的; 绝妙的; 精彩的; 使变瞎; 使失明; 使眼花; 使目眩; 使思维混沌; 使失去判断力; blind的现在分词 bend ove
15、r弯腰 loomed赫然耸现; 令人惊恐地隐现; 显得突出; 逼近; loom的过去分词和过去式 vanished突然消失; 不复存在; 消亡; 绝迹; vanish的过去分词和过去式 swallowed吞下; 咽下; 做吞咽动作; 吞没; 淹没; 侵吞; swallow的过去分 生词难词drifts流动; 趋势; 逐渐变化; 偏航，航差; 水流; 气流; 漂流; 漂移; 飘; 缓缓移动; 缓慢行走; 无意间发生; 无目的地转变; 顺其自然地做; drift的第三人称单数和复数 cowsheds牛棚; 牛舍; cowshed的复数 1-4 Breath pale against the num
16、bing air, she blinked thoughtfully as the frost patiently kissed her face, captivated by the soft, dusty illusions of light that sat heavy on her eyelashes. She adored the snow, more so when it was falling.译文：在麻木的空气中，呼吸也变得虚弱，她若有所思地眨了眨眼，霜耐心地亲吻着她的脸，被她睫毛上沉重的柔和、尘土飞扬的光的幻影所迷住。她喜欢雪，尤其是雪落下的时候。亮点词汇numbing令人麻
17、木的; 使人失去知觉的; 使失去知觉; 使麻木; 使迟钝; numb的现在分词 thoughtfully若有所思地; 沉思地; 意味深长地 dusty布满灰尘的; 灰尘覆盖的; 土灰色的; 灰暗的; 无光泽的 illusions错误的观念; 幻想; 幻想的事物; 错觉; illusion的复数 eyelashes睫; 睫毛; eyelash的复数 adored热爱，爱慕; 喜爱，热爱; adore的过去分词和过去式 生词难词heavy on对严厉 1-5 Its dark now and the snow is still falling, clumps of wet flakes drift
18、ing windlessly down, the air moist, the sidewalk mushy underfoot.译文：现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落，空气潮湿，走在人行道上，脚底粘糊糊的。亮点词汇clumps丛，簇，束，串; 群，组; 堆; 缕; 沉重的脚步声; 以沉重的脚步行走; 聚集; 被聚集成群; clump的第三人称单数和复数 flakes小薄片; 碎片; 古怪的人; 奇特的人; 健忘的人; 脱落，剥落; 把切成薄片; 成为薄片; flake的第三人称单数和复数 moist微湿的; 湿润的 underfoot在脚下; 在地面上 生词难词sidewalk人
19、行道 mushy软而稠的; 糊状的; 多愁善感的; 过于感伤多情的 1-6 New fallen snow, milk bottle top sized snowflakes drift lazily to earth on gentle breeze, crisp winter air, snow topped street lamps, paw prints heading for home, quickly covered by a pristine blanket of white. 译文：雪刚降下来，牛奶瓶尖大小的雪花，在微风中懒洋洋地飘向地面，清爽的冬季空气，白雪覆盖的街灯，朝家走
20、去的爪印，很快被一层原始的白色毯子覆盖。亮点词汇gentle breeze轻风 crisp脆的; 酥脆的; 鲜脆的; 脆嫩的; 洁净的; 挺括的; 油炸土豆片，炸薯片; 变脆 ，这里形容冬天的空气，尤为传神 pristine崭新的; 清新的; 未开发的; 处于原始状态的 lazily 懒洋洋地，这里形容雪花，带有拟人手法范文Paragraph 1: After I got the all clear from my orthopedist I was going to get to work. Practices were going to start in two weeks and I w
21、as determined to get back on the court. My hunger for success made me play and work out for two hours even day before the season. Through practices, I would hit the gym and try to build up the strength that I had before the injury.Paragraph 2: My hard work proved to be very effective. I had the most
22、 successful season of my career. I made it to the finals. Although I truly wanted to win, I knew that it was a great accomplishment for me to be in that position even not in the first place. The injury was almost a good thing because I proved to myself that I am capable of achieving goals that I strive for, through hard work of course. That season was by far the most rewarding season of my career. I felt so accomplished at the end of the season. Hard work always pays off.
