1、Unit 1 Great scientistsSection Guided Writing劝说信写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导劝说信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。在写作过程中,要以合理的语气和口吻为基调,用有说服力的素材来支撑自己的观点,以说明阐述为主,以理动人,以理服人。我们可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作:第一部分:引入。写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。第二部分:阐述。这是劝说信的主体和核心部分。写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由。理由要力求客观、真实、有说服力,要重点突出、层次分明。同时,要注意适当提高语言的力度,发挥语言的功力,以更好地展现自己
2、的观点。第三部分:总结。这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力,切忌冗杂拖拉的表达。写作中要注意下列几点:1话题的提出要开门见山,不要拖泥带水;2观点必须鲜明,不能模棱两可;3论据要条理清楚,语言应准确、精炼;4主体时态多用一般现在时;5尽量避免同一单词、句型的重复使用,多采用同义词、相似结构以使表达多样化。亮点句式(一)引入 1Im sorry to hear/learn that you are so crazy about.that.2In my opinion,it is wrong to.3I dont think it is a very good way to.4Thank you f
3、or your letter asking me about.5Im writing to persuade you to quit/give up.(二)阐述 1Here are my reasons.First of all,I think it would be better if.2The reasons for.are as follows.First,.Second,.Last but not least,.3On the one hand,.;on the other hand,.4The reason for.is that.5No one can ignore the fac
4、t that.6If I were you,I would.(三)总结 1In short./In conclusion.2All things considered.3As far as Im concerned,.4From what has been discussed above,.5Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务假如你是高二学生李华,你的一个在外地读书的同学张力给你写信,向你诉说他最近因为身体不好而影响了学习,并且坦言自己平时学习忙,很少锻炼。请根据
5、这一情况给张力写一封说服信,鼓励他积极锻炼身体,从而为更好地学习打下基础。注意:1.词数 80 左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2尽可能运用本单元所学的词汇、句型和语法。Dear Zhang Li,I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.Sincerely yours,Li Hua审题谋篇体裁劝说信时态以一般现在时为主 主题为更好地学习,要积极锻炼身体人称以第一人称为主结构第一段:引入,点明最近身体不好的原因所在,表明自己的观点。第二段:阐述,说明错误观点及
6、其锻炼的好处,并提供具体做法。第三段:总结,重申自己的观点。遣词造句.对接单元词汇1 积极的2全神贯注于3有助于4得出结论5提出put forwardpositivebe absorbed incontribute todraw a conclusion.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1你一直全神贯注于学习。You study.2结果,你没有时间锻炼身体。As a result,you exercise.have no time forhave been absorbed in3这些时间被花费在锻炼上。The time exercise.4你可能会认为这些时间被浪费了。You may thi
7、nk the time is wastedis spent on5当你有了强健的体魄时,才能继续你的学习。When you have a strong body,you can 6你不会感到任何的不舒服。You wont feel badkeep on studying(二)句式升级7用 so.that.合并句子 1、2You have been you have no time for exercise.8用过去分词短语作后置定语合并句子 3、4You may think that time is wasted.spent on exerciseso absorbed in study th
8、at9用 only 修饰状语从句和介词 without 合并句子 5、6 keep on studying without feeling badOnly when you have a strong body can you妙笔成篇【参考范文】You have been so absorbed in study that you have no time for exercise,which is really harmful to your health.I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you have a posi
9、tive attitude to exercise in future.I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.Dear Zhang Li,You may draw a conclusion that time spent on exercise is wasted.In fact,exercise can contribute to your health a lot.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad.So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hours exercise every day from now on.In short,as long as you exercise more,you will surely have a stronger body.Sincerely yours,Thank you for watching!