1、返回目录 Meeting your ancestors Unit 5 返回目录 Section Guided Writing 如何介绍考古发现返回目录 写作 技法指导佳作 构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作 技法指导【文体感知】介绍考古发现多用说明文，一般要从发现地点、古迹特点及其所带来的影响三个方面描述。返回目录【注意】(1)考古发现古迹的具体地点要写清楚，以便让读者知道具体的位置；(2)要对考古发现的古迹的形状、历史年代和作用进行描述；(3)对于考古发现的介绍兼有记叙文和说明文的特点。人称应以第三人称为主，时态应以现在时为主；(4)此类文章的语言要准确，词句要恰当，并尽可能多地使
2、用结构稍复杂的句式来表达丰富的信息。同时要确保行文连贯，衔接或过渡自然，以将有效的信息传达返回目录【增分佳句】1介绍历史地位(1)在湖南省一座古墓中挖掘出来的青铜剑可追溯到2 000年前。The bronze sword discovered in an ancient tomb inHunan Province dates back to 2,000 years ago.返回目录(2)人们认为这是迄今为止在中国发现的最早的也是最大的造纸作坊。It is believed to be the earliest and largest ancientpapermaking workshop si
3、te ever found in China.返回目录 2介绍主要特点(1)这件用青铜器制作的物品是去年出土的。This object,which was made of bronze,wasunearthed last year.(2)它位于城西，生动展现了宋明时期造纸的画面。Located/Lying in the west of the city,it gives a vividpicture of the process of how paper was made duringSong and Ming dynasties.返回目录 3介绍影响和意义(1)作为中国传统文化的景点，它享有
4、国际声誉。It enjoys a worldwide fame as a traditional Chinesecultural site.(2)它一直被认为是研究西周经济和文化的重要物品。Its been regarded as an important object to studythe economic system and culture during the Western返回目录【写作要求】圆明园遗址公园是我国第一批国家考古遗址公园之一。请根据以下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍一下圆明园。词数80左右。1始建于1709年，历时约一个世纪；2.由三个园子组成，占地347公顷；3.以景色著
5、称，更是一个文物宝库；4.1860年遭英法联军掠夺焚毁。参 考 词 汇：公 顷 hectare，一 个 文 物 宝 库 a vastcollection of cultural treasures佳作 构建示例返回目录【审题谋篇】项目结 论体裁_话题_时态主要使用_人称主要使用_结构第一段：_第二段：_第三段：_说明文 介绍圆明园 一般过去时 第三人称 简单介绍圆明园的地位 详细介绍圆明园的特点 介绍其所反映出的重要文化意义 返回目录【词句推敲】1词汇_ 占面积_ 由组成_不但而且cover an area of be made up of/be composed of/consist of
6、not onlybut also It is said that take/carry away burn up 返回目录 2句式在中国历史上，曾有一个美妙绝伦的地方，叫做圆明园。普通表达：In the history of China,_onceanexcellentplace_isnamedYuanmingyuan.高级表达：_(非谓语作后置定语)there was which In the history of China,there was once an excellent placenamed Yuanmingyuan.返回目录 圆明园始建于1709年，它的建造持续了100多年。Y
7、uanmingyuanwasfirstbuiltin1709,_ _.它占地347公顷，由三个园子组成。Yuanmingyuan,_，was made upof three gardens.covering an area of 347 hectares whoseconstructionlasted for more than 100 years 返回目录【连句成篇】In the history of China,there was once an excellentplace named Yuanmingyuan.Yuanmingyuan was first built in 1709,w
8、hoseconstruction lasted for more than 100 years.It was madeup of three gardens,covering an area of 347 hectares.Itis said that in 1860 the UK.and French armies robbedand destroyed Yuanmingyuan that was famous not onlyfor its beauty but also for a vast collection of cultural返回目录 Most of the treasures were taken away by them and therest were broken or burned up.Yuanmingyuan,representing our Chinese culture,was,is and will be our pride.Now we can only see themodel of Yuanmingyuan,and we should remember itshistory.
