1、Part 4 Writing一、学习目标: 学习关于说服性文章的写作(参考教材P8 Learning Tip )过程与方法:1.学习范文写作结构。常用语句:I feel that it would be beneficial if I would like to suggest . I would recommend that . If I were you, I would . You may consider doing . It would seem to me that you could .假设你是某中学学生李华。 最近, 你发现青岛的海边随便扔垃圾的现象严重,污染海洋威胁到海洋生物
2、的生存。 请你给市领导写一封信,劝说市政府制定新的法律, 并采取强有力地措施来实施它, 以确保海边的清洁。Dear Governor,Nowadays a lot of people leave rubbish on beaches and eventually it will get picked up by the tide. When this happens, a lot of animals die; some become or are close to becoming extinct. I suggest that the government take measures to
3、 solve the problem. Please consider the idea of making a law to stop people from polluting our beaches, and please consider enforcing this law if there is one. If we put them into action, the city of Qingdao would be the most beautiful beach in the world. Yours sincerely, Li Hua2. 实战演练:仿写练习 请你根据下面所提
4、示的电子贺卡的优越性,说服更多的人在新年来临之际给亲朋好友发电子贺卡,而不再用纸制贺卡。与传统贺卡相比,电子贺卡更活泼有趣;不仅可以看到动画,还可以听到声音;速度快;网址多,可发不同的贺卡;还可以用flash或其它软件自己设计贺卡;不用纸制贺卡,可以节省纸张,对节约资源是一大贡献。注意:1. 参考词汇:电子贺卡e-card; 动画animation; 软件software_ _ _二、翻译下列文章 (中英互译)。当那座烟花工厂的建设到了油漆阶段时,一个水泵被安装进来,接着,在它附近的油漆工都得了一种严重的疾病(疾病击败油漆工),其特征与烧伤相似。一位经验丰富的内科医生被指定去照顾受害者并负责处
5、理这一案例。他热情地投入到工作中,但是却没有预见到这是一次艰难的挑战。在简单的询问后,他就宣布说罪魁祸首是受污染的油漆(油漆应受责备)。但是没有确实的证据,人们很怀疑并拒绝他的观点,大家都说他提出的理论毫无道理。他对自己要求更加严格,全身心地投入。除了询问,他还制作了详细的图表,谨慎地分析各项数据,最后,他终于得出了一个科学的结论,把疾病和水泵中的镭联系起来。镭是宇宙中的一种放射性物质,当暴露在镭的辐射中时,人体吸收其射线,立刻染上疾病。他把水泵向后旋转,拿走了里面的镭,这个简单的动作治愈了所有的受害者。When the construction of the firework factory
6、 came to the stage of painting, a pump was put in. Then, all the painters in the neighbourhood were defeated by a severe disease whose characteristic was alike to that of a bad burn.An expert physician was instructed to attend to the victims and handle this case. He was enthusiastic, but he didnt fo
7、resee that it was a hard challenge. After simple enquiry, he announced that the polluted paint was to blame. But without positive evidence, people suspected and rejected his view, saying the theory he put forward made no sense. Being much more strict with himself, he contributed himself to the case.
8、 Apart from making enquiries, he made detailed charts and analysed the data cautiously. Finally, he drew a scientific conclusion, linking the disease tothe radium in the pump. Exposed to radium, a kind of radioactive material in the universe, people absorbed radiation and got sick immediately. Spinning the pump backward, he took away the radium. This simple movement cured all the victims.