1、我所遇到的问题?词汇匮乏、表达不地道？怎样避开不会表达？写作如何避免时态的错误？基础写作如何整合信息？如何避免句子结构和句式单一？如何让阅卷老师瞬间发现亮点？优秀作文四大标准 S1:信息完整，正确 S2:书写整齐，清晰 S3:语法高级，贯通 S4:句型漂亮，地道How to write a good composition技巧1.学会使用丰富的句式2.学会使用较高级词汇3.学会使用适当的连词学会使用丰富的句式多用复合句、及复杂句；长短句结合、变换主语。同位语，非谓语，从句，倒装句，强调句，介词with结构句式丰富：高级句型五句话秘籍一主语多谓语写法分词作状语从属复合句并列复合句简单句v-ing
2、/v-ed1定/状/名词性从句1and,or,but 连接1五大基本句型1英语一句话只能有一个主谓结构如果出现更多动词？加连词（and/but/so）放入从句 变为非谓语动词主语、谓语、宾语、定语、状语、补语过去分词 v-ed被动Having been done完成被动动词的v-ing主动Having done完成非谓语动词作状语一主多谓（化腐朽为神奇！）谓语动词/句型的要求 主被动关系 时间先后顺序写作运用非谓语三步走主：V-ing 被：v-edHaving doneHaving been doneExampleHearing the news,he jumped with joy.Grea
3、tly touched by his story,we decided to work harder.Tip 使用分词作状语：谓语主语相同主动现在分词被动过去分词化腐朽为神奇用分词改写教育经历：He Majored in Science.He graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years,he went abroad for further studies.Majoring in Science,he graduated from a famous University in the north and af
4、ter 4 years,he went abroad for further studies.表主动含义 He was given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921 He was invited to many countries to give lectures.Given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921,he was invited to many countries to give lectures.表被动含义The old woman died,leaving her son a large sum of m
5、oney.The old woman died.She left her son a large sum of money.主动表结果 Liu Xiang won the Gold Medal in 110-meter-hurdle race in the Olympics.He became a super star and well-known across China.Liu Xiang won the Gold Medal in 110-meter-hurdle race in the Olympics，making himbecome a super star and well kn
6、own across China.主动表结果Which made 洪战辉，24岁，在校大学生，出生在一个贫困的家庭。Hong Zhanhui,aged 24,a college student,was born in a poor family.a college student of 24孟老师给予我很多鼓励。最后我完成了中学的学习。Often encouraged by Mr.Meng,I graduated from the middle school at last.他挂念自己的妹妹。他把她带到了大学里。Worrying about his sister,he took her wit
7、h him to the university.那位老人同意给我们带路。我们开始动身往山里走去。With the old man leading,we started to walk toward the mountain.你的朋友小张是个动物爱好者，一天他被狗咬过后变得怕狗了，但对动物的爱心却没有变。请根据所给内容写一篇5个句子的短文。事件心理变化朋友的看法永恒的品质为了救一只被狗咬的小鸟，结果被狗咬从此之后，不敢到有狗的地方去嘲笑他，认为他是胆小鬼尽管怕狗，看见小狗受伤仍会上前解救 Xiaoming,one of my friend,is an animal-lover.One day h
8、e tried to save a little bird which was being bitten by a dog,unluckily bitten.Having been bitten by the dog,he no longer dares to walk among dogs.Considered as a coward,he is usually laughed at by his friends.However,seeing dogs injured,he will manage to rescue them from harm.如何让阅卷老师瞬间发现亮点？Well begun is half done.All is well that ends well.开头力争做到开门见山，直击要点；结尾做到切合题意，不随意发挥。
