1、2021高考英语读后续写讲练结合（九）Part one 小试身手读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When I was ten I was suddenly very sad, for I had to move from the only home I had ever known. My whole life had been spent in that big old house which saw the laughter and tears of four generations. When the final day came, I ran to
2、the front of the house and sat alone, crying. Suddenly I felt a hand rest on my shoulder. I looked up to see my grandfather. “It isnt easy, is it, Billy? he said softly, sitting down on the steps beside me. “Grandpa,” I replied how can I ever say goodbye to you and all my friends?” “Goodbye is such
3、a sad word, he said. It seems too final, too cool, which has one thing in common: sadness.” He gently took my hand in his. “Come with me, my friend,” he whispered. We walked, hand in hand, to his favorite place in the front yard, where there was a huge red rose bush his beloved rose bush. What do yo
4、u see here, Billy?” he asked. I looked at the flowers, not knowing what to say, I see something beautiful, Grandpa. “It isnt just the roses that are beautiful, Billy. Its that special place in your heart that makes them so.” His eyes met mine again. “Billy, I planted these roses a long time agobefor
5、e your mother was even a dream. I put them into the soil the day my first son was born. It was my way of saying thank you to God. That boys name was Billy. I used to watch him pick roses for his mother. I saw my grandfathers tears. I had never seen him cry before. His voice became hoarse(嘶哑的). One d
6、ay a terrible war came, and my son, like so many sons, went away to fight a great evil. He and I walked to the train station together. Three months later a telegram came. My son had died in Italy. All I could think of was that the last thing I say to him in his life was goodbye.注意:1. 所续写短文的同数应为150左右
7、;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Grandpa slowly stood up. _ Paragraph 2:Soon my grandfather became seriously ill. _ Part two 知识及技巧分享1. 黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。 2. 就在一小时前，还是完全黑暗，但现在那银色的雾已经可见了。在这样的背景的映衬下，树的轮廓仍然像油画一样，比乌鸦还黑。 3. 鸟鸣中迎来
8、了新的一天，悦耳动听的合唱声似乎从未重复过，从树枝上倾泻而下，跌入清脆的晨风中，像一条流动的音乐之河流入周围的乡村。 4. 天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。 5. 译文：天空像夏天的桃子一样发光，太阳在天空中像是纯金的一样。树叶的颜色又变绿了，空气也变暖到大约二十度左右。这是一个完美的黎明，一个值得被品味而不是被挥霍浪费的黎明。在这光芒四射的美景下，我可以看到已经为一个有意义的一天而准备好了的道路。 6. 太阳升起，像一个金色的天篷，在蓝色的天空中闪闪发光，让星星们休息。随着黑暗的消退，每一种颜色都从木炭色变得充满活力。 技法讲
9、解：画面感要想把景物写生动、写活，就要捕捉到该环境下特有的细节场景，营造出一种画面感，让读者身临其境，感同身受。就像第一个例句就有极强的画面感，抓住了黎明太阳初升时金光闪闪的场景，不是泛泛地写阳刚照耀，而是把光芒具象成a golden path from the shore to the horizon，这样一来，画面感就出来了。参考答案1. Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.2. Only an hour ago the
10、blackness was absolute, but now the mist was visible, silvery. Against this backdrop the trees were silhouettes, still as an oil painting and darker than the ravens.3. Bird song welcomes in a new day, sweet melodious chorus of seemingly never repeated notes, cascading through the branches, tumbling
11、into the crisp morning air, flowing into the surrounding countryside like a great river of music.4. The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.5. The sky glows like a summer peach and the sun is pu
12、re gold in the sky. The colors of the foliage return to green and the air warms to an ambient twenty or so. It is the perfect dawn, one to be savored instead of squandered. Under this radiant beauty I can see the path ready for a meaningful day.6. The sun rises as a canopy of gold, bright amid the b
13、lue, bidding the stars to take their nightly rest. As darkness surrenders, every color changes from tinges of charcoal to the vibrancy.参考译文paragraph 1: Grandpa slowly stood up. He said, My friend, please never say, goodbye forever, and never give in to vour sadness and loneliness. Instead life is un
14、certain, and only when you first said hello to a friend are your joy and happiness of those times worth cherishing. Please leave that special hello in your heart.Paragraph 2: Soon my grandfather became seriously ill. Three months later, doctors finally announced that his life was about to end. 4 His
15、 children took turns to take care of him and say goodbye. He asked his kids tomove his bed next to the window, through which he could see his beloved rose bush. Eventually, I, as his oldest grandchild, was assigned to say goodbye to him. Hello, Grandpa, I sniffed. His eyes slowly opened, Hello, Billy, dont sob. He smiled. But I was out of control, crying outside. An uncle came to tell me that my grandfather had passed away. However, his deep words will never go away.
