1、2021高考英语读后续写讲练结合（八）Part one 小试身手读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jamie ran out of his house along the street toward his building. The abandoned buildings there were his playground. Jamie moved a wooden board from the door to one of the buildings. He crawled inside. There was broken glass on the flo
2、or. Jamie went down the stairs to the basement. It was even darker down there, and damp. The buildings were near the river. Sometimes water flooded in. Hed never found anything alive until he found Sharon. “Sharon, Im here!” Jamie called. “I brought a candle, too. Im going to light it so I can see y
3、ou better. Jamie took out a match and lit the candle. A soft circle of light lit up the darkness. “Come over here where I can see you,” Jamie said. “Please dont be afraid. Im not afraid. I told you that.” The creature slithered (滑行) into the light. It was about Jamies size. Its head and body were co
4、vered with dark green scales(鱗片). In the light of the candle, the scales shone like diamonds. The creatures eyes glowed red, suddenly, like hot coals. Its nostrils (鼻孔) flared, giving off heat. Jamie stared. He thought he had never seen anything so beautiful. Thats why hed decided to call the creatu
5、re Sharon. He wanted to give a beautiful name to his new pet. “Gee, Sharon,” he said, “I wish you could talk. I dont know if you understand me or not. And I, d really like you to tell me how you got here. The creature didnt answer. It just looked at Jamie. Its mouth opened slightly and something whi
6、te gleamed. Jamie thought it was smiling. “Well,” said Jamie, I hope youre hungry. I brought you a chicken sandwich.” The creature looked down at the sandwich, thinking about something else, but made no move to eat it. “Ill just leave the food here for you, Jamie sighed. “I wish I could stay. But I
7、have to go. Mom is on my case right now. Id help her. Ill come back tomorrow after school.”注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Jamie turned to go. _ Paragraph 2: When Jamie got home, his mother looked angry. _ Part two 知识及技巧分享1月亮
8、出现了片刻，她的月轮略带点血红色，半遮着脸：她似乎向我投去一个迷茫、沉闷的目光，然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里。 2 然后，月亮在其其优雅的白色光芒的映衬下出现，照亮了无云的天空；最后，它慢慢地移动，在河面上投下一大片光，像无数星星一样闪闪发光。 3 曾经泛着红紫色的天空转变成了乌黑得一大片，黑夜吞没了整个城镇，黑暗的海洋中出现了明亮的星星。 4 .逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。 5.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。 6. 夜晚带来了一片无情的黑暗，包裹着他们的眼睛和嘴巴，把他们浸没在一
9、片没有星星的天空下。空气变浓了，温度下降了，没有一个地方有令人欣慰的声音。 亮点词汇unrelenting 持续的; 不缓和的; 势头不减的; 不留情的wrapped 包，裹; 用包裹; 用缠绕; wrap 的过去分词和过去式burying 埋葬; 安葬; 丧失; 把掩藏在地下; 埋藏; bury 的现在分词thickened 变厚，变浓，变稠; thicken 的过去分词和过去式nowhere 无处; 哪里都不参考答案：1 The moon appeared momentarily, her disk was blood-red and half-overcast：she seemed to
10、 throw me a bewildered, dreary glance ,and buried herself again instantly in the deep drift of cloud. 2 Then the moon appeared in all its elegant whiteness, lightening up the cloudless sky ;finally, moving more slowly, it cast on the surface of the river a large parch of light which glittered like a
11、n infinity of stars. 3 The once reddish and purple sky transformed into a vast expanse of jet-black that engulfed the town. A canopy of luminous stars materialized amongst the ocean of blackness.4 .The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain d
12、raped over the sky.5.The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything6. The night brought an unrelenting darkness that wrapped their eyes and mouths, burying them beneath a starless sky
13、. The air had thickened; the temperature dropped and nowhere was there a comforting sound.技法讲解：融情于景如何在环境中融入人物的内心状态 不难发现，1所表达的气氛沉闷萧瑟，可以推测出主人公内心的烦躁、不安或是迷茫；2所表达的气氛静谧安详，可以推测出主人公内心的喜悦、宁静或是欣慰，同样是写夜晚的月亮，却传达出不同的情感，这就是环境描写之融情于景的威力，那么，这是如何做到的呢？我们并未直接写1中主人公内心的沉闷、烦躁、无所适从，而是说（The moon）throw me a bewildered, drea
14、ry glance（月亮向我投来一个迷茫、沉闷的目光），表面上写月亮迷茫、疲惫，实际上是在说主人公内心沉闷迷茫或是困乏疲惫，and buried herself again instantly in the deep drift of cloud.（然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里）其实也反映了主人公内心世界的孤闭。 相反，注意2中用词：elegant whiteness（优雅的白色），cloudless sky（无云的天空），the surface of the river（湖面），an infinity of stars（无数星点），glittered（闪闪发光），这些词都十分宁谧、祥和
15、、优美，可见主人公也是十分享受这月夜的景色，其内心必定是欢乐、安宁的。参考范文Paragraph 1: Jamie turned to go. He walked back slowlv along the basement floor. The creature raised its head and watched him carefully, and its mouth opened slightly and a series of bubbles came out swiftly. It looked as if it was talking a lot. After Jamie di
16、sappeared in the distance, the creature slithered back into its corner.Paragraph 2: When Jamie got home, his mother looked angry. She grabbed him, and asked, “Oh, my God! Annoying guy, and voure all right.Where have vou been? You made me so worried! Why, just last week a little boy disappeared on hi
17、s way home from school. However, he really didnt listen, instead he seemed to be thinking about something else. “Mommy, why not buy a pet for me? Im lonely, so I ran out.” Hearing this, Jamies mother smiled by herself. Okay, okay, Ill think about it seriously, but you have to promise to take good care of your pel. You do need a playmate.” Jamie hugged his mother happily. Oh, thanks. Mom. Ill tell Sharon the good news immediately! Jamie rushed out.
