1、沂水一中二轮模拟检测 英 语 试 题 2021.5 本卷满分120分,考试时间100分钟。注意事项: 1. 答卷前,考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。2. 回答选择题时,选出每小题答案后,用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时,将答案写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。3. 考试结束后,将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。第一部分 阅读理解(共两节,满分50分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2.5分,满分37.5分) 阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出最佳选项。ACommercial Banking Graduate
2、 SchemeWe help U.K. -based clients to invest locally and trade globally, and advise them on ways they can manage risk. To apply for our scheme, you need a 2:1 degree or above in any discipline from any university.Location: Our graduate schemes are based in various cities around the U. K., including
3、London, Birmingham, Edinburgh and Bristol. WHAT YOULL BE DOING Attending client meetings to understand their needs and offering solutions to support them. Managing the Group5s exposure to risk and assessing investment opportunities.Risk Management Graduate Scheme If you are eager to learn how a nati
4、onal organization protects itself and its customers from different threats, youll be a great fit for our Risk Management teams. What you need is just a 2:2 degree or above. Location: The first placement will be in Bristol, followed by three placements in London. WHAT YOULL BE DOING Developing your u
5、nderstanding of credit risks, risk analysis and financial modeling. Using artificial intelligence (AI) to simplify our risk management processes.Finance Graduate Scheme Finance teams are the trusted advisors to our business. And, once they understand how a business works, they can develop strategies
6、 that help transform it, within a fast-changing industry. Accounting and finance graduates are qualified for this scheme. Location: London. WHAT YOULL BE DOING Building relationships with colleagues and customers to better understand their needs. Reviewing our practices and contributing ideas on the
7、 ways we can improve them.Manufacturing Graduate SchemeWere the U.K.s second latest fresh food manufacturer. Were unique in the way we source and make most of our fresh food ourselves. To join us, its crucial that you have a driving license. Besides, you must have a passion for food quality and safe
8、ty. Those who have a minimum 2:2 degree and are fluent in Chinese will be preferred. Location: London. WHAT YOULL BE DOING Working with a variety of teams at several of our manufacturing sites. Going on placement in stores to learn more about our retail operations.1. If you want to stay in Birmingha
9、m, which graduate scheme can you choose?A. Finance Graduate Scheme.B. Manufacturing Graduate Scheme.C. Risk Management Graduate Scheme.D. Commercial Banking Graduate Scheme.2. After finishing the Risk Management Graduate Scheme, what can you do?A. Create investment opportunities.B. Master more about
10、 retail operations.C. Formulate the risk management system.D. Use AI to make risk management processes easier.3. Which certificate is a must to apply for Manufacturing Graduate Scheme?A. A 2:1 degree.B. A driving license.C. A Mandarin certificate.D. A food production license.BFor a number of Indians
11、 who for over half a century have replayed a race again and again, Milkha Singhs 400 metres final run at the Rome Olympics should be among the greatest heartbreaks in global sporting history. In fact,they hoped it would throw up a different result.However,continued praise for the man decades later i
12、s due to the effort by Indias greatest track athlete on that September day in the Italian capital, though he still missed out on becoming Indias first Olympic track medallist.As he was growing up, he used to run barefoot daily on hot sand to school, which was situated 20 kilometres from his house. H
13、e thinks this was good training but knows it is not possible to ask children to do this today. However, he does feel that the early identification of talented athletes is also important for Indias athletic teams to shine.India has in the last few years judged success purely in terms of medals, but l
14、ooking into the past reveals how a more generous generation saluted Milkha as a pioneer. Milkha is Indias finest track athlete of all time. He remains the only Indian male to win an individual Commonwealth Games athletics gold he won the 400 metres at Cardiff in 1958, the first athlete from independ
15、ent India to do so.Since retiring from athletics, the former champion athlete has set up the Milkha Singh Charitable Trust, which helps poorer families survive if an athlete in their family has died. A percentage of the profits from the film Bhaag Milkha Bhaag are going to his trust.Finally, lets re
16、ad a quote from Milkha himself :“There is no shortcut to success. A scene in the film shows Milkha Singh running with injured feetthis actually happened. I havent found an alternative to hard work. You need to be patient, dedicated and true to yourself and your work.”4. What has won Milkha Singh con
17、tinued praise?A. His early hard life experience.B. His outstanding athletic talent.C. His status in global sports history.D. His effort to win an Olympic medal.5. What does Milkha Singh think of his early training?A. Exciting.B. Unbearable. C. Beneficial. D. Useless.6. What did Milkha Singh do after
18、 his retirement?A. He turned into a movie actor.B. He learned to do business.C. He became an athletic trainer.D. He engaged in charity work.7. What can we learn from Milkha Singhs words?A. Hard work leads to success.B. Do something different.C. Medals measure everything.D. Stick to your dream. C Bui
19、ldings with windows filled with water could save energy greatly, according to researchers backing the new technology. Traditional glass windows increase the heat and temperature in the room in summers, and let the heat inside escape in winters, resulting in more electricity consumed for air-conditio
20、ners and more carbon emissions(排放). Now, researchers at Loughborough University (UK) have created a water-filled window that can overcome these problems.The water-filled glass(WPG) system, designed by Dr. Matyas Gutai, involves a sheet of water being trapped between a panel (嵌板) of glass, and the wa
21、ter is practically invisible. The windows are connected to an indoor storage tank using pipes hidden in the walls, allowing water to flow easily between the windows and the tank.This system allows the house to cool and reheat themselves automatically. When sunlight streams through the glass, the win
22、dows keep the buildings cool as the water absorbs external and internal heat. This warm water is then circulated to the tank. And when the outdoor temperature drops, the stored warm water is brought back to the walls to reheat the building using a monitoring system similar to central heating. The he
23、ated water can also be used for domestic purposes. Although some electricity is required to pump the water back and forth, it uses much less energy than traditional air-conditioners or heaters. Dr. Gutai claimed that WFG can save energy from 47% to 72% compared to when using traditional windows. Onc
24、e launched into the market, the windows will surely make a real splash, appealing to a large crowd of environmentalists and contributing to reducing our carbon footprint. Currently, the inventor team is testing the windows in two areas with different weather conditions. The research reveals that WFG
25、 systems perform well in any inhabited climatekeeping buildings in hot climates cool, and buildings in cool settings warmwithout requiring an additional energy supply.8. Whats the weakness of traditional glass windows?A. They are easy to break into.B. They release carbon dioxide.C. They can not keep
26、 the heat.D. They lead to more energy consumption.9. What is Paragraph 3 mainly about?A. The structure of WFG system.B. The working process of WFG system.C. The advantages of water-filled windows.D. The appearance of water-filled windows.10. Whats the characteristic of the WFG system?A. It is operat
27、ed by man. B. It needs no electricity at all.C. It recycles the water in many ways.D. It reheats the house via central heating.11. What does the underlined phrase in Paragraph 5 probably mean?A. Make a big fortune.B. Draw lots of attention.C. Form a huge waterfall. D. Take immediate action. DAn Edin
28、burgh inventor has created a fully biodegradable bottle that is made from paper and a secret combination of plant materials, and it could help save the planets oceans from plastic pollution and can also be eaten by sea creatures.The Edinburgh-based Durham University chemistry graduate James Longcrof
29、t started a non-profit bottled water company two years ago. He wanted to put all his profits into a charity that provided clean drinking water to countries in Africa.However, after concerns about the environmental impact of plastic bottles, Mr. Longcroft decided the Edinburgh and London-based compan
30、y, Choose Water, should go plastic-free. So he came up with a new type of water bottlea waterproof paper bottle.“The outside is made from recycled paper, but the inside has to be waterproof, and provides strength so the bottle would keep its structure, and keep the water fresh, Mr. Longcroft said.Wh
31、en the bottle is thrown in the ocean the degrading process begins within hours leaving the bottle totally degraded(分解)within weeks. The steel cap breaks down within a year.Mr. Longcroft now believes these novel bottles could revolutionise the industry and says the cost of producing the bottle is aro
32、und 5 pence more than one made from single-use plastic.“The main difficulty we face is breaking into a saturated (饱和的)market and competing with an old industry, he said. Changing an industry will be a big uphill battle, but with the support from the public, we will change the way we look at bottled
33、water.”Researchers warn that eight million tonnes of plastics currently find their way into the ocean every year which will stay in the environment for centuries.“We really want to get our bottles on shelves and into peoples hands as soon as possibleif we can stop even one plastic bottle ending up i
34、n the environment it will be worth it,” said Mr Longcroft.12. What is special about the bottle?A. It can be recycled.B. It is plastic-free.C. It purifies sea water.D. It can be used for food.13. What does James Longcroft expect from the new bottles?A. To raise money for charity.B To keep the water f
35、reshC. To reduce ocean pollution.D. To prompt the sale of bottled water.14. Whats the main challenge about the new bottles?A. They face stiff competition to enter market.B. They are more costly than plastic ones.C. They still lack in the public support.D. They take a long time to break down.15. What
36、 does the underlined word “it” in the last paragraph refer to?A. Cutting down on plastic pollution.B. Providing clean water to the public.C. Stopping the use of the plastic bottles.D. Getting people to accept the new bottles.第二节(共5小题:每小题2. 5分, 满分12. 5分)阅读下面短文, 从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。From
37、 18 to 24 May, its Mental Health Awareness Week. 16 What is mental health?Mental health is about how we think, feel and behave. 17 Depression is when you lose interest in things you usually enjoy and feel sad for a long time. Anxiety is feelings of fear and worry. What is Mental Health Awareness Wee
38、k?Mental Health Awareness Week is an annual event that started in the UK in 2001. 18 It is organised by the Mental Health Foundation, a UK charity that raises awareness of mental health problems. Each year, Mental Health Awareness Week has a theme, and this years is “kindness”.Why is this years them
39、e kindness?Mark Rowland, the head of the Mental Health Foundation, says kindness brings people together. 19 The charity wants to highlight the kind things people have been doing during the coronavirus outbreak, such as Colonel Tom Moores fundraising for National Health Service charities, and people
40、showing their gratitude by clapping for carers on Thursday evenings. 20 During the week, the Mental Health Foundation is encouraging people to share stories of kindness on social media. It also wants everyone to be kind to those around them and suggest ideas for how to make the world a kinder place.
41、 There will be virtual fundraising events held throughout the week to raise money for the charity.A. How can I get involved?B. What can you do for the charity?C. The purpose is to educate people about mental health issues.D. Depression and anxiety are examples of mental health problems.E. Scientists
42、 have discovered the connection between depression and anxiety.F. Studies have shown there is a link between acts of kindness and positive mental health.G. This year, the week is being marked with acts of kindness and virtual fundraising events.第二部分语言运用(共两节,满分30分)第一节(共15小题:每小题1分,满分15分)阅读下面短文, 从每题所给的
43、A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。Marco had played piano since he was seven years old. Now, at 13, he was 21 in his first recital (独奏). Oh, he had had the 22to be in many recitals before, but he was always too23 . The few times Marco had 24 to play in front of people other than his family and his teacher,
44、his 25shook so much he could barely hit the notes.This time, though, Marco had 26the pieces so well that he was almost certain he could 27them easily. His teacher, Ms. Marshall, had told him that if he visualized (想象) himself playing 28in front of a crowd, he would be able to overcome his nerves. Be
45、cause of his long hours of29 and daily visualizing, Marco was almost looking forward to the big 30 .On the morning of the recital, Marco woke with a start. All those people would be31him, and it was so easy to make32 ! As he tried to think more positively, he looked out of the window and saw snow fa
46、lling33 . The trees, cars, and houses were already covered in several inches of snow. Then he heard the phone ring. When he34 , he heard Ms. Marshall say, “Bad news, Marco. I had to35 the recital because of this awful snowstorm!”21. A. singingB. performingC. dancingD. listening22. A. storyB. strengt
47、hC. giftD. chance23. A. patientB. confidentC. nervousD. serious24. A. triedB. preferredC. askedD. pretended25. A. legsB. headC. handsD. feet26. A. writtenB. preparedC. adaptedD. recited27. A. get throughB. get overC. look throughD. look into28. A. luckilyB. frequently C. gradually D. beautifully29.
48、A. expectationB. performanceC. practiceD. wait 30. A. decisionB. dayC. planD. idea31. A. watchingB. praisingC. acceptingD. inviting32. A. commentsB. notesC. troubleD. mistakes33. A. lightlyB. casuallyC. heavilyD. hardly34. A. criedB. answeredC. whisperedD. shouted 35. A. put offB. show offC. investi
49、gateD. explore第二节(共10小题:每小题1. 5分, 满分15分)阅读下面短文, 在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。A concrete bookstore under 36. _ (construct) in Wisdom Bay innovation park in Shanghai will be the first 3D-printed bookstore in China, and it is due to open to the public at the end of January, 2021.The bookstore was printed o
50、n-site in three weeks,” He Yuting, 37._ is responsible for this project,from Tsinghua University School of Architecture in Beijing, told the Global Times on Thursday. The printing work has finished and the bookstore will 38. _ (decorate), He told the reporter.39._ (compare) with simple works such as
51、 a 3D-printed flower basin, the bookstore is an innovative attempt in the architecture field, as the 3D-printed architecture is 40._ (cheap) than conventional construction techniques and saves time, He said.41._ makes this bookstore so unique is that “we used fiber concrete to resist compression,” H
52、e added, 42._ (note) that the floor also has a heating system.He mentioned the 3D-printed bookstore is as safe as traditional concrete construction based on their experimental data in 43._ (term) of structure and earthquake resistance.So far, different teams in France, Switzerland and Russia all 44.
53、_ (have) similar research on 3D-printed concrete technology, 45._ Chinas research and achievements in this field are among the best in the world, according to He.第三部分 写作(共两节, 满分40分)第一节(满分15分)假定你是中学生李华,你的外教 Miss White 要求你们周一下午去听一个关于英国历史文化的讲座,你因故不能参加。请你写一张请假条向 Miss White 请假。要点如下:1.表示歉意; 2. 说明理由; 3.其它。
54、注意:1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Miss White,_Yours Sincerely,Li Hua第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。On a warm and sunny summer afternoon, Erika played in her backyard with her new puppy, Blondie. She could feel the rays of the big, bright, beautiful sun warming her like a wool
55、en blanket,and she could smell sweet sunflowers in her nearby garden. As she playfully tried to get a tennis ball out of Blondies mouth, her dad told her they were going to the park with her brother Samuel. As Erika, Samuel, Blondie and their dad began to walk towards the park, they heard a loud whi
56、mper (呜咽), coming from under their big red van (货车) parked in their driveway. When they checked under the van, they found a dog lying on its side and he looked as dirty as a rat.He also smelled like rotten eggs. The family decided to feed the dog.Blondie walked over to an oak tree near the front por
57、ch to take a nap.When Erika and Samuel grabbed the dog food from inside the cabinet, their dad found the dog was too dirty and wanted to bath the dog. After their dad finished filling the metal tub with water, he tried to put the lost dog into the water. However, the dog refused to jump in.Now Blond
58、ie woke up from her nap. She raised her head, jumped up, jogged over to the tub and began licking the stray dogs face. Blondie suddenly jumped in the bath, and strangely, the lost dog followed. It was clear that Blondie liked the new dog.So, Erika and her dad began to give both dogs a bath, but they
59、 soon realized that the lost dog had two deep cuts on his back.After the bath ended and they dried off both dogs, Erika quickly ran back into the house to grab some bandages. After wrapping him up, Erika fed him a large bowl of dog food. Her dad announced they would take him to a shelter tomorrow mo
60、rning and Erica agreed. She named the dog Lucky and made a little bed for him to sleep that night.The next cloudy morning Erika, Samuel, their dad, and Blondie left for the shelter.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When they got to the shelter, they found it was closed and saw a worker inside.
61、 _A few weeks later, Erika saw a post of Luckythe lost dog in a local newspaper. _参考范文沂水一中二轮模拟检测英语试题答案 1-3 DDB 4-7 CDAD 8-11 DACB 12-15BCAD解析:1.细节理解题。根据Commercial Banking Graduate Scheme部分的Location: Our graduate schemes are based in various cities around the U. K., including London, Birmingham, Edin
62、burgh and Bristol.可知,商业银行毕业生计划在伯明翰设有工作地点。故选D项。2.细节理解题。根据Risk Management Graduate Scheme部分的Using artificial intelligence (AI) to simplify our risk management processes.可知,工作者可以用人工智能简化风险管理过程。故选D项。3.细节理解题。根据Manufacturing Graduate Scheme部分的To join us, its crucial that you have a driving license.可知,申请该计划
63、需要有驾驶执照。故选B项。 8.细节理解题。根据第二段第一句中的“resulting in more electricity consumed for air-conditioners and more carbon emissions(排放)”可知,传统玻璃窗会导致空调耗电量和碳排放量增加。由此可知,传统玻璃窗的缺点是会导致更多的能量消耗。故选D。9.段落大意题。通读第三段可知,该段主要介绍这种新型WFG系统的结构。故选A。10.推理判断题。根据第四段内容尤其是最后一句中的“some electricity is required to pump the water back and for
64、th”可知,这种新型注水玻璃窗全自动运行,需要少量的电力用于输送水,被阳光加热的水不仅可以在温度下降时重新加热房子,还可以有其他家庭用途;由此可推知,WFG系统的特点是可以以多种方式循环用水。故选C。11.词义猜测题。根据第五段第二句中的“appealing to a large crowd of environmentalists and contributing to reducing our carbon footprint”可知,这种新型窗户一旦上市就会吸引大批环保主义舍的注意。“appealing to a large crowd of environmentalists”是对“ma
65、ke a real splash”的补充和解释,即意为“吸引注意”,与B项意思相近。故选B。 第二节(共5小题:每小题2. 5分, 满分12. 5分)【语篇解读】这是一篇说明文,介绍了Mental Health Awareness Week。16. G 【解析】本文主要介绍了Mental Health Awareness Week的由来和主题就是善心,故答案为G。17. D 【解析】本题上文说的是精神健康是什么,下文介绍了什么是depression和anxiety,均是精神方面的问题,故答案为D。18.C 【解析】本空下句“It is organised by the Mental Healt
66、h Foundation, a UK charity that raises awareness of mental health problems.”该慈善组织想要唤起人们对健康问题的关注,答案C是说Mental Health Awareness Week的目的就是让人们了解健康问题,承接下文,与下文的mental health problems相呼应,符合文意。19. F 【解析】本答案中的acts of kindness and positive health与上句中的kind things以及下句中的highlight the kind things相呼应。20. A 【解析】本段主要
67、是介绍the Mental Health Foundation鼓励人们分享善事故事和为该组织募捐,答案A反映了本段主旨,故为正确选项。第二部分语言运用(共两节,满分30分)【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文,讲述了Marco进行独奏表演,为克服紧张而不断努力克服紧张后做好准备却因大雪而推迟的故事。21. B 【解析】考查动词。根据上文可知,Marco弹奏钢琴,此处应该是说在他13岁的时候进行第一次独奏表演,故选择答案B。22. D 【解析】考查名词。此处是说Marco以前有机会在很多独奏会上表演,但是他总是很紧张,故答案为D。23. C 【解析】考查形容词。同上题。24. A 【解析】考查动词。句意:
68、有几次,Marco试图在人们的面前表演而不是在家人和他老师面前,他的手还是抖得厉害,几乎找不准音。故答案为A。25. C 【解析】考查名词。此处是说他的手抖得厉害,故答案为C。26. B 【解析】考查动词。根据句意可知,Marco已经准备好了几首曲子,故答案为B。27. A 【解析】考查动词短语。因为Marco已做了充分准备,所以他确信能够很容易的完成演奏,故答案为A。get through意为“完成”;get over意为“克服”;look through意为“浏览”;look into意为“调查”。28. D 【解析】考查副词。句意:他的老师Ms. Marshall告诉他如果他想象自己能够
69、在大家面前演奏得很好,那么就能够克服紧张。故答案为D。frequently意为“经常地”;gradually意为“逐渐地”。29. C 【解析】考查名词。根据文意应该是说Marco经过长时间的练习和每天的想象,他几乎非常期待那重要的一天,故答案为C。30. B 【解析】考查名词。同上题。31. A 【解析】考查动词。句意:人们将观看他的演出,这也会让他容易犯错误。故答案为A。32. D【解析】考查名词。同上题。33. C 【解析】考查副词。由下文可知,雪有几英寸厚,因此雪下得很大,故答案为C。lightly意为“轻轻地”;casually意为“漫不经心地”;heavily意为“猛烈地”;har
70、dly意为“几乎不”。34. B 【解析】考查动词。此处应该是Marco接听电话,故答案为B。35. A 【解析】考查动词短语。由本题前面的“Bad news, Marco.”以及题后的“.because of this awful snowstorm!”可知,因为暴风雪不得不推迟独奏演出,故答案为A。36.construction 37.who 38.be decorated 39.Compared40.cheaper 41.What 42.noting 43.terms 44.have had 45. but /and第三部分 写作(共两节, 满分40分)第一节(满分15分)Dear Mi
71、ss White,Im Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon. Im writing to ask for a leave.I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time. Personally, Im desperate to a
72、chieve a preferable result. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up.Would it be possible for me to have my classmates take notes for my later use.Hoping to have your permission.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua第二节(满分25分)参考范文When they got to the
73、shelter, they found it was closed and saw a worker inside. After knocking for about ten long minutes, Lucky suddenly made a sound. While they were deciding whether to leave the dog there or not, Blondie jumped out of the van and ran to the shelters front door. She barked so loudly that the worker he
74、ard her and opened the door for them to come in. They told the worker about the two deep cuts on his back, and then they gave the worker Lucky. They all said goodbye to Lucky and went home.A few weeks later, Erika saw a post of Luckythe lost dog in a local newspaper. He didnt look dirty and you coul
75、dnt see the cuts on his back. Erika looked through the post and read that a lovely old lady had adopted Lucky. When Erika read this she gave Blondie a big bear hug and showed her dad the post. Knowing what had happened, they all felt pleased that they could help an animal in need. They helped Lucky
76、become lucky again. 评分标准一、评分原则1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于120的,从总分中减去2分)。4. 阅卷评分时,主要从以下三个方面考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(3)故事发展的合理性和上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数
77、降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(21-25分)1. 与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接 合理;2. 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达;3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档(16-20分)1. 与所给短文融洽度较高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理;2. 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达;3. 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑。第三档(11-15分)1. 与所给短文关系较为密切,与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接;2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求,虽有一些错误,但不影响意义的表达;3. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。 第二档(6-10分)1. 与所给短文有一定的关系,与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接;2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限,有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意义的表达;3. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。 第一档(1-5分)1. 与所给短文和开头语的衔接较差;2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目很有限,有较多语法结构和词 汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达;3. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。不得分(0分)白卷、内容太少无法判断或所写内容与所提供内容无关。