1、Unit 3 A taste of English humourSection Guided Writing如何写幽默类故事性的记叙文写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导故事类文章属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用:1要把握住记叙文的六个要素,即时间(when),地点(where),人物(who),事件(what),原因(why)和过程(how)。2要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物,然后写事件的原因及发展过程,最后写结果。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文,使整篇文章融为一体。亮点句式1One day/The other day,sb.planned
2、/intended/wanted/hoped to.某一天/几天前,某人计划/打算/想要/希望2Unfortunately/Fortunately/Suddenly,sb.found that.不幸的是/幸运的是/突然,某人发现3Sb.ran into/came across/met with.in the.某人在遇到了4Sb.felt very content/happy/sad/terrible/embarrassed.某人感到非常满意/高兴/伤心/可怕/尴尬5Sth.happened to sb.某人突然发生了某事6It hit/occurred to/struck sb.that.某人
3、突然想到满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务结合下面的提要,写一篇 100 个词左右的幽默故事。1一个过度肥胖的妇女想向医生寻求减肥的方法;2医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天,然后隔一天(skip a day),再反复如此两周;3一段时间后,她减肥将近 20 磅,医生很吃惊;4秘诀:跳跃。审题谋篇体裁记叙文话题一则幽默小故事 时态一般过去时人称第三人称 结构开始:妇女需要减肥,寻求医生的建议发展:医生提出建议,妇女按医嘱减肥结局:减肥成功,出乎医生意料遣词造句.对接单元词汇1 对满意2令人感到惊讶的3尤其是4指示,说明be content withdirectionsparticularlyastoni
4、shing.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天,然后隔一天(skip a day),再反复如此两周。(advise sb.to do sth.)Doctor for 2 days,then skip a day,and do it like this for 2 weeks.2下次我见你时,你会至少减去 5 磅。(next time 引导时间状语从句),you will have lost at least 5 pounds.advised her to eat vegetables and grainsNext time I see you(二)句式升级3一个过度肥
5、胖的妇女想向医生寻求减肥的方法。她的医生让她节食。(and 连接并列句)A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight.Her doctor put her on a diet.A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight,and her doctor put her on a diet 4一段时间后,当她回来时,她减肥将近 20 磅,医生很吃惊。(v.ing 作结果状语)S
6、ome time later,when she returned she shocked the doctor Some time later,when she returned she lost nearly 20 pounds,by making her doctor shockedlosing nearly 20 pounds妙笔成篇【参考范文】The Perfect DietA terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight,and her doctor put her on a
7、diet.“I advise you to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days,then skip a day,and do it like this for 2 weeks.Youd better not eat too much meat,particularly pork.Next time I see you,you will have lost at least 5 pounds.You will be content with you”However,when the woman returned,she shocked the doctor by losing nearly 20 pounds.“Why,thats astonishing!”the doctor said.“Did you follow my directions?”The woman nodded,“To tell you the truth,I thought I was going to drop dead on the third day.”“From hunger,you mean?”“No,from skipping.”点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!