1、A writing lessonHow to behave well in the cinema?明光二中英语组崔静A discussion Nowadays,the citizens in our city are workingtogether in order to build a civilised,beautiful andmodern city.Everyone plays an important part in it.All of us have to think about a question:How tobe a polite person in public place
2、s?Now we will look at some pictures that we can refer to.Please discuss with your deskmate about the question according to the pictures.After our discussion,lets look at some possible answers due to the pictures.Its our duty to throw rubbish into the dustbin.We cant litter everywhere,which does harm
3、 to our environment.We should save water and electricity.For example,after washing hands,we are supposed to turn off the tap immediately and when leaving the room,its a good habit to turn off the light.We are asked to wait in line in crowded places for the sake of safety.When we think of the tragedy
4、 which happened in Chenyi Square of Shanghai Bund(上海外滩)today,we still cant help feeling so painful.Its dangerous to run after each other in public places.Its forbbiden to smoke in public places,because second-hand smoke has something to do with lung cancer.Its our duty to;We cant;We should(not);We a
5、re supposed to;Its a good habit to We are asked to;Its dangerous to;Its forbbiden to,because.Now,lets look at a short video about the dos and donts in the cinema.When we want to express some rules to obey,we may refer to these sentence patterns.Requirments of the composition随着电影产业的快速发展,现如今,越来越多的人有机会
6、到电影院观看最新影片.这一点无疑丰富了我们的业余生活.然而,如何成为一名文明的观影者?请就文明观影的注意事项,以“How to behave well in the cinema?”为题写一篇不少于100字的英语短文.内容提示如下:电影放映前排队进入放映厅。不可插队，以免造成混乱。对号入座，以便保持良好的秩序。观看影片时请保持安静。手机静音，并且禁止用手机拍照或者摄像。发生火灾时，务必保持冷静。用手捂住鼻子和嘴巴，弯下腰，在工作人员的带领下，从安全门处，排队离开。切勿在人群中相互推搡，这会对大家的安全造成极大的威胁。FFFFSteps to write the composition.Step
7、 Outlining.Step Key words.Step Sentence patterns.Step Linking words.Step Writing the composition as a draft.Step PolishingStep Copying it onto the notebook or paper.Q1:How many paragraphs will be there?Q2:How will the composition be developed?A1:Three.A2:Paragraph 1Leading-in Paragraph 2Statements o
8、f the four points.Paragrph 3 Summary.pragraph 1point 1point3point4point2pragraph3paragraph2 Lets divide the whole composition into four parts for us to write.Part 1:Leading-inPart2:point1&point2Part3:point3&point4Part4:Summary Four students work in a group,each one responsible for a part.Then we are
9、 asked to integrate the four parts into a complete composition.随着的发展丰富vt.文明的混乱保持良好的秩序对造成威胁with the development ofenrichcivilized/polite/well-bahavedchaoskeep in a good order/maintain in a good ordercause threat to/result in threat to/threatenfirstly,secondly,thirdly,lastly/last but not least/finally
10、whats more/besides/in additionhowever,and,but,thenmeanwhile,at the same timeStudents presentation Each group selects a student representativeAnd four students will come to the balckboard,presenting your co-compositions in front of the whole class.After the presentations,lets look at a possible versi
11、on and try to find the keywords,the linking words and the sentence patterns that are used in it.Group workA possible version With the rapid development of film industry,nowadays more and more people have access to the latest films in the cinema,which enriches our spare time to a cretain extent.Howev
12、er,some bad behaviors in the cinema may bring trouble to other audience.Then how to be a well-bahaved film watcher?We have to pay attention to some rules.Firstly,we are supposed to enter the show ball in a queue.We cant jump the queue,which may result in chaos.Whats more,its a good babit to be seate
13、d in your own seat and it helps to keep in a good order.In addition,while watching the film,we shouldt make any noise and its advised to keep our cellphones quiet.At the same time,its forbidden to take photos of or film the movie with our cellphones.Another important thing is that when a fire breaks
14、 out,we ought to keep a cool head.We are advised to cover our mouths and noses with our hands,bend down and leave from the exit one by one under the guidence of one of the staff.In no case can we push through the crowd,which may bring great threat to our safety.If we do the right things in the cinem
15、a,we will enjoy ourselves more.Lets start from ourselves and take action from now on.A possible versionWith the rapid development of film industry,nowadays more and more people have access to the latest films in the cinema,which enriches our spare time to a cretain extent.However,some bad behaviors
16、in the cinema may bring some trouble to other audience.Then how to be a well-bahaved film watcher?We have to pay attention to some rules.Firstly,we are supposed to enter the show ball in a queue.We cant jump the queue,which may result in chaos.Whats more,its a good babit to be seated in your own sea
17、t and it helps to keep in a good order.In addition,while watching the film,we shouldt make any noise and its advised to keep our cellphones quiet.At the same time,its forbidden to take photos or film the movie with our cellphones.Another important thing is that when a fire breaks out,we ought tokeep
18、 a cool head.We are advised to cover our mouths and noses with our hands,bend down and leave from the exit one by one under the guidence of one of the staff.In no case can we push through the crowd,which may bring great threat to our safety.If we do the right things in the cinema,we will enjoy ourse
19、lves more.Lets start from ourselves and take action from now on.Summary Read more,speak more,practice more and we will be able to write compositions better and better.Homework Each student exchange your composition with your deskmates and then try to find out some mistakes in it and correct them.Find as many mistakes as possible so long as your deskmates version isnt a possible version(范文).Then you are asked to hand in your homework tommorrow morning.Thank you for your listening.Have a nice day!
