1、To write a description of an event using appropriate linking words.GUIDED WRITING【Writing Objectives】Leading in1.Can you describe a party you 2.have been to?2.What happened during the party?Today lets learn how to write an event!Stage 1 题材分析描述事件基本结构:事件发生+事件发展+事件结局确定好文章中心思想理清事件的前因后果安排好行文顺序_Stage 21)I
2、ntroduction to the situation:Whya birthday party WherehouseWhenJune,last year Whofamily and friends2)The beginning:What preparations?What time?What food?3)Development:What happened during the party?4)ConclusionWhat happened in the end?When did it finish?Was it good?根据下面提示,分4段叙述你参加过的生日宴会.写作思路Stage 3话
3、题词语汇聚1.表达时间很久以前在早上6点钟在他来这儿之前到上学期末为止在暑假期间直到才当的时候a long time agoat six oclock in the morningbefore he came hereby the end of last termduring the summer holidaynotuntilWhile _2.表达地点在十字路口在山脚下在公园中央在公共汽车前部在树上在街道对面在路的两边在右边at the crossingat the foot of the mountainin the middle of the parkin the front of th
4、e busin the treeon the other side of the streeton both sides of the roadon the right_3.表达因果as a resultbecause of consequentlyIt turns out to beThe primary reason is_结果因为结果结果是主要原因是4.关键词语举行宴会庆祝生日蛋糕和着音乐跳舞抱怨过得愉快hold a partycelebratebirthday cakedance to musiccomplain aboutenjoy oneself_1.去年6月,他举办了个宴会来庆祝
5、我16岁生日。Last year in June,he had a party to celebrate my sixteenth birthday.2.妈妈为我准备了一个很棒的蛋糕。Mum prepared me a wonderful birthday cake.3.当我们跳舞时,一个邻居跑来抱怨噪音太大。While we were dancing happily,one of the neighbors came to complain about the noise.4.虽然房子一片狼藉,但我们玩的很愉快。Though at last the house was a bit of a
6、mess,we enjoyed ourselves.Stage 4 连词成句Last year in June,we had a party to celebrate my sixteen birthday.We held the party at my house and invited all my friends.Before the party,my parents prepare some delicious food and drinks.Mum prepared me a wonderful birthday cake as well.At first I was very ne
7、rvous.But as soon as my friends arrived,my nervousness was gone.The party started at about 8 o clock.First of all we had a drink and ate the delicious food and birthday cake.After that,we danced to some great music.While we were dancing happily,one of the neighbors came to complain about the noise,but in the end she came in and had a drink.Though the house was a bit of a mess after the party,we enjoyed ourselves.Stage 5