1、写一个运动故事本单元写作任务是写一个运动故事，属于记叙文。由于所写的故事是作者自己所经历的事情，故时态通常为一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。基本框架1开头：点明运动的缘由；2主体：讲述运动的过程；3结尾：总结运动的影响。常用词块1go hiking 去远足2in high spirits 情绪高涨3a close game 势均力敌的比赛4go all out 全力以赴5break the record 打破纪录6build up ones body 增强某人的体质常用语句精彩开头1Recently our class held a basketball game between teache
2、rs and students to improve the relationship between us.最近我们学校举办了一场师生篮球赛，目的是改善师生关系。2In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountainclimbing on April 10.为了鼓励同学们参加户外锻炼，我们学校于4月10日组织了一次爬山活动。3When I was six years old，my parents often took me to a swimming pool.我
3、6岁时，父母经常带我去游泳池。丰满主体1Bathed in the sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy.沐浴在阳光里，我们高兴得欢呼雀跃。2Not having exercised for a long time，I ran very slow in the sports meeting.由于很长时间没有进行体育锻炼了，我在运动会上跑得很慢。3The moment we won the game，an old saying hit my mindNo pains，no gains.我们一赢得比赛，我就想到了一句古老的谚语“不劳则无获”。4Everyo
4、ne on the playground stood，and the cheering went on for 5 minutes.操场上所有人都站立着，欢呼声持续了5分钟。余味结尾1To sum up，we benefited a lot from the activity.总之，我们从这次活动中受益匪浅。2Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.只有以这种方式我们才有足够的精力学得更好。3Not only did it give us relaxation from heavy school work，it al
5、so promoted the friendship among us.它不仅使我们从繁重的学业中放松，而且促进了我们之间的友谊。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily得知你最近在国际短跑比赛中获得冠军，来信请你介绍一下你的运动经历。请你给她写一封回信，要点包括：1开始运动的时间；2运动中遇到的困难；3希望实现的运动目标。注意：1词数80左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Emily，I am so delighted to hear from you.I was so excited when I stood on the podium(领奖台) again this year.
6、_Yours，Li Hua学生习作Dear Emily，I am so delighted to hear from you.I was so excited when I stood on the podium(领奖台) again this year.I won a place in the national team when I was 15 years old.Then I won several championships.Last year，I hurt my waist.I had to spend time to recover my waist.My doctor told
7、 me that after a long time I can return to the game.Under the patient help of my coach，I started training again.I regained my previous capabilities.I was very happy that I won the gold medal in the first competition of this year.I think I can break a world record one day.Yours，Li Hua名师点评：1习作中出现了一些错误
8、。例如第二段第四句应是spend time recovering；第二段第六句应为With the patient help of。2有些简单句可以进行合并。例如第二段前两句可以用并列连词连接在一起；第三、四句可用现在分词短语作状语连接在一起；第六、七句可以用不定式作目的状语进行合并。3尽可能多使用固定短语和句式。例如第二段倒数第二句可用to my happiness；第二段第五句中的after a long time可使用句型it was a long time before .。升格作文Dear Emily，I am so delighted to hear from you.I was
9、so excited when I stood on the podium(领奖台) again this year.I won a place in the national team when I was 15 years old and won several championships after that.Hurting my waist last year，I had to take time off to recover from the injury.It was a long time before my doctor told me that I can return to
10、 the game.With the patient help of my coach，I started training again to regain my previous capabilities.To my happiness，I won the gold medal in the first competition of this year.And who knows，I can break a world record one day.Yours，Li Hua假定你是李华，过去迷恋游戏导致学习和身体都受到了影响。后来在一个跑步软件的帮助下，你坚持跑步，改掉了以前的坏习惯，改进了
11、不足。请根据以上提示写一篇记叙文。注意：1词数80左右。2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】In the past，I was addicted to playing games，which had a bad effect on my study and health.Later，my mother recommended an app called Running Power to me，which lists my performance against other runners in the social network.At first I kept running just to see my name in the top five.Now Ive fallen in love with running.Whether Im at the gym or on the road，I can run happily.At the same time，I also find my tension and stress from my study disappear as I run.
