1、Unit 4Natural DisastersPeriod 5Reading for Writing()写作培优课 Write a summary(概要写作)写作培优课【写作指导】文体概述此类写作要求在正确理解文章的基础上,并且在不改变原文中心思想的前提下,用简明、精炼的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。【步骤解析】(1)读懂原文,抓住大意。(2)划主题句,圈关键词。(3)转换表达,重组信息。【典题示例】阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。An earthquake hit Kashmir on Oct.8,2005.It took some 75,000 lives,inju
2、red 130,000 and left nearly 3.5 million without food,jobs or homes.Almost overnight,scores of tent villages went up across the region with the help of International Aid Organization,military personnel(人员)and aid groups working day and night to shelter the survivors before winter set in.Mercifully,th
3、e season was mild.But with the coming of spring,the survivors would be moved again.Camps that provided health care,food and shelter for 150,000 survivors have begun to close as they were never intended to be permanent.For most of the survivors,the thought of going back brings mixed emotions.The past
4、 six months have been difficult.Families of as many as 10 people have had to shelter in a single tent and share cook stoves and bathing facilities with neighbors.“They are looking forward to the clean water of their rivers,”officials say.“They are dreaming of free fresh fruit.They want to get back t
5、o their fields and start farming again.”But most will be returning to nothing but piles of ruins.In many villages,electrical lines have not been repaired,nor have roads.Aid workers measure that it will take years to rebuild what the earthquake took away.And for the thousands of survivors,the recover
6、y will never be complete.Yet the survivors have to start somewhere.New homes can be built from the stones,bricks and beams(梁)of old ones.Spring is coming and it is a good time to start again.Step 1谋篇立意人称:第_人称时态:一般_时要点:段落_及关键信息三过去主题句Step 2语言支架1.读懂原文,抓住大意。大意:This passage tells us _happening in Kashmir
7、 on Oct.8,2005,which _a great number of _,but with the spring coming,_started to _.an earthquakebrought aboutdeaths and injuriesthe survivorsrebuild their homes2.划主题句,圈关键词。(第一段)主题句:_hit Kashmir on Oct.8,2005.关键词:_(受伤),_(组织),_(庇护),_(幸存者)(第二段)主题句:But with the coming of spring,the survivors _again.(第三段
8、)主题句:For most of the survivors,the thought of going back brings _.关键词:_(废墟)_(复杂的情绪)(第四段)主题句:Yet the survivors have to _.An earthquakeinjuredorganizationsheltersurvivorswould be movedmixedemotionsruinsmixed emotionsstart somewhere3.转换表达,重组信息。On Oct.8,2005,an earthquake hit Kashmir.It _(造成太多死亡、伤害和重大损失
9、).The international rescue organization _(为幸存者安排了避难所)before the winter came.The survivors had to _(被搬走)after suffering for six months._(带着复杂的情绪),most survivors wanted to go back but they were afraid of _(面对废墟).Although the recovery will never be complete,the survivors had to start _(重建他们的家园).caused
10、too many deaths,injuries and heavy lossessheltered the survivorsbe movedWith mixed emotionsfacing the ruinstorebuild their homesStep 3润色成篇On Oct.8,2005,an earthquake hit Kashmir,(要点1)which caused too many deaths,injuries and heavy losses.Immediately,(要点2)the International Aid Organization sheltered
11、the survivors before the winter came.However,(要点3)the survivors had to be moved after suffering for six months.(要点4)With mixed emotions,most survivors wanted to go back but they were afraid of facing the ruins.(要点5)Although the recovery will never be complete,the survivors had to start to rebuild th
12、eir homes.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.strike v.侵袭2.disastrous adj.灾难性的3.misfortune n.不幸4.destructiveadj.破坏性的,毁灭性的5.magnitude n.震级6.extreme adj.极端的7.deliveryn.递送8.recovery n.恢复9.forest fire森林火灾10.an economic loss of.的经济损失话题金句背诵1.In January,a powerful earthquake struck Haiti and left millions of people homeless.今
13、年一月,一场强烈的地震袭击海地,造成数百万人无家可归。2.All at once the sky was covered with dark clouds and less than a minute we saw the heavy rain.突然之间天空乌云密布,顷刻间我们就看到大雨下起来了。3.We have to rebuild our homeland as soon as possible after the earthquake.震后我们需要尽快重建我们的家园。4.Learn from yesterday,live for today,hope for tomorrow.借鉴昨天,活在今天,憧憬明天。5.If everyone devotes a little of his love to others,the world will become the wonderful Eden.如果人人都献出一点爱,世界将变成美好的人间。本课结束
