1、专题五 书面表达第一节 写作技能点拨三、增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。微技能突破随堂限时练PART1微技能突破微技能(一)列举具体的实例进行补充说明1.我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and sa
2、ve the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use single-use products，plant more trees and save water and energy.2.我要花一些时间和父母待在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill s
3、pend some time staying with my parents，chatting with them and doing some housework.3.我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible，we can travel together or share traveling expe
4、riences.4.我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。Im a healthy boy full of energy，so I like sports very much.I am a healthy boy full of energy，so I like sports very much，especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time，Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.题组过关1 根据括号内提示完成句子1.The Internet is playin
5、g a more and more important part in our daily life._(我们不仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，but also get information，send emails and attend online schools.2.Laura is a standard American style.(她说一口完美的美式英语)，and thats why I am crazy about her.3.However，it seems people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on c
6、ommunication._(比如，很多人开始越来越不重视面对面的交流).Wecan not only read news from home and abroadShe speaks perfect American EnglishFor example，many people begin to pay lessattention to face-to-face communication4.However，every coin has two sides，so does the Internet._(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作).For example，being los
7、t in the Internet may affect our study and work微技能(二)增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1.我有时去村西的小河游泳。I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染)Weather permitting，I w
8、ent swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.(相关背景)2.我发现了一些不良行为。I found some bad behavior.I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall；some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere.(相关行为描述)3.晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。After supper，the man went
9、to his bedroom.After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神态、动作)题组过关2 根据括号内提示完成句子5.(考虑到这项活动很有意义)，we intend to design a uniform suited to our own class.6.Ill try my best to make your uncle happy here._(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观).7.Many teenagers dont pay any attention to their health，esp
10、ecially during the holiday.(他们花费太多的时间看电视)，playing games and chatting on the Internet all night.8.Looking back to my stay in Britain，(我感到非常高兴和满意).9.In the summer vacation，(我渴望得到一份兼职工作).Considering the activity is of great value/is meaningfulI am eagerly lookingforward to his visit to our cityThey spe
11、nd too much time watching TVI felt very happy and satisfiedI am longing to get/have a part-time job微技能(三)增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1.我要和父母一起去超市购物。Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and wont be back until about 500 in t
12、he afternoon.(增加时间)2.我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地点)题组过关3 根据括号内提示完成句子10.Yao Ming，(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，started playing for the Shanghai Sharks as a teenager.11.The Chinese Silk
13、 Road，_(起源于今天的西安，并最后达到的东海岸)the Mediterranean，is well-known to the world.12.Today I paid a visit to one of the greatest cities(在亚洲，中国的北京).13.I was attracted by the beauty of the city _(一就)I arrived here at 6 oclock in the morning by plane.who was born in Shanghai on September 12,1980which starts from
14、 todays Xian and finallyfinishes at the east coast ofin Asia，Beijing in Chinathe moment/immediately/as soonas/directly微技能(四)适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容1.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。(1)I need a good rest.Ill do some reading.I need a good rest
15、 because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Of course，Ill do some reading for fun，and for knowledge as well.(因果关系)(2)Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free time，Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语)If possible，Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语
16、)If possible，Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about the society.(结果状语)2.Tracy来电话：咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something impo
17、rtant to do.(原因状语)3.帮助邻居的孩子们补习英语。I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.(增添结果)题组过关4 根据括号内提示完成句子14.Tomb Sweeping Day，(传统的中国节日之
18、一)，usually falls around April 5 every year to honor the dead and satisfy their ancestors.15.(伴随着全球气候变得越来越暖和)，our earth is faced with great threat.16.(坐落在东北部)，Beijing is well-known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history.17.During this period，people will go to clean the grave
19、s and pay respect to their ancestors，(带上食物和水果).one of the traditional Chinese festivalsWith the global climate becoming warmer and warmerSituated/Located in northeastcarrying food and fruit18.(作为一名高中生)，its everyones duty to do something to save our earth.19.(众所周知)，Earth Hour is an activity which aim
20、s at saving energy.Being a senior school studentAs is known to all/As everyone knows微技能(五)结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等1.Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)2.I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)3.In a word，if she would like to learn
21、Chinese，I hope she will do it well.(愿景)4.As students，its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)题组过关5 根据括号内提示完成句子20.(作为一名专业的篮球运动员)，he is one of Chinas best-known athletes.21.I think Beijing(非常值得再次参观).22.In my view，(不管因特网多么吸引人)，it shouldnt separate us from our loved ones.23.
22、(通过这个实验我们得出一个结论)：the temperature doesnt change when ice is melting into water.24.Lets develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and _(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献).25.Therefore，we should spend time with our families，_(享受我们在一起的时光).As a professional basketball playeris well worth a second visitno matte
23、r how/however attractive the Internet isWe drew a conclusion through the experimenttry to makemore contributions to our environmentenjoying the timewhen we are togetherPART 2随堂限时练.按要求对下列句子进行扩充1.每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语)Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam._2.复旦大学位于上海。(增加wh
24、ich引导的非限制性定语从句)Fudan University is located in Shanghai，which _.3.不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语)，whatever challenge I will face，I will never give in.If we areprepared，we will not feel worried.is an international city whereI can get a lot of knowledge and experienceTo realize my dream4.我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加
25、具体信息说明)We should learn how to get along well with others.For example，_.5.一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语)Some students are so worried about exams that they cant fall asleep at night.As a result，.we shouldrespect teachers and be friendly with classmatesthey feel sleepy in the day time and cant concentrat
26、e in class.请为下面的短文适当增加细节Dear Sam，The College Entrance Examination lasts for two days.The examinees are tested on Chinese，math，science and arts.We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex.参考范文Dear Sam，Thank you for your concern.Now Ill te
27、ll you something about the once-a-year College Entrance Examination.There is no doubt that the examination is very important.It lasts for two days from June 7th to 8th.The examinees are tested on Chinese and math on the first day.Science and arts are tested on the second day.We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex.But we are full of confidence because we are well prepared.We all believe that the fruits of our efforts will be sweet.
