1、Unit 2 Healthy LifestylePeriod 5Using Language()写作培优课健康的生活方式【写作指导】文体概述 建议信是英语写作中特别常见的写作文体。在学习、生活中每个人都会遇到各种各样的问题,同时也会对生活中观察到的问题发表自己的看法。因此通过书信的形式来表达一个人的思想就成了建议类书信的一种常见的写作训练。而现代人对于健康,尤其是青少年健康的关注是一个重要的关注的焦点。写作素养提升框架构建 除了遵循通常书信的基本格式外,建议类书信在结构上具有以下特征:开篇:展示你所观察到的现象或问题;主体:对上述现象或问题的态度或看法;结尾:针对上述现象或问题提出建议或解决方
2、案。【典题示例】假设你是李华,请你就青少年中普遍存在的诸如吃过多的垃圾食品、熬夜上网打游戏、长时间看手机等一些不健康的生活习惯向21世纪英语报的编辑写一封信,提出自己合理化的建议,内容如下:1.不良习惯造成在身心方面的影响;2.你的看法和建议。注意:写作词数为80个左右。Step 1谋篇立意体裁:应用文TipsProblems among teens:too much junk food,online games,playing with smart phones without limits;Effects:affect them both physically and mentally.W
3、hat to do:reduce the intake of sugary food,limit the time online,etc.时态:一般现在时,将来时人称:第一、三人称Step 2语言支架1.我很高兴与你交流关于青少年中普遍存在的不健康生活方式问题的看法。be glad to do sth.,be delighted to do sth.,be more than happy to do sth._exchange ideas _ sb.与某人交流看法_不健康的生活方式_ 非常高兴做某事withunhealthy lifestyleIm more than happy to exc
4、hange ideas with you about the unhealthy lifestyleteenagers commonly have in their life.2.他们经常吃过多的高糖、高脂肪的垃圾食品,导致肥胖问题。_ food(which is)high in sugar and fat.高糖、高脂肪的垃圾食品lead to,contribute to _体重增加;overweight _ _ junk导致,造成weight gain超重They often eat too much junk food high in sugar and fat,which is a ma
5、jorcontributing factor of their weight problems.3.痴迷于网络游戏、长时间看手机,使他们不能专注于学习。be addicted to_be glued to_focus on,concentrate on _distract ones attention from sth._ 痴迷于盯着专注于某事分散某人的注意力Some of them are addicted to online games or are glued to the smart phone screens for a long time,which stops them conc
6、entrating on their lessons.4.所有这些都对青少年身心方面有害。be bad for/be harmful to _physically and mentally _ 对有坏处/有害身体上和精神上All of these are harmful to them(teenagers)both physically and mentally.5.必须采取措施来帮助孩子们改掉这些坏习惯。do something to do/take measures to do sth._break a bad habit_ 采取措施做某事改掉坏习惯Something must be do
7、ne to help young kids to break their bad living habits.6.最好是鼓励孩子多吃蔬菜和水果,避免高糖高脂肪的食物。It is better(for sb.)to do sth._take exercise regularly_be beneficial _对有益_ 某人最好做某事经常锻炼toIt is better to encourage young kids to eat more fruit and vegetables instead ofsugary or fatty food.7.希望我的建议能在改变孩子们生活方式方面会有所帮助。
8、of some help to sb._make a positive change _对某人有些帮助做出积极的改变I hope that my advice can be of some help in helping young kids make a positivechange in their lifestyle.Step 3润色成篇Dear editor,Im more than happy to exchange ideas with you about the unhealthy lifestyle teenagers commonly have in their life.T
9、hey often eat too much junk food high in sugar and fat,which is a major contributing factor of their weight problems.Besides,some of them are addicted to online games or are glued to the smart phone screens for a long time,which makes them nearsighted and distracts their attention from their school
10、lessons.To make things worse,some of them are less connected with the people around them.Something has to be done to help young kids to break their bad living habits.It is better to encourage young kids to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of sugary or fatty food.Taking more exercise regularly i
11、s also beneficial to them.I hope that my advice can be of some help in helping young kids make a positive change in their lifestyle.Yours,Li Hua【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.junk food垃圾食品2.develop a habit of doing sth.培养做某事的习惯3.contribute to 导致,造成,促成4.be addicted to 痴迷于,对上瘾5.focus ones attention on/concentrate on
12、专注于6.work out regularly 经常锻炼7.benefit from 从中受益8.of some use 有所帮助话题好句背诵1.They often stay up too late,playing online games crazily,which is one reason for their falling behind in their study.他们经常疯狂地熬夜玩网络游戏,这是他们学习落后的一个原因。2.What is concerning parents most is that some of young kids are less connected with the people around them.最让父母担心的是,其中的一些孩子很少与人交流。3.A healthy lifestyle can make them feel refreshed and energetic.健康的生活方式可以让他们感到精神焕发和精力充沛。写作点拨(略)
