1、Narrative WritingHow to polish the language?Sentence patternLanguage VocabularyGrammarGrammar disagreementmisusetensesubject and verbpersonarticlepart of speechVocabularyspelling mistakeslimited vocabularycollocation errors词组搭配错误Chinglish or improper use Sentence pattern incomplete sentencestoo many
2、 simplesentenceslack of diversityTip 1:Check to avoid grammar and spelling mistakes.o Agreement of the tense（时态一致）o Agreement of the subject and verb（主谓一致）o Agreement of person（人称一致）o Correct use of the articles（冠词）and the part of speech（词性）Tip 2:Make good use of adj&adv.o Memories come flooding bac
3、k to the day when o Vivid memories come flooding back to the day when o I will remember the day when o I will clearly remember the day when o I believe that o I firmly believe that Tip 3:Make good use of prep.oBecause the weather was fine,our journey was comfortable.o Thanks to the fine weather,oBec
4、ause my friends helped and encouraged me,I could move on.oWith my friends help and encouragement,I oWithout my friends help and encouragement,I couldnt oIt was hard for me to describe the beautiful scenery with words.oThe beautiful scenery was beyond words.(thanks to)Tip 4:Change the part of speech.
5、o It is necessary to do o It is a necessity/must to do o Doing is important.o Doing is of great importance.o Reading is beneficial to us.o Reading is of great benefit to us.Tip 5:Apply different vocabulary.o Suddenly I woke up.o It cried.o Everyone shouted loudly.o I had better take it down to him.o
6、 The butcher went through the crowd.All of a suddenlet out a cryat the top of their voicesmight as wellmade his wayWe were climbing the mountain.We were making our way step by step onto the mountain.I was very tired.I was tired out.I was worn out.I was exhausted.I was too tired to walk any farther.M
7、y friend helped me.My friend gave/lent me a hand.My friend did me a big favor.I was happy.I was extremely happy.I was wild with joy.I was on top of the world.As soon as I arrived at the top of the mountain,I couldnt help cheering.I couldnt help but cheer.The moment I Upon arriving at Hardly had I ar
8、rived at the mountain when I couldnt No sooner had I arrived at the mountain than I couldnt Tip 6:Use proper complex sentences,including some special patterns.o He was very excited.He thought he had both babies.o He was so excited that he thought he had both babies.o Mrs.Wilkins was in the middle of
9、 the crowd.She was carrying on like a mad woman.o In the middle of the crowd was Mrs.Wilkins,who was carrying on Tip 6:Use proper complex sentences,including some special patterns.o I will never forget the experience.o Never will I forget o I didnt understand the true meaning of until then.o It was
10、not until then that I came to understand the true meaning of Tip 7:Write proper English idioms and sayings.o At first,I thought it was easy for us to o it was a piece of cake for us to o It was my first time to climb a mountain.o I was a green hand in climbing mountains.Tip 8:Try using rhetoric skil
11、lso In the middle of the crowd was Mrs.Wilkins,who was carrying on like a mad woman.o I felt the world was like a hell.o I stood at the top of the mountain,like a bird flying in the sky.o Lost in the Internet world,you lose your passion for life,miss the beauty of nature and make an indifferent person of yourself.PS:Some useful transition words in time ordero at first,later,at the/that moment,then,by and by,before long,afterwards,from then on,at lasto the moment/instant o meanwhile=at the same time,o all of a sudden
