1、Unit 5 MusicPeriod 5Reading for Writing()写作培优课演讲稿音乐对人类生活的影响(How music can change a persons life)【写作指导】话题阐述 本单元的写作任务是以演讲稿的形式谈一谈音乐对人类生活的影响。在写作中尝试使用比喻(明喻,暗喻),拟人,引用,重复等修辞方法。写作素养提升文体概述1.本文文体为演讲稿,主要谈论音乐对人们生活的影响,比如:音乐可以放松人的心情,音乐使人健康,音乐给人以鼓舞并通过具体例子加以佐证,让人们真正意识到音乐对人类生活的积极影响。2.人称多为第一人称。3.时态多为一般现在时,但要视具体情况而定,也
2、可穿插其他时态(比如在讲述自己的经历时常用过去时)。框架构建1.自我介绍并给出演讲的话题2.你的音乐体验以及音乐对你的影响。3.把自己的体验同观众联系起来并结束你的演讲。(开篇:自我介绍及演讲话题)My name is _and its an honor for me to be here and share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.(主体:自己的音乐体验以及音乐对自己所产生的影响)There was a time when I felt so depressed.that.One day I o
3、verheard the song.Not only.but also.touched me deeply.It was like a stimulant(兴奋剂)and filled me with.,inspiring me to overcome.It is the song that gives me.So next time when you have the same problem,you might as well.(结尾:把自己的体验同观众联系起来并结束你的演讲)As the saying goes,without music,life is of no value.When
4、 you are stressed,.When you are depressed,.When you are tired,.In a word,music makes you.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it part of your life.Thats all for my speech.【典题示例】人们体验音乐的方式各不相同,音乐也给人们带来了不同的体验,你认为音乐对你有什么样的影响?假如你是李华,请结合自己的经历写一篇演讲稿,谈一谈音乐对你的生活的影响。要点如下:1.自我介绍并给出演讲的话题2.你的音
5、乐体验3.音乐对你的影响4.把自己的体验同观众联系起来并结束你的演讲注意:1.词数80左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Step 1谋篇立意体裁:应用文Tips基本信息:name,the topic of the speech主体:my experience with musichow music made me feel结尾:treasure music and make it part of your lifeThank you时态:一般现在时/一般过去时人称:第一人称Step 2语言支架1.很荣幸能代表所有的学生发表关于音乐对我们生活的影响的演讲。_很荣幸做某事_代表发表演讲_ a
6、speech 连词成句:_Its a great honor to doon behalf ofdeliver/giveIts a great honor for me to deliver a speech about the effect that music has onour life on behalf of all the students.2.众所周知,音乐在我们生活中起着重要的作用。As we all know_ 在中起重要作用连词成句:_众所周知play an important part in.As we all know,music plays an important
7、part in our life.3.有一段时间因为连续的考试失败,我是如此沮丧以至于我想放弃。so depressed that._ 放弃_ 用when 引导的定语从句:_ 如此沮丧以至于give upThere was a time when I felt so depressed because of the continuous failure inthe exams that I even wanted to give up.4.不仅它的歌词还有它的节奏都深深地打动了我。_不但而且_触动,打动用not only.but also.结构_ not only.but also.touch
8、Not only the lyrics but also the rhythm touched me deeply.5.它像一支兴奋剂一样给了我力量,激励着我战胜困难。_战胜困难 stimulant _ 用比喻的修辞翻译句子:_overcome the difficulties兴奋剂It was like a stimulant and filled me with strength,inspiring me to overcomethe difficulties.6.正是那首歌给了我强大的动力,无尽的希望和光明的未来。强大的动力 _ unlimited hope_用强调结构来翻译句子:_ s
9、trong motivation无尽的希望It is the song that gives me strong motivation,unlimited hope and bright future.7.下一次当你有同样的问题时,你不妨听一听激昂的音乐。不妨 _ passionate music _ 连词成句:_ might as well激昂的音乐Next time when you have the same problem,you might as well listen to somepassionate music.8.常言道,没有音乐,生命是没有价值的。_常言道be of no
10、value_ 连词成句:_ As the saying goes没有价值As the saying goes,without music,life is of no value.Step 3润色组篇Good morning,my name is Li Hua.Its a great honor for me to deliver a speech about the effect that music has on our life on behalf of all the students.As we all know,music plays an important part in our
11、 life.There was a time when I felt so depressed because of the continuous failure in the exams that I even wanted to give up.One day I overheard the song Start All Over Again by Liu Huan.Not only the lyrics but also the rhythm touched me deeply.It was like a stimulant and filled me with strength,ins
12、piring me to overcome the difficulties.Since then I have become more and more confident and done better and better inthe exams.It is the song that gives me strong motivation,unlimited hope and bright future.So next time when you have the same problem,you might as well listen to some passionate music
13、.As the saying goes,without music,life is of no value.When you are stressed,music can reduce your stress.When you are depressed,music can help melt away a bad mood.When you are tired,music can make you relaxed and when you are giving up,music can give you strong motivation.In a word,music makes you
14、happier and healthier.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it part of your life.Thats all for my speech.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.音乐种类:traditional music传统音乐classical music古典音乐light music轻音乐dancing music舞曲pop music流行音乐folk music民间音乐country music乡村音乐Jazz爵士乐rock&roll摇滚pop rock 流行摇滚blues布鲁斯,蓝调s
15、wing摇摆乐campus songs校园歌曲 civic ballad民谣national music民族音乐 world famous music世界名曲folk songs民歌art songs艺术歌曲art ballad艺术民谣或歌曲heavy metal 重金属音乐2.相关词汇:lyrics 歌词beat 节拍 composition音乐作品melody 旋律national anthem国歌rhyme 韵律tempo 拍子,音乐速度3.形容词:black;blue 忧郁的melodious 悠扬的pleasant 悦耳的relaxing 令人放松的soulful 深情的4.兴趣爱好
16、:be good at(擅长),be fond of(喜爱),be interested in(对感兴趣),be crazy about(对着迷),do well in(在方面做得好),have a strong desire to do(非常渴望做某事),long for(渴望),put ones heart into(全心投入),enjoy(喜欢),love(热爱)等。话题金句背诵1.If you are unhappy,music will make you happy,and if you are happy,music will make you happier.如果你不开心,听音乐
17、会让你开心,如果你开心,听音乐会让你更开心。2.Classic music will remind me of some beautiful things happened long long ago.古典音乐会让我想起以前发生的美好的事情。3.Music can also cure some illness.音乐能治疗疾病。4.Soft music can help some people to fall asleep.柔和的音乐可以帮一些人入睡。5.Music has charm to soothe a savage breast,to soften rocks or bend a kno
18、tted oak.(William Congreve.British dramatist)音乐有着抚慰粗野的胸怀、软化顽石或使千年老橡树弯腰的魅力。(英国剧作家威廉康格里夫)6.Music is the only language in which you cannot say a mean or sarcastic thing.(John Erskine,American educator)音乐是唯一不能表达卑鄙的或讽刺的事物的语言。(美国教育家约翰厄斯金)7.音乐从我耳边飘过,就像邮差送来一封不属于我的信。Music drifted past my ears like a letter f
19、rom a postman which didnt belong to me.8.音乐中蕴藏着如此悦耳的催人奋进的力量。Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force.9.只要有音乐,就不会有世界末日。As long as there is music,there wont be the end of the world.10.对我来说,音乐是灵魂的完美表现。For me,music is the perfect expression of the soul.【写作点拨】常见的英语修辞 修辞手法(figure of speech)是通过修饰
20、、调整语句,运用特定的表达形式以提高语言表达作用的方式和方法。修辞不仅仅在中文里很常见,在英文里也是多种多样。这篇文章里,我们就来谈一谈英文中常见的修辞手法。1.simile明喻A simile is a figure of speech in which two fundamentally different things are explicitly compared,usually in a phrase introduced by like or as.明喻是常用as或like等词将两种不同事物通过比较而连接起来的一种修辞手法。让我们看几个例子:Good coffee is like
21、friendship:rich and warm and strong.好的咖啡如同友谊,丰厚,温暖,热烈。Life is rather like opening a tin of sardines.Were all of us looking for the key.人生就像一罐沙丁鱼,我们大家都在寻找开启的起子。He was like a cock who thought the sun had risen from him to crow.他这人就像一只骄傲的公鸡,以为太阳升起是为了他的啼叫。2.metaphor暗喻A metaphor is a trope or figure of s
22、peech in which an implied comparison is made between two different things that actually have something in common.暗喻是将两种有共同点的不同事物进行隐晦比较的修辞手法。明喻与暗喻的不同点就在于是否有出现like或者as(像)这一类比喻词,下面这几个句子都是暗喻:Humor is the shock absorber of life;it helps us take action.幽默是生活的减震器,它可以鼓舞人们付诸行动。Time,you thief.时间,你这个小偷。But my
23、heart is a lonely hunter that hunts on a lonely hill.可是我的心是孤独的猎手,在孤独的小山上狩猎。3.personification拟人Personification is a figure of speech in which an inanimate object or abstraction is endowed with human qualities or abilities.拟人是一种为无生命或抽象物体赋予人类特质与能力的修辞手法。Oreo:Milks favorite cookie.奥利奥:牛奶最喜爱的曲奇。The wind s
24、tood up and gave a shout.大风凛冽,发出怒吼。My stomach was punishing me for not eating on time.我的胃因为我没有按时吃饭而在惩罚我。His paintings,each of them,spoke to anyone who happened to look at them.他的每一幅画跟每一个碰巧看它们的人交流。4.euphemism委婉语Euphemism is the substitution of an inoffensive expression for one considered offensively
25、expression.委婉语是使用较委婉含蓄的语言替换强烈冒犯的话语。这种修辞可能听起来陌生,但在日常生活中的使用频率其实很高。比如,老人去世的时候我们会采用“过世”、“走了”这一类的话语,这其实就是委婉语。英文里也有类似的用法,了解委婉语背后真正的含义对阅读英语文章也是很有帮助的哦下面我们就一起看几个例子:elder citizen老年人(不用old people)pass away逝世(不用die)Youve got a prime figure.你的体态丰腴。(不用fat)5.pun双关语A pun is a play on words,either on different sense
26、s of the same word or on the similar sense or sound of different words.双关语是指利用同词不同义或是近义词或同音不同词来制造文字游戏的一种修辞方式。部分电视剧的幽默效果就是通过双关语来实现的。You earn your living and you urn your dead.生前劳碌奔命,死后化灰入土。(earn与urn(火化)同音异义,用在一起显得俏皮,别有趣味。)Seven days without water makes one weak.七天不进水,人就会虚弱。weak和week是同音异义词。因此这句话听起来可以理
27、解为:Seven days without water makes one week.6.hyperbole夸张Hyperbole is a figure of speech in which exaggeration is used for emphasis or effect,an extravagant statement.夸张是对事物着意夸大的修辞方式。我们在口语中常常会夸大自己的情绪,比如:I was scared to death.我吓死了。男男女女在表达爱意的时候经常也很夸张:You are the whole world to me,and the moon and the s
28、tars.你是我的全世界,是我的月亮,我的星星7.rhetorical repetition 叠言这种修辞法是指在特定的语境中,将相同的结构,相同意义的词组成句子重叠使用,以增强语气和力量。举个例子1.It must be created by the blood and the work of all of us who believe in the future,who believe in man and his glorious man-made destiny.它必须由我们这些对于未来,对于人类以及人类自己创造的伟大命运具有信心的人的鲜血和汗水去创造。2.Because good technique in medicine and surgery means more quickly-cured patients,less pain,less discomfort,less death,less disease and less deformity.因为优良的医疗技术和外科手术意味着更快地治疗病人,更少痛苦,更少不安,更少死亡,更少疾病,和更少残疾。本课结束
