1、表达作文巧升格UNIT 3 SPORTS AND FITNESS个人健康手册本单元的写作任务是写一篇健康报告手册。使用恰当的描绘性语言，准确地表达出自己或他人在过去及现在的健康状况。基本框架1开头(beginning)讲述过去的健康状况2主体(body)转折点通过某种方式后的改变3结尾(ending)总结常用词块green food 绿色食品healthy food/diet 健康饮食good living habits 良好的生活习惯over-weight 肥胖的build up ones body 强身健体enough sleep 充足的睡眠take exercise 进行运动lose w
2、eight 减肥be good for/do good to 对有益处go on a diet 节食form a.eating habit 养成一个的饮食习惯be in good/poor health 身体健康/不健康常用语句精彩开头1I started taking exercise two years ago and have been addicted to it.2Until last year，I was trying to do.3I fall in the bad habit of doing.three years ago.4Unluckily I find I have b
3、een addicted to.5I have been annoyed about the question that.6I was anxious that I could not concentrate on.正文佳句1I was taken off the school football team because I was unfit.2It was time for sb.to do sth.3I prefer to do sth.rather than do.4I would do sth.instead of doing sth.5If I feel nervous or st
4、ressed，Ill do something.rather than do sth.6Rather than do sth.，I would prefer to do sth.余味结尾1Finally，I stopped doing sth.2At last I became both healthier and happier by doing.3If I weaken and do sth.，I wont give it up.4Ill try again，and I will succeed in the end.5I hope I will live as healthy and h
5、appy a life as they do.6Im determined not to do the thing any longer.假定你是李华。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1以前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；2导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；3解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；4给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以保持身体健康。注意：1词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【学生习作】In the past，I formed som
6、e unhealthy living habits.For example，I often skipped breakfast.I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise.As a result，I became too fat and often fell ill.点评 1.句前可加衔接词。2.句可转变为高级结构或句式。3.句suggest 用法错误。To keep fit，I determined to get out of these bad habits.Firstly，I began to have a balan
7、ced diet.Secondly，I took exercise actively every day.Lastly，I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.After two months，I recovered.I suggest other students to get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible，because health is more valuable than anything else.点评 1.句
8、前可加衔接词。2.句可转变为高级结构或句式。3.句suggest 用法错误。【升格作文】In the past,I formed some unhealthy living habits.For example,I often skipped breakfast.Besides,I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise.As a result，I became too fat and often fell ill.To keep fit,I determined to get out of these bad habits
9、.Firstly,I began to have a balanced diet.Secondly,I took exercise actively every day.Lastly,I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.With two months passing,I recovered.I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible，because health is mor
10、e valuable than anything else.假设你是 Linda 的同学，Linda 现在正感到生活不快乐，不健康，有压力，可又不知道如何改变自己的生活方式，于是在班级的健康手册上向同学们寻求建议。下面是你为 Linda 提的几点建议，请按照以下内容写一份健康手册(80 词左右)：1你总是让自己像别人；2你担心的东西太多但是不愿意尝试改变；3你应该相信，正确的思维方式能够改变你的生活；4你要有足够的睡眠，至少 8 小时，这样才能精力充沛(energetic)、学习积极(active)。多锻炼是非常重要的；5学习之余听听音乐可以减轻压力。尽可能地微笑，它会帮助你快乐、忘记烦恼。_
11、参考范文You were not feeling well in life because you were trying to look like others.You worried about too many things but you didnt try to change.A right way of thinking can make a difference to your life.You should form a healthy lifestyle.As a young student，you need to get enough sleep for at least
12、8 hours every day so that you will be active and energetic at school.Doing more exercise is also very important.It can reduce your stress to listen to music sometimes after studying.Often smiling as often aspossible can help you stay happy and forget your troubles.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 点击右图进入 单 元 综 合 检 测 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
