1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND有关旅行的电子邮件电子邮件(electronic mail，常缩写为 E-mail、e-mail 或 email)指通过互联网传递的邮件，即用户之间通过互联网发出或收到的信息，是目前互联网上应用最广泛的一种服务。基本框架 电子邮件的正文部分通常由称呼、正文、结束语及署名四部分构成。1称呼。一般在收件人姓氏前加上 Dear。2正文。正文是邮件的主体部分，是写信人要谈论或陈述的内容。正文内容要求简洁达意，层次分明。3结束语。常见的结束语有：I am looking forward to your reply./Wit
2、h best regards./I wish you good luck.等。有时这部分也可省略。4署名。写在正文右下角的位置。常用词块 1all the way 一路上 2broaden ones perspective 开阔某人的视野 3come into contact with different cultures 接触不同的文化 4make your knowledge and experience rich 丰富你的知识和经验 5experience many new things 体验许多新事物 6be greatly impressed by its beautiful vie
3、w 它的美丽景色给我留下了深刻的印象 7care about the environment 爱护环境 8have a birds-eye view of the city 鸟瞰这个城市 9enjoy a pleasant journey 旅途愉快 10open to the public 向公众开放 常用语句 1常用的开头语 表示高兴 I am so glad/pleased/happy to receive your email.我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。表示感谢 Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting e-mail.谢谢你的礼物/有趣的
4、电子邮件。表示关心与询问 How are you doing these days?你最近怎么样？How are you getting on these days?你这几天过得怎么样？How are you getting on with your work/study?你的工作/学习进展如何？表示抱歉 I am sorry that I did not write to you soon but I have been very busy these days.很抱歉，我没有尽快给你写信，但我最近很忙。表示遗憾 I am sorry to learn that you did not pa
5、ss the examination.听说你考试不及格，我很遗憾。I am so upset to hear that you are ill these days.I do hope you are feeling better.听说你这几天生病了，我很难过。我真希望你感觉好些。2常用的结束语 I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.我期待着很快收到你的来信。Please give your family my regards.请代我问候你的家人。Take good care of yourself and keep in touch.照顾
6、好自己，保持联系。假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Tracy 来信询问你一次最难忘的旅行经历。请给她回信，内容包括：1旅行时间、地点；2旅行经过；3旅行感触。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学生习作 Dear Tracy，Im glad to tell you an unforgettable travel experience.Last year,my parents and I visit Gulangyu Island in Xiamen.We arrive there in the morning.Its a very beautiful island.We
7、 enjoy the sights of the sea.We took lots of photos and tasted some local snacks.At dusk,we had to leave for home.I think that Ive learned a lot from the trip.Yours，Li Hua点评：1基本覆盖了所有写作要点，但有个别要点的表达过于简单，不够清楚合理。2文中出现了一些简单的语言错误。如时态，描述过去发生的事情要用一般过去时。3仅使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，高级词汇太少，缺少高级句式。4未能有效地使用衔接词语。升格作文 Dear Tr
8、acy，Im glad to share one of my most unforgettable travel experiences with you.It was during the national holiday last year that I visited Gulangyu Island in Xiamen.I arrived there in the morning together with my parents.Its a beautiful island,whose scenery is breathtaking.We stood on the second floo
9、r of the boat,enjoying the sights of the sea.Then we took lots of photos and tasted special local snacks.At dusk,we enjoyed ourselves as much as to forget to leave.Through the trip,Ive broadened my horizons and enriched my life experience.Yours，Li Hua 假如你是李华，你的朋友 Tom 5 月 22 日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示
10、给他回一封 80 词左右的电子邮件。内容包括：1由学生会组织；2一部分人愿意乘公交车；另一部分人喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车；3美丽的风景让人难以忘怀；4感受：这次旅游增进了友谊，提高了关心自然环境的意识。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom，How happy I am to receive your letter.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tom,How happy I am to receive your letter.Now I will tell you something abou
11、t the trip organized by our Students Union.Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking，and finally we were persuaded to cycle.When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley，the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers，and the air there was pleasant to breathe；as a result，we couldnt wait to walk into nature.Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
