1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS表达个人观点类作文表达个人观点类文章实际上大多数是议论文，有时是夹叙夹议类文章。写好该类作文要注意以下要点：1观点鲜明，文章一定要有一个明确的中心论点。2层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。3最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。4通常采用一般现在时。5语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。基本框架 1开头开门见山，说明主题，并表明个人观点。2主体从不同的角度给出详细的论据支持。3结尾得出结论或重新强调自己的观点。常用词块 1attach great importance
2、to 高度重视 2play a vital part in 在中起重要作用 3make outstanding contributions to 对做出杰出贡献 4serve the society 服务社会 5from my point of view 依我之见 6a wise choice 一个明智的选择 7support the opinion 支持这个观点 8oppose the opinion 反对这个观点 9the following three reasons 以下三个原因 10become more and more popular 变得越来越受欢迎 常用语句 1They ho
3、ld the belief that the historical plays are attractive and easy to understand.他们认为这些历史剧有吸引力，容易理解。2As far as I am concerned，I like reading books，because books tell me the truth and encourage us to use our imagination.就我而言，我喜欢读书，因为书告诉我真相，鼓励我们使用我们的想象力。3However，every coin has two sides.然而，任何事物都有两面性。4Aft
4、er all，not everyone dares to face reality bravely.毕竟，不是每个人都敢勇敢地面对现实。5Some students support the opinion.Other students oppose the opinion.一些学生支持这个观点。其他学生反对这个观点。6There are at least three good points of shopping online.网上购物至少有三点好处。7Such a situation should be changed to give students both pleasure and k
5、nowledge.这种情况应该改变，以便给予学生乐趣和知识。8In my opinion，I prefer shopping online，because going shopping is a kind of enjoying life for me and I can also get what I really want.在我看来，我更喜欢网上购物，因为购物对我来说是享受生活。我也可以得到我真正想要的东西。假如你是李华，最近，在你班英语课上，同学们就是否可以使用高科技对故宫进行美化进行了讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍讨论结果并发表个人观点。要点如下：支持融入高科技技术，增强美感；吸引更
6、多的游客。反对破坏了故宫的原貌；要尊重历史和传统。你的观点 注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：the Palace Museum 故宫 学生习作 Recently,we had a class discussion about whether it is necessary to apply high technology to the Palace Museum.Some think that the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum and make it more a
7、ttractive to visitors.Others say that it will destroy its old appearance.It is very important to respect the history and our tradition.I think some work can be done to provide a complete ancient palace for the world.点评：1文章没有分段，缺少框架意识，把所有内容混搭在一起，从而影响得分。2词语不够亮丽，高级词汇和高级表达太少。3几乎无衔接，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。升格作文 Re
8、cently,we had a class discussion about whether it is necessary to apply high technology to the Palace Museum.Our opinions are divided.Some support the creative measures,saying that the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum,thus making it more attractive to visitors.However,those
9、 who are against the idea say that it will destroy its original appearance.More importantly,it is extremely essential to respect the history and our tradition.In my opinion,some proper work can be done to appeal to more visitors.Its our duty to provide a complete and true ancient palace for the worl
10、d.每年，国家科学技术奖励大会都会在北京人民大会堂隆重举行，届时党和国家领导人会为获奖的科学家颁奖。请你围绕以下要点谈谈你的个人看法。1党和政府为什么如此重视科技事业的发展；2作为一名高中生，你应该如何去做。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2短文要求包含所有要点，但不要逐条翻译；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。Every year，the National Science Technology Award Ceremony is held in the Great Hall of the People.【参考范文】Every year，the National
11、Science Technology Award Ceremony isheld in the Great Hall of the People.At that time，the top leaders of our country award medals to scientists who have made outstanding contributions to our country.Its clear that the government attaches great importance to science and technology.Theres no doubt tha
12、t science and technology play a vital part in a countrys development.Those who receive the awards deserve them because，through years of hard work，they have made outstanding contributions to our country.China needs more scientists and inventors like them.As a senior school student，Ill try my best to learn all my subjects well so as to serve the society as well as our country.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
