1、人教版必修1第一课 文化与社会第1课时 体味文化 Unit 5 Nelson Mandelaa modern hero Section Writing人物描写技法指导人物介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称。时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面。写作时，需要严格按照要求进行，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。2对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职信要重点突出学历、经历；新闻报
2、道要重点突出事迹；介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。3正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。4注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。黄金表达1.was one of the greatest.in the 20th century.2He/She was born in.3He/She studied at.and graduated.4.is the one who impresses me most.5Compared with.6.is such a learned/strong-willed person
3、 that we all admire/respect him/her.7He/She devoted all his/her life to.8He/She has made great contributions to.9He/She has made great achievements.10He/She was highly thought of.11In my opinion,.12He/She will live in the hearts of.forever.典题演练请根据以下提示写一篇 100 词左右的短文，介绍我国水稻育种专家袁隆平。袁隆平出生于北京，是一个简朴而伟大的人，
4、他从大学毕业就决心找到提高水稻产量的方法，最终他培育出超级杂交水稻，他无私地把自己的知识传播到欠发达国家。他的成功给我们以启示。谋篇布局1体裁：人物介绍2话题：水稻育种专家袁隆平3时态：一般现在时4人称：第三人称5结构第一段：对袁隆平的成就作大体介绍第二段：介绍他的伟大人格第三段：他对作者的影响联想词汇1简朴而伟大的人 _2决心做某事 _3被誉为 _4在方面成功 _5使成为可能 _6值得某人敬佩 _a simple but great manbe determined to do sth.be calledsucceed in doing sth.make it possible to do
5、sth.deserve sb.s admiration连词成句1袁隆平出生于北京，是一个简朴而伟大的人。Yuan Longping was born in Beijing.He is a simple but great man.Born in Beijing,Yuan Longping is a simple but great man.(升级句)2自从他大学毕业以后就决心找到提高水稻产量的方法。After he graduated from college,he wanted to find a way to increase the rice harvest.Since he gradu
6、ated from college,he has been determined to find a way to increase the rice harvest.(升级句)3他成功地培育出“超级杂交水稻”，这使得农民能够增产一倍。He succeeded in growing what is called super hybrid rice.And it made farmers produce harvests twice as large as before.He succeeded in growing what is called super hybird rice,making
7、 it possible for farmers to produce harvests twice as large as before.(升级句)4他的成就以及他的人生态度都让我敬佩。His great achievements and his attitude towards life deserve my admiration.Not only do his great achievements deserve my admiration,but his attitude towards life.(升级句)5他非常无私，他把他的知识传播到欠发达国家以帮助那里的人们。He is uns
8、elfish and he is now circulating his knowledge in some less developed countries to help them.He is so unselfish that he is now circulating his knowledge in some less developed countries to help them.(升级句)6袁隆平的成功向我们证明了成功的秘诀：要有梦想和实现梦想的决心。Dr Yuan proves that the secret to success is having a dream and
9、the determination to realize it.As Dr Yuan proves,the secret to success is having a dream and the determination to realize it.连句成篇Born in Beijing,Yuan Longping is a simple but great man.Famous scientist as he is,he regards himself as an ordinary farmer.Since he graduated from college,he has been det
10、ermined to find a way to increase the rice harvest.Finally,he succeeded in growing what is called super hybrid rice,making it possible for farmers to produce harvests twice as large as before.Not only do his great achievements deserve my admiration,but his attitude towards life.He cares little about
11、 being famous or spending money on himself.Furthermore,he is so unselfish that he is now circulating his knowledge in some less developed countries to help them.As Dr Yuan proves,the secret to success is having a dream and the determination to realize it.I certainly have a dream,and from now on I wi
12、ll spare no effort to achieve it.跟踪训练2012 年 10 月 11 日，中国作家莫言获得 2012 年诺贝尔文学奖。请根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇介绍莫言的英语短文。莫言原名管谟业，于 1955 年 2 月生于中国山东省。注意：1.词数 120 个左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。精彩范文 A hutong is an ancient city street trypical in Beijing._1_(surround)the Forbidden City,many were built during the Yuan,Ming and Qing
13、 _2_(dynasty).In order to establish the strongest power,emperors planned the city and arranged the residential areas._3_ center of the city Beijing was the royal palacethe Forbidden City.At the end of the Qing dynasty,after _4_(close)China came under the influence from abroad,many old hutongs lost _
14、5_(they)former neat arrangement.After the founding of the Peoples Republic of China in 1949,hutong conditions _6_(improve).But in recent years,the houses in many hutongs have been pulled _7_ and replaced by modern buildings.And the hutong today is fading into the shade for _8_ tourists and local peo
15、ple.However,in the urban district of Beijing houses along hutongs still occupy one _9_(three)of the total area,providing housing for half population,so many hutongs _10_(survive).In this respect,we see the old in the new in Beijing as an ancient yet modern city.1_ 2._ 3._ 4._5_ 6._ 7._ 8._9_ 10._篇章导
16、读：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了北京胡同的发展历史、建造作用以及当前的状况等。SurroundingdynastiesTheclosedtheirwere improveddownboththirdhave survived1考查非谓语动词。胡同环绕着紫禁城，它们中的许多建造于元、明、清时期。分析该句结构可知，many 前面的部分为状语；主语 many 代指“胡同”，surround 与其逻辑主语 many 之间是主动关系，故用现在分词。2考查名词的复数。根据该句中的“Yuan,Ming and Qing”可知，该处指三个朝代，dynasty 为可数名词，故该处用复数形式。3考查冠词。北京城的
17、中心是皇宫紫禁城。根据该句中的“of the city Beijing”可知，该处特指“北京城的中心”，故用定冠词 The。4考查词性转换。根据句子结构和空后的名词“China”可知，空处修饰该名词，表示“闭关自守的”，故用形容词。5 考 查 代 词。根 据 空 后 的 名 词 短 语“former neat arrangement”可知，空处修饰该名词短语，故用形容词性物主代词。6考查动词的时态和语态。1949 年中华人民共和国成立以后，胡同的状况得到了改善。该句主语为“hutong conditions”，和动词 improve 之间是被动关系，故用被动语态；根据该句中的时间状语可知，该句介绍过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。7考查固定搭配。但是近年来，许多胡同中的房子被拆毁，取而代之的是现代化的建筑。pull down 为固定搭配，意为“拆毁”。8考查固定搭配。both.and.为固定搭配，意为“两者都”。9考查数词。该处指“在北京市区的胡同中的房子占整个地区的三分之一”，分母用序数词，故用 third。10考查动词的时态。根据该句中的“still occupy”可知，该空表示过去的动作一直持续到现在，故用现在完成时。
