1、Section Writing游记本单元的写作要求是写一篇游记,记述旅途中所见所闻,并通过对当地的风土人情、山川地貌、人文景致、名胜古迹等方面的描写来表达作者的思想感情。一、基本结构游记一般分为三部分:开头部分:引出话题,简要介绍游览的情况;主体部分:详细记述游览过程;结尾部分:要抒发自己的体验与感受。二、增分佳句常用的开头语:1In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized.2Today, our school organized an interesting outing f
2、or us.3Last weekend, my parents and I went to.for a holiday.4Now, Id like to tell you something about a new attraction.环境描述语:1Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has experienced many changes in this area.2Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on th
3、e east.3West of the city stands a tall building.4Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest, among which is the Opera House.5The West Lake is famous for its beautiful scenery.6On the way to Moscow I saw some farm houses which were abandoned.常用的结束语:1Ill never forget.2T
4、his is an unusual/unforgettable journey to London Tower.3This was a real lifechanging experience that I would never forget.4We had a good time/enjoyed ourselves there.5We were very tired, but we really had a wonderful day.假设你是李华,你的朋友Tom来信询问你今年暑假的旅行情况,请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。游览地青岛人物和父母交通方式火车活动海边拍照、散步;海中游泳;爬崂
5、山Dear Tom,How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about my travel during the summer holiday. Now let me introduce it to you. _Yours,Li Hua分析体裁应用文主题介绍旅行情况时态一般过去时人称第一人称为主结构第一段:写信目的第二段:详细介绍游览过程第三段:抒发自己的感受1.用词(1) scenery n. 风景,景色(2) seaside n. 海滨(3) exhausted adj. 疲惫不堪的(4) get_on_the_train
6、上火车(5) at_midnight 在半夜(6) refer_to 参考,查阅2造句(1)今年暑假,我和父母去青岛欣赏美丽的风景。This summer holiday, my parents and I went to Qingdao to enjoy the beautiful scenery.(2)我们半夜时分登上火车。We got on the train at midnight.(3)六个小时后我们到达青岛火车站。我们在那儿买了一张地图以备查阅。Six hours later, we got to the Qingdao train station. We bought a map
7、 there in case we might refer to it.(4)首先我们去了迷人的海边,在那儿,我们拍了一些照片,尽情地在沙滩上散步,在海中游泳。We first went to the attractive seaside. We took some photos, walked on the sands and swam in the sea as much as we liked there.(5)尽管到达山顶时我们筋疲力尽,但我们很高兴。Though we were exhausted when we got to the top of it, we felt very
8、glad.(6)这是一次完美的旅行。It is a perfect journey.(7)将句(3)升级为含有定语从句的句子 Six_hours_later,_we_got_to_the_Qingdao_train_station,_where_we_bought_a_map_in_case_we_might_refer_to_it.(8)将句(4)升级为含有定语从句的句子 We_first_went_to_the_attractive_seaside,_where_we_took_some_photos,_walked_on_the_sands_and_swam_in_the_sea_as_
9、much_as_we_liked.(9)将句(5)升级为倒装句 Exhausted_though_we_were_when_we_got_to_the_top_of_it,_we_felt_very_glad.(10)将句(6)升级为感叹句 What_a_perfect_journey!3成篇Dear Tom,How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about my travel during the summer holiday. Now let me introduce it to you.This summer holid
10、ay, my parents and I went to Qingdao to enjoy the beautiful scenery. This was our first longdistance train ride. We got on the train at midnight. Six hours later, we got to the Qingdao train station where we bought a map in case we might refer to it. We first went to the attractive seaside, where we took some photos, walked on the sands and swam in the sea as much as we liked. After lunch, we decided to climb Mountain Lao. Though we were exhausted when we got to the top of it, we felt very glad.What a perfect journey!Yours,Li Hua