1、By Wang Yinghui March 15th,2016Learning Aims 1.Learn to write an outline composition.2.Develop a good writing habit analyze organize polish.3.Develop the abilities to solving the outline composition writing,the proof and the rational cloze.What is a good writing？Content:*everything needed included w
2、hich is related to your view.(内容要完整)Structure:*Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)*Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文)*No Grammatical mistakes(没有语法错误)*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)How to write a compositio
3、nSix steps to write a composition Analyzing the taskFinding out the main pointsThinking of key points/phrasesForming sentencesCombining the sentences into a passageCopying normally(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。注
4、意:词数100120个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。【审题抓准信息 快速推断】项目结论体裁_话题以为主题时态_人称_书信（给编辑一封信）一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主Step1.Analyzing the task“文明出国旅游”【定点把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。【遣词】1.假日游客:2.出国旅游观光:3.不文明行为:4.引起了社会关注:【造句】Every year,a great many go abroad,while they are enjoying thems
5、elves,some of them,which.Step2.Finding out the main points and forming sentencesholidaymakergo abroad for sightseeing and relaxationbehave rudelycause a big concernholidaymakersfor sightseeing and relaxationbehave rudelycauses a big concern第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。【点拨】扩充要点,使文章
6、条理【运用】建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗；其次，不高声喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respect and follow local customs 2.高声喧哗：talk loudly in public places 3.插队：queue jumping【造句】In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manners.First,we must_,Besides,wed better _to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that _is unacceptable
7、in many countries。respect and follow local customsnot talk loudly in public placesqueue jumping第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客【点拨】适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。【遣词】1.代表国家形象：represent our country 2.注意：be cautious about 3.只有这样：only in this way【造句】more importantly,we should bea
8、r in mind thatwe are _while abroad,so we need to_ how we act,_can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.representing our countrybe cautious aboutonly in this wayDear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holi
9、daymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,which causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manners.First,we must respect and follow local customs,Beside
10、s,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more importantly,we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad,so we need to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we
11、 enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.yours,LiHuaStep3.Combining the sentences into a passage【连句成篇】【书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错Dear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave proper when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers goes abroad for sightseeing an
12、d relax,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,that causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist have become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manner.First,we must respect and follow local customs;However,wed better not talk loudly in public place
13、s to avoiding disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more important,we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad,but we need to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful
14、 memories as well.yours,LiHuaproperlygorelaxationwhichhasmannersBesidesavoidimportantlysoDear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how1_behave properly when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers go abroad for2_(sightsee)and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them
15、behave3_(rude),which causes a big concern.How to be a civilized 4_(tour)has become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary 5_(watch)our manners.First,we must respect and follow local6_(custom）;Besides,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that
16、queue jumping is7_(unaccept)in many countries,more importantly,we should bear8_mind that we are representing our country while abroad,9_we need to be cautious about how we act,10_in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.yours,LiHuatosightseeingrudelytouristinto w
17、atchunacceptablesoOnly【书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空customs假如你叫李华,你校同学正在就“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”这一主题展开讨论,请根据下面所给的信息,给某英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况,并谈谈你的看法。赞成（55%）反对（45%）1.应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。2.锻炼能增强体质,减少疾病。3.锻炼能使大脑得到休息,使学习效果更好。1.锻炼浪费时间。2.锻炼后很兴奋,难以快速投入学习。3.锻炼使人疲劳，而且可能会受伤。注意：1.词数100左右；2.内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯；3.书写须清晰、工整。参考词汇：体
18、育锻炼physical exerciseWriting practice【审题抓准信息 快速推断】项目结论体裁_话题以_ 为主题时态_人称_书信（给英文报社一封信）“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主 【定点把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼【引入6分】【信息】我给你写信谈谈在我们学校的一个热点话题,那就是,高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼。【遣词造句】普通表达:I will tell you about a discussion.Should students of Senior 3 take physical exercise?高级
19、表达:利用进行时态、非谓语动词、连接短语等。Im _ you about a _discussion among us students in our school,_,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.writing to tellheatedthat is第2段：提出一种观点并具体阐述理由【作文重点12】【信息】有55%的同学赞成参加体育锻炼。【运用】55%的同学认为我们应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。【遣词造句】普通表达:55%of the students think that we
20、 should take physical exercise every day.We should do morning exercise.We should play table tennis or basketball.高级表达:利用同位语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等。55%of the students hold the view that we should _ every day,such as,_,playing table tennis or basketball.take physical exercisedoing morning exercise【信息】赞成的同学认为参加
21、体育锻炼有很多好处。【运用2】锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病。锻炼能使大脑得到休息；使学习效果更好。【遣词造句】普通表达：It can build our body.It can reduce illnesses.It can make us have a rest.We will have a better learning effect.高级表达：利用并列句、非谓语动词和高级词汇等。It can build_ illnesses,_(同时),it can _(make sb adj)a better learning effect.and in the meanwhilemake us rela
22、xed forour body and reduce第3段：提出另一种观点，并具体阐述理由【信息】：锻炼浪费时间。【运用2】：45%学生持反对意见，他们认为锻炼浪费时间。【遣词造句】普通表达：However，45%of the students dont support that.They think that they should not take physical exercise.It is a waste of time.高级表达:利用定语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等 However,45%of the students are against that，_ complain tha
23、t _ isa waste of time.whotaking physical exercise第4段：表明自己的倾向，阐述理由【信息】:适度锻炼。【运用】:我认为适度锻炼是必要的,但是不能太剧烈.【遣词造句】普通表达：I think that proper physical exercise is necessary.But we should never take exercise too hard.高级表达：利用宾语从句、高级词汇等。I_ think that proper physical exercise is necessary but_.personallynever too
24、hardDear editor,I m writing to tell you about a heated discussion among us students in our school,that is,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.55%of the students hold the view that we should take physical exercise every day,such as doing morning exercise,playing table tennis or
25、 basketball,etc.It can build our body,keep us healthy and reduce illnesses and in the meanwhile it can make us completely relaxed for a better learning effect.However,45%of the students are against that,who complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time.It can make us tired or feel too ex
26、cited for further learning.Moreover we may get hurt during the play.I personally think that proper physical exercise is necessary but never too hard.yours sincerely Li Hua【连句成篇】【书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错Dear editor,I m writing to tell you about a heating discussion among our students in our school,t
27、hat is,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises.55%of the students hold the view which we should take physical exercise every day,such as do morning exercise,playing the table tennis or basketball,etc.It can build our body,keep us health and reduce illnesses and the meanwhile it c
28、an make us completely relaxed for a better learning effect.Therefore,45%of the students are against that,who complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time.It can make us tired and feel too excited for further learning.Moreover we may get hurt during the play.I personally think that prope
29、r physical exercise is necessary but never too hard.yours sincerely Li HuaheatedusexercisethatdoinghealthyHoweverorin书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空Dear editor,I m writing to tell you about a heated discussion1._us students in our school,that is,whether students of Senior 3 should take 2_(physics)exercis
30、e.55%of the students hold the view that we should3._(take)physical exercise every day,such as doing morning exercise,playing table tennis4._ basketball,etc.It can build 5._(we)body,keep ushealthy and 6._(reduce)illnesses and in the meanwhile it can make us7._ _(complete)relaxed for a better learning
31、 effect.However,45%of the students are against that,8._ complain that taking physical exercise9._(be)a waste of time.It can make us tired or feel too 10._(excite)for further learning.Moreover we may get hurt during the play.I personally think that proper physical exercise is necessary but never too
32、hard.amongphysicaltakeorourreducecompletelywhoisexcitedAssignmentYou should try to use some superior phrases,special sentence patterns or suitable conjunction.1.Rewrite these two compositions.2.Recite some good sentences and passage.3.Do some reading.To dear students:Though the capacity of the knowledge is a little large in this period,Id like to combine the writing with the proof and the rational cloze,which aims to make you aware of the inner link of different knowledge structures.
