1、解密23书面表达之应用文序号题型真题Part 1解密高考考点综述 备考建议Part 2对点解密考点精准说1. 真题对点析1. 对点模拟练1.Part 3强化集训真题模测、典题模测Part 1解密高考【考点综述】书面表达应用文是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识的综合能力，这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在英语卷中占25分，约占全卷分值17%，是重要题型。而在听、说、读、写四项技能中，“写”是最令学生头疼的，有些学生对书面表达题束手无策，无从下手。因此，在高中阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中
2、，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培养学生的英语书面表达能力是极为重要的。【备考建议】1审题 动笔之前，必须认真审题，分析命题意图。有的考生唯恐时间不够，急于成文，不认真审题，结果写出的文章抓不住重点，杂乱无章，缺乏逻辑性。其实审题的过程是一个思考加工的过程，并不是浪费时间。在审题的过程中，考生可以根据题目确定文章体裁，考虑文章结构，内容。把与题目有关的材料分析、整理加以取舍，这样初步形成这篇文章的大致框架，这在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的成败。 2拟提纲抓要点，列提纲。依据格式要求和内容提示，分清主次，理顺关系，抓住要点，列出提纲。因考试时间有限，宜用简易英文提纲。 (1)文章的主要要点
3、要有逻辑地结合起来，使其结构严谨，内容连贯，层次分明，分好段落，设计好文章的开头和结尾。同时要有意在句子之间使用一些过渡性词语(比如表示因果、条件、时间等逻辑关系的词汇或结构)。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，意思连贯，给人以一气呵成之感。恰当地使用过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，避负脱节现象。 (2)语言表达。新的评分标准鼓励学生尽量使用较复杂的结构和高级词汇。语言要准确，长短句结合。学着使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。评价一篇文章的好坏，一条重要的原则就是“上下文连贯”，要让评卷者有一种通篇流畅、一气呵成的感觉。可采用下列策略： 使用高级语法与句型，如
4、：名词性从句，分词作状语和定语，还有如不定式、强调句、感叹句、倒装句。 常见词的复合结构，如“with+复合宾语结构”等等，这些形式来提高文章的档次，写出亮点句子。 使用过渡性词汇，增加文章的逻辑性与连贯性。因为过度词可使文章结构更紧凑，上下文更连贯，逻辑性、可读性更强。比如常见的过渡性词语有表列举的first，second，third，next，then等等；表因果的because of，thanks to等。 为了避免重复和连接上下文，多用指代词。对于出现过的非关键次和短语，常用指代词来代替，保持文章的简洁，使文章跟紧凑。 3修改 写完之后，一定要认真仔细地修改。可遵循下列修改校对的方法：
5、 (1)检查格式，内容要点。 (2)检查句子时态、语态是否正确，结构是否完整。 (3)检查大小写、单词拼写是否正确，书写要工整认真。通过这样的检查过程，能够最大程度的减少错误的发生，从而减少人为失分。Part 2对点解密【真题对点析】1（2020 全国卷3） 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。【答案】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in
6、sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboa
7、t that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If i
8、t is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the
9、 Steamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，
10、书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 【对点模拟练】1你是李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师
11、生的修改意见。你需要写一 封邮件，包含以下两点:1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方；2. 需要改进的原因。徒步活动主题:发现重庆时间:5月1日下午2点路线:从人民大礼堂(the Great Hall of the People)到解放碑、(Liberation Monument),全程徒步。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【范文】Dear Sir/Madam,Im really excited to hear that a hiking activity
12、 from the Great Hall of the People to the Liberation Monument is going to be held on the Labor Day holiday.However, there may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on the campus website,as Id like to point out.First of all, the hike needs to be planned in more details as the information
13、released online appears to be too general. As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last.In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success.Whats more, I
14、 suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover Chongqing” through additional activities. I propose an introduction of the architecture on Chaotianmen Square.By appreciating the artistic style of the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.All in all, if the hi
15、ke is organized in more details and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed.I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华写一封邮件，对徒步活动方案提出修改意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：建议信人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时；一般现在时要点： 1.听说学校徒步方案，指出有待改
16、进。2.需改进的地方和具体原因。第二部 列要点 写提纲Para. 1 be excited to hear that; is going to be held; further improvement; post on the campus websitePara. 2 plan in details; have a clearer picture of sth; security precautions; medical support; propose an introduction of sth; gain a deeper insight into sthPara. 3 in a mo
17、re supportive way; be sure to succeed; 第三步 连词成句1. Im really excited to hear that a hiking activity from the Great Hall of the People to the Liberation Monument is going to be held on the Labor Day holiday.2. There may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on the campus website.3. The hik
18、e needs to be planned in more details as the information released online appears to be too general.4. We need to know how long the hike will last. 5. We are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.6. I suggest the hike be more suited t
19、o the theme “Discover Chongqing” through additional activities. I propose an introduction of the architecture on Chaotianmen Square.7. When we appreciate the artistic style of the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.8. If the hike is organized in more details and i
20、n a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed.9. I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.第四步 润色提高1. 添加关联表达However; First of all; In the meantime; Whats more; All in all2.句式升级However, there may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on
21、the campus website, as Id like to point out.As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last.Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success. By appreciating the artistic style of the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.第四步 漂亮书写【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范
22、，语篇连贯，词数适当，分段合理。本文句式运用灵活，运用了种句式。比如使用了定语从句However, there may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on the campus website, as Id like to point out. 使用了only的倒装句作小结：Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success. 使用介词短语，让文章更加连贯简洁：By appreciating the artistic style of the landmark, we c
23、an gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.【真题对点析】2【2019浙江】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】Dear Alex,Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sin
24、cere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.I still remember what you have devoted to improve my oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and wou
25、ld not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my thankfulness to you.I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever! Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】本文是邮件，主题是感谢信，根据写作提示，考生应用英语给Alex写一封邮件，感谢他的帮助。写作内容主要包括三项：1表达感谢；2回顾Alex的帮助；3临别祝愿。这封邮件由三段组成：第一段陈述
26、写信的目的；第二段陈述写信的理由；最后一段为结束语。【对点模拟练】2假如你是李华，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请给外教写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：1.表示歉意；2.解释上课使用手机的原因；3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意：可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100左右；答案【参考范文】Dear Mr. Jackson,Im really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for be
27、ing so rude a student.I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I didnt use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to apply to some American universities last week and that day, I got an offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to t
28、ry sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered. I promise it will never happen again. But I do need my phone back to get in touch with others. Will you be kind enough to give it back to me?I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my
29、 situation.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封道歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。在写作时可以根据提示的要求按照三段式的模式布局谋篇。首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。主体段：说明道歉的具体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。【真题
30、对点析】3（2018天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。学科%网（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear
31、 Chris,I have good news to tell you. _Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【参考范文1】Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics. What I would like to stress is that i
32、t is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know youve just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.The trainin
33、g schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,
34、Li Jin【参考范文2】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our te
35、am in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We since
36、rely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖； 4告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
37、连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【对点模拟练】3假定你是李华，是某外语学校的学生会主席。你们学校的啦啦操社团(Cheerleading Club)正在招募(recruit)新成员。请你根据以下要点提示给交换生Lisa写一封电子邮件，邀请她加入。内容包括：1.拟开展的活动；2.报名方式和截止日期。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案 Dear Lisa,Have you heard that the Cheerleading Club of our school is recruiting new
38、 members? I know you are interested in it. I am writing to invite you to join it.The club offers a variety of activities. Not only do the members receive professional training in the gym every Friday, they will also put on performances at the school sports meeting. Besides, they will compete in the
39、Student Talent Show in our city in November. I am sure it will be great. If you want to join, please sign up in the school office or send your application to cheerleadingsociety before next Sunday.Yours,【真题对点析】4 【2019全国I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.写信目的: 2.个人优势: 3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数1
40、00左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。答案【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager studying in London. Learning that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting , I am writing to apply for it.I have some advantages for the job. First of all, having lived in C
41、hina for years and learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of both English and Chinese, which is beneficial when introducing Chinese paintings to foreign friends. Besides, because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more abo
42、ut it. Last but not least, through my efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，申请信。【思路点拨】 无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一
43、项技能。这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势， 考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)提出写信的目的申请做这个志愿者；(2)提出个人优势；(3)表达出自己能做的事情；2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【对点模拟练】4假定你是李华，英国高中生Peter在中国研学时曾暂住你家。他回国后给你寄来礼物感谢你的招待，并在信中委婉表示对你家三世同堂感到惊讶。请你写一封回信，内容包括：（1）感谢对方赠送的礼物；（2）简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节
44、，以使行文连贯。_【范文】Dear Peter,Im so delighted to receive your letter and know you are safe back. Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western culture. I enjoy reading it very much. Since you seem to be surprised at the fact that in China, three generationsgrandparents, parents and
45、 children, often live together, it will be my pleasure to explain this phenomenon to you. As our living conditions improve, its unnecessary for several generations to live to get her any more. However, many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other. Besides, b
46、y living together, all family members can develop a strong sense of belonging, as well as strengthen their emotional bonds. Hope to see you in China again. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回一封感谢信，并介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。【详解】第一步：审题结构：三段式时态：一般现在时第二步：列提纲第一段：问候并表达感谢第二段：介绍三世同堂第三段：祝
47、福并期待下次见面第三步：列举重点短语和句型receive your letter；a feast of western culture；be surprised at ；a strong sense of belonging；as well as；strengthen their emotional bonds第四步：连句成篇Im so delighted to receive your letter and know you are safe back. Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western
48、 culture.Since you seem to be surprised at the fact that in China, three generationsgrandparents, parents and children, often live together.As our living conditions improve, its unnecessary for several generations to live to get her any more. Many Chinese still tend to live together because they can
49、 help and care for each other. All family members can develop a strong sense of belonging, as well as strengthen their emotional bonds. 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如however, besides等，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Thank you for sending me the book,
50、which is really a feast of western culture. 此句为非限制性定语从句；However, many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other.这句话运用了because引导的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Part 3强化集训【真题模测】Passage1（2020 全国卷2）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介
51、绍这次活动，内容包括:1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。题目:My Weekend_【范文】My WeekendOrganized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were
52、attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders,We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.I couldnt wa
53、it to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!【解析】【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人
54、感受。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders,take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
55、观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and
56、 soft.运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not onlybut和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Passage2(2018北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所
57、大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】 本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。【范文】Dear Jim, Im so glad to
58、hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking Univers
59、ity, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese c
60、an be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen inter
61、est in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。Passage3（2017天津卷）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。1简要介绍自己的学习和生活；2告
62、知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；3希望她有机会重访天津。注意： 1.词数不少于100；2可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs Green，Im so glad to hear from you. _ _ Yours，Li Jin【解析】 首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意
63、使用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。第三，要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。最后，要注意一下卷面整洁，书写工整。【答案】Dear Mrs Green,_Im so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. Im very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my
64、 life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made som
65、e preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. Yours，Li Jin【典题模测】Passage1假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写 封邮件，内容包括：1.活动时间
66、；2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；3. 活动意义.参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【范文】Dear Kevin,I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. Im writing to invite you to experience the great activities.The Labour Wee
67、k will start on June 10th and last for five days, when we will hold various activities. To beautify our school, we will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being. Moreover, its a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and mo
68、re fascinating. There is also a labor knowledge competition which is so rewarding that we cant afford to miss it.As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed. Besides, we will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of peoples work.Looking forwa
69、rd to your favorable reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇写作属于应用文，主要是邀请新西兰的朋友Kevin参加学校举行的劳动周活动。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。写作要求：1. 活动时间；（the time of this activity）2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；（the content of this activity）3. 活动意义。（the significance
70、of this activity）第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）inform; relevant; upcoming; various; beautify; definitely; physical and mental; as for the significance; undoubtedly; cherish第三步：连词成句I want to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week.Im writing to invite you to expe
71、rience the great activities.We will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being.We will hold various activities to support our Labour Week. Its a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way.Sorting garbage can make our campus cleaner and more fascinating.As
72、for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly.Our awareness of labour can be developed.We will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of peoples work.在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 文章的结构顺序：劳动周具体时间和地点；劳动周的活动内容；劳动周的实际意义。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addi
73、tion As well as, not onlybut (also), including,连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰.第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文开头I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. 既使用了一个宾语从句，又开门见山的点出了写作的主题和目的。此外范文
74、中形容词和副词用得特别好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能够表达出作者的情感。 还用到了非谓语结构Moreover, its a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。Passage2假设你是某中学的学生谢飞，你校国际部将选拔一些学生志愿者，参与国际部接待学访团 等外事活动的策划和组织。你欲参选，请根据以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。* 个人优势介绍（如性格
75、，特长等）；* 接待学访学生的活动安排（校内，校外）；* 表达当选的愿望。 注意：1. 词数不少于 100；2. 请勿提及真实学校名称；3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：竞选 run for; 学访学生 students on the exchange programGood afternoon, my dear friends, My name is Xie Fei._Thank you!【参考范文】Good afternoon, my dear friends, My name is Xie Fei. I feel greatl
76、y honored to run for a volunteer of the International Department in our school.First of all, Id like to give a brief introduction to myself. With an open and active personality, I have great confidence in fitting in with people. Having a good command of oral English, I can communicate with the excha
77、nge students without any language barriers.When it comes to the arrangement of activities for the students on the exchange program, I recommend that some typical sports activities should be organized, from which the students can better understand and learn from each other. A culture show is also a g
78、ood idea, ensuring students to appreciate works of art and get close to a different culture. In addition, at weekends, its desirable for us to go on visits to galleries, museums and special places of interest so that our honored guests can expose themselves to the lively city and get meaningful expe
79、riences.Im really anxious to be accepted as a student volunteer. Thank you!Passage3省国际文化交流中心将组织一次各国学生参加的“儒家文化”冬令营（Confucian Culture Winter Camp）活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假定你是李华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇个人简历。1.个人基本信息（姓名、性别、年龄等）；2.个人优势。注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Sir,Interested in the Confucian Culture Winter
80、 Camp, Im writing to apply for the activity.My name is Li Hua, a student from international high school. Im convinced that I can meet all the demands because of the following advantages. First of all, I have such a good nose for Chinese traditional culture that I am eager to gather all the informati
81、on about history and culture when I have opportunity. In addition, when it comes to acquiring the communication, not only can I speak fluent English but I am good at organizing all kinds of activities because of the experience as a president in the students union. If accepted, I will be cautious and diligent so as to live up to your expectations.I would appreciate it if you could approve my application and please inform me at your earliest convenience.Yours, Li Hua
