1、A组20152013模拟基础题Passage 1(2015曲阜4月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello，everyone.Its nice to speak about that we can do for our school，and I thi
2、nk small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the l
3、ights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe well turn our school in a better place to study and live in.How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!答案Hello，everyone.Its nice to speak ab
4、out we can do for our school，and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more.Every one of may plant a tree in the school or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting into trashcans.Never forget to turn o
5、ff the lights close the doors.We should not leave the tap water or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe well turn our school a better place to study and live in.How I wish we enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!Passage 2(2015潍坊3月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改
6、你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English clas
7、ses to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywh
8、ere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isnt that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li Hua答案Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you by my classmat
9、es.You may attend English classes to feel a learning style.After that，you can go to your host family you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever you.The host family will also show you some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywh
10、ere because our city home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose from.So isnt a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li HuaPassage 3(2015淄博模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(
11、)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so Id like to tell you everything about it.In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made
12、into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They had taken many effective meas
13、ures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，its strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.Whats more，their living conditions have gr
14、eatly improved.答案I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so Id like to tell you about it.In the past，some people antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As result，the number of antelopes was decreasing
15、day by day.Now things / to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws / antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，its pr
16、ohibited to buy or sell anything made of fur.Nowadays，to our joy，there are more and more antelopes in China.Whats more，their living conditions have greatly improved.Passage 4(2015大连一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉
17、。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.Its such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to descr
18、ibe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the str
19、eet.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.答案In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and journey.But the moment I arrived，I in love with the city.Its beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are and
20、the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as as it is permitted.，I think the there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too when crossing the street.Passage
21、5(2015山东省实验中学模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the p
22、rimary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor was very diff
23、icult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that Ill concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.答案As we all know，everyone a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the prima
24、ry school.Nowadays with modern life rapidly，many people suffer from different of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor very difficult，I will do
25、whatever I can to keep everyone.To make my dream come true，I have told over and over again that Ill concentrate more studies.After all，only by working can one succeed.Passage 6(2015枣庄一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()
26、划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up his dreams for this or that reason.Those who dreams have come true have at least one thing in common，which is，they always hold fast to their dreams.Marie
27、 Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new
28、elementradium.Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.答案We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up dreams for this or that reason.Those drea
29、ms have come true have at least one thing in common， is，they always hold fast to their dreams.Marie Curie set us good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and it to the world.Then to get the new element her dream and goal of her life.After f
30、our years hard work，Marie and her husband / saw the dim blue light of the new elementradium.Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big small they are.The path to your dreams may not be and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.Passage 7(2015泰安期末)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下
31、作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Id like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the
32、 teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chin
33、ese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.答案Id like to give you some on how to learn Chinese well.First，it important to
34、 take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and with your fellow students.Then，it also to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides
35、，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more.You can also make more Chinese friends， will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as as possible.Passage 8(2014昆明一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文
36、。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.Whats m
37、ore，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.Obvious，its imp
38、ortant for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.Thanks for listen.答案Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classm
39、ates study into the night.Whats more，they not spare any time to exercise during the day. they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm their health.，i
40、ts important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my can help you.Thanks for.Passage 9(2014西铁一中诊断)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号
41、()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello，Peter.Im very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I
42、 dont take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and Im making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesnt matter much to me what the result is.In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest or exercise.I believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the e
43、xam in a proper way.Id appreciate it if you could give me some good advices.答案Hello，Peter.Im very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling stressed due to the exam，but I dont take so seriously.I always learn i
44、n a mood and Im making a great progress.Now that I tried my best，it doesnt matter much to me what the result is.In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest exercise.I believe we can be if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.Id appreciate it if you could give me some good.Pas
45、sage 10(2013沈阳一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My mother is very good for raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors
46、and outdoors all the years round. Some of our plants were very small several years before, but now they are large and very beautifully. On top of our roof there is a larger glassenclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother had made for us. Every mo
47、rning and evening we see my mother taken care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is the very good way of spending her free time.答案My mother is very good raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers ind
48、oors and outdoors all the round. Some of our plants were very small several years, but now they are large and very. On top of our roof there is a glassenclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mot
49、her care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is very good way of spending her free time.B组20152013模拟能力题Passage 1(2015青岛一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并
50、在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work，remembering that the most impo
51、rtant thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and dont do enough exercise，its certain that you cant understand the language pe
52、rfectly.But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better.In this way，you can apply that you have learned better.答案The saying that practice makes perfect that after you have plenty of practice in what you doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work
53、， that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and dont do enough，its certain that you cant understand the lang
54、uage perfectly.But if you practise a lot，maybe you will understand much better.In this way，you can apply you have learned better.Passage 2(2015贵阳模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错
55、误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Im very grateful for my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support，feel so proud of my every improvements.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole night.Now Im
56、 Grade 3. Lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become an useful person and make my parents lived a happ
57、y life.答案Im very grateful my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support， so proud of my every.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so and almost kept me company the whole night.Now Im Grade 3. for me，my parents can understand my stressful c
58、ondition often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become useful person and make my parents a happy life.Passage 3(2015保定联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多
59、有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My mom and I am fighting.We used to get up so well.But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not come home.She thinks I should spend more time help her
60、 with the housework instead going out a lot.In her eyes，Im just a lazy boy whom only loves playing.The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon.So I want to spend as many time as I can with her now.I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a vi
61、ew.But I hope she can understand how important these friends are to me.答案My mom and I fighting.We used to get so well.But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not home.She thinks I should spend more time her with the housework instead going out a lot.In her eyes，Im just a lazy boy only l
62、oves playing.The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different soon.So I want to spend as time as I can with now.I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a view.But I hope she can understand how important these friends are to me.Passage 4(2015兰州摸底)假定英语课上老师要求同桌
63、之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas，but he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike gone.
64、Ran to his front yard，he saw a man loading it into his car.He shouted，but the man drive off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he real forgave the thief.Whats more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted the message on a posterboard and put it in the front yard：“To the
65、 person who stole my bike；You hurt my feeling.But I am a Christian and I forgive him！”When he left for home the next morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.答案It was a year ago Joshua got a bike for Christmas， he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike g
66、one. to his front yard，he saw a man loading it into his car.He shouted，but the man off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he forgave the thief.Whats more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted message on a posterboard and put it in the front yard：“To the person who st
67、ole my bike；You hurt my.But I am a Christian and I forgive！”When he left for home the next morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.Passage 5(2015洛阳质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在
68、错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habit，which do great harm to their health.As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do everything even if you are a
69、 millionaire.In order keep healthy，its necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins.Secondly，getting enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise mak
70、e you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.As long as you form health habits and keep them，youll have a strong body and live the healthy life.答案A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living，which do great harm to their health.As we
71、all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，its necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.First of all， a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and ve
72、getables，which are rich vitamins.Secondly， enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.As long as you form habits and keep them，youll have a strong body and live healthy life.Passage 6(2014宝鸡一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请
73、你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Here are the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far away from London，and it has a very big schoolya
74、rd.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of course.Im sure you will find one you like it.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.So I will see that there is anything in their websites.Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you arrived.You met
75、 him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing you again.答案Here the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sor
76、ts of.Im sure you will find one you like it.I know you are interested in Human Rights.So I will see there is anything their websites.Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt I look forward to seeing you
77、 again.Passage 7(2014黑龙江摸底)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jim，Our friend Li Ming will leave to Shanghai to study.So we are going to h
78、ave a gettogether on 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He lived at No.225 Dongfeng Street.It is not very difficulty to find your way to your home.Take a No.2 bus，the stop of that is on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There is a cinema cross the street.Turning right at the corner，
79、and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Mings home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is opposite to Li Mings home.Yours，Zhang Hua答案Dear Jim，Our friend Li Ming will leave Shanghai to study.So we are going to have a gettogether 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He at No.225 Dongfe
80、ng Street.It is not very to find way to your home.Take a No.2 bus，the stop of is on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There is a cinema the street. right at the corner，and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Mings home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post o
81、ffice is opposite to Li Mings home.Yours，Zhang HuaPassage 8(2014金华十校联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I have a bicycle that came to me as
82、birthday present from my mum and dad when I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan，that was half of my fathers monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and its color is red，my favorite.Which is important is that my bicycle plays an important part on my school life.It also represent the deep love fro
83、m my parents.But I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work hardly so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and very convenient than the bike，especially when it rains.答案I have a bicycle that
84、 came to me as birthday present from my mum and dad when I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan， was half of my fathers monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and color is red，my favorite. is important is that my bicycle plays an important part my school life.It also the deep love from my parent
85、s. I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and convenient than the bike，especially when it rains.Passage 9(2013陕西安康一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌
86、写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life.At about 9：00 a.m.，I go to the bookstore with my friends.There was a lot
87、 of new books.I didnt know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：00，we went to cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply mo
88、ving.Some of my friends even burst into tear.Thats a really wonderful film.It is very worth seeing.What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.答案Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine，so my life.At about 9：00 a.m.，I to the bookstore with my friends.There a lot of new books.I didnt k
89、now one to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：00，we went to cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply.Some of my friends even burst into
90、.Thats a really wonderful film.It is worth seeing.What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.Passage 10(2013成都名校质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允
91、许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Sir/Madam，Im one of your customer.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got home，therefore，I found a fault with it.The problem is what the “Play” doesnt work at all.Probable its not
92、 your fault and so is mine.Anyhow，I cant solve the problem in person.You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the
93、 earliest possible time!Yours sincerely，Li Hua答案Dear Sir/Madam，Im one of your.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.Before I left，I check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got home，I found a fault with it.The problem is the “Play” doesnt work at all. its not your fa
94、ult and is mine.Anyhow，I cant solve the problem in person.You see，a walkman is of great for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you my letter.Hoping to hear you in the earliest possible time!Your
95、s sincerely，Li Hua.C组一年创新导向Passage 1假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear teachers and schoolmates，Its great honor for me to be here today and sh
96、are my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，but I learn English in some difference ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a
97、 lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.Thanks for listening!答案Dear teachers and schoolmates，Its great honor for me to be here today
98、 and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job， I learn English in some ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and efforts to understand the texts the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises
99、for the college entrance examination. also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other.I have a lot of fun when learning English with cartoon movies.Thanks for listening!Passage 2假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余
100、的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。It seemed that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are such many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in or
101、der to get great colleges.It is the reason what parents are strict with their children.They dont know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children.On my opinion，that isnt right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper learned environment for the children and allow me to play f
102、rom time to time.Only in this way can the child do their best and succeed at last.答案It that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great
103、 colleges.It is the reason parents are strict with their children.They dont know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children. my opinion，that isnt right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper environment for the children and allow to play from time to time.Only in this way
104、can the do their best and succeed at last.Passage 3假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。The day before yesterday，my father invited to a restaurant by
105、 his good friends.At the restaurant they didnt stop drinking until both of them were drunk.My father didnt realize the serious of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their home.And then he drove home.While driven home，my father felt uneasy.Before he realized that would hap
106、pen，my father run into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the normally standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done but made up his mind never to drink again before driving.答案The day befor
107、e yesterday，my father invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At the restaurant they didnt stop drinking until of them were drunk.My father didnt realize the of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their.And then he drove home.While home，my father felt uneasy. he realized would happen，my father into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done made up his mind never to drink again before driving.
