1、Coherence in Proof-reading工大附中项宾富Coherence in Proof-reading?工大附中项宾富短文改错中的一致性 Characteristics Steps The right signsQ1:How to do proof reading?短文改错多选用100词左右的记叙文或者应用文，话题贴近生活，浅显易懂，无超纲的词汇，句子结构较简单。此题型意在从词法、句法和行文逻辑角度考察考生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力，同时兼顾句型结构、习惯搭配等。考生平时在书面表达中常出现的错误就是短文改错考查的重点。Characteristics改错题型特点StepsSkim
2、mingScanningCheckingGo through the whole passage to get a general idea 改前通读 理清大意Read the passage carefully sentence by sentence and find the mistakes 改中细读 先易后难Read the passage for the third time and check the answers 改后复读 仔细检查The right signs1.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself.2.Im sure you will f
3、ind one you are fond of like it.3.I like playing piano.Wrong wordUnnecessary wordMissing wordtalkingthe2013-2015年811Q2:How to do proof reading well?skillsCoherence一致性Task 1Coherence in the sentences1.The understanding between two friends means both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.
4、2.When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.3.Bill was standing at the side of the car,talking to two men who was helping him to repair it.4.The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.trustthoughtthatwere1aNote-taking:trust：v./n.5.Today,it is much e
5、asier to be healthy than it is in the past.6.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and a fish was caught.7.Yesterday afternoon,I paid a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.8.Katia,like many other Russian girls,are nice and lively.9.Dont panic or get out o
6、f line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.(2 mistakes)washiscalmwasistryNote-taking:panic：v./adj./n.panic-panicked-panicked,panicking1.The understanding between two friends means both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.2.When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I wou
7、ld be happy there.3.Bill was standing at the side of the car,talking to two men who was helping him to repair it.4.The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.trustthoughtthatwere1a词性一致时态一致主谓一致指代一致Group Learning Discuss，match the mistakes with types of coherence and find the tipsTypes
8、of coherence 词性一致 时态一致 主谓一致 指代一致 Sentence 1 Sentence 2 Sentence 3 Sentence 4 Sentence 5 Sentence 6 Sentence 7 Sentence 8 Sentence 9Sentences词性一致Tips 2:1.关注词语与其在句中的功能、修饰语是否相一致。尤其是名词的数（单复数、可不可数）2.由并列连接词连接的前后两部分在词性和功能作用上保持一致(形容词、副词、谓语、非谓语前后一致)。Sentence 1,Sentence 9Tips 3:要有目的地去检查文中每一个谓语动词的时态与上下文、语境以及该句
9、的时间状语是否一致时态一致Sentence2,Sentence 5Tips 4:谓语要与主语在人称、数和语态上保持一致；注意较为复杂的主语（有插入语，从句、非谓语作主语）；定语从句，there be句式主谓一致Sentence3,Sentence 6,Sentence8Tips 1:文中出现的每个代词要注意与其所指代的名词在人称、数量和性别上保持一致。指代一致Sentence4,Sentence 7 Analyze the mistakes and find the type of coherence and the tips1 b1.There the air is clean or the
10、 mountains are green.2.Thank you for all you have done for me.Mom,though I may often say it,I do love you.3.To deal with the problem,I think,we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water.4.I am good at all the subjects,and always ready to help othersAt school I get alon
11、g well with my classmatesTherefore,I have a problem that troubles me all the timeHoweverbecausenotand逻辑Tips 5 上下文逻辑关系的一致。but，and，or等的使用。冠词（an/a 与the）的混用 重点在连词，肯定与否定等。?一致Task 2Coherence in the passage My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.There are three lessons in the morning and t
12、wo in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so much homework.However,we have more time for after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hours and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers and trees around the clas
13、sroom buildings.They can lie on the grass for a rest,or sit by the lake listening to music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(5mistakes)dontThereforelooksWehelpful时态一致逻辑一致主谓一致指代一致词性一致 Our school holds a sports meeting every October.We all lo
14、oked forward to it,for it is a time for us to reduce stress.It usually last for three days.All the student go to the playground to watch or joining in games.The part I like most is the relay race.With race going on,our excitement grows.All of them yell out“come on”to the athletes,watching them compe
15、ting aggressive.Somebody can tell who is the winner until the last moment.lookstuents the us aggressively lastsNobody时态一致主谓一致指代一致指代一致指代一致词性一致逻辑一致ConclusionSteps of doing proof readingOne of the skills for doing proof reading Coherence指代一致词性一致时态一致主谓一致逻辑一致Extensionapply coherence to writingDaily Pract
16、ice:Translation 张老师，我们的物理老师，为人和蔼、耐心又负责任。他的课生动有趣。他认真备课，对学生严格要求。我以前物理学得不好，但是在老师的帮助下，我已经取得了较大的进步。张老师不仅是我们的老师也是我们的朋友。Daily Practice Mr.Zhang,our physics teacher,is kind,patient and responsible.He always makes his classes lively and interesting.He prepares his lessons well and is strict with us.I used to
17、 be poor in physics in the past.But with the help of Mr.Zhang,I have made great progress.Mr.Zhang is not only our teacher but also our friend.The more we practise,the easier it will be!Practice makes perfectWhat to make sure?The steps(skimming-scanning-checking)The skill(coherence)The right signs Ne
18、arly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.
19、There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!The author shared us his experience of growing tomatoes.N
20、early five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste
21、.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!yearshaveeverywheretastymanyagoofawonderfulHomework 1.Review what we have learnt today 2.Check your translation and correct the mistakes by yourself 3.Finish a proof reading exercise
