1、How To Make Your Composition Better第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应
2、用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。Some common mistakes1,单词拼写不够细心frist,nowdays,enviroment,satisfiction,opinon,ture,beleive,convenint,habbit,writting,describtion,colleage,etc.2，短语记忆不牢固，使用混乱Eg:You can listen music.You will addicted to it.We are boring with the smell in your clothes.3.词性混用，句子成分不清（1）Dont
3、 afraid（2）He studies hardly.（3）It can be increase the risk of getting lung cancer.4.句式结构不准确（1）Not only it is good for your health,but also make other classmates feel comfortable.（2）This is the gift what I want（3）There are many students think shouldnt take mobile phones to school.（4）Protect the envir
4、onment is very important.（5）When you smoking,you should keep away from children.5.句意不够积极。(1)Smoking isnt a mistake.(2)I dont want to take part in class activities.6.表达机械，汉语味较浓(1)The cars color is yellow(2)I very like music7.要点遗漏，离题偏题8.一逗到底，不分段落，重点不明，没有层次感，而且卷面不整洁，字母书写不规范，不分大小写。PracticeEg:You ask me
5、to give you some advice on buying a gift to Mary.Now I will give you my advice.I think you should buy her a watch,thus when she use it to know the time,she will remember you.ConsolidationStep 5 Summary In this period,weve learnt some common mistakes you often make in your compositions,I hope you can pay attention to them and avoid making the same mistakes again.Step 6 AssignmentWrite a composition and hand it in tomorrow
