1、Section Writing读后续写写作任务阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright,warm July afternoon,Mac Hollan,a primary school teacher,was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,but they had encouraged Mac to carry on,and they would catch up with h
2、im soon.As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone,he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man,thats a big dog！”he thought.But when he looked to the side,he saw instantly that it wasnt a d
3、og at all,but a wolf,_quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.He found out his can of bear spray.With one hand on the bars,he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal,and to Macs relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute later,it was by his side again.Then i
4、t attacked the back of Macs bike,tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time,and again,it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that
5、 once he hit the hill,hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment,Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted wha
6、t they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer,they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,just a dozen yards away now.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每
7、段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The car abruptly stopped in front of him._Paragraph 2：A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived._谋篇布局确定文体：记叙文主体时态：一般过去时主体人称：第三人称内容构思：每段的开头语已经限制了该段的发展脉络，第二段开头写其他两个人几分钟后到达，由此推想 Mac 可能已经脱险，也可能仍未脱险，两种情况都符合逻辑。第一段写一辆汽车停在了 Mac 前面，故可推想汽车上的两个人与 Mac 也发生了
8、一些故事，需合理构思情节并与第二段衔接。故事以 Mac 脱险收尾为宜。题型分析：读后续写要求学生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅要能读懂字面意思，还要理清文章的脉络和前后关系。续写短文时，需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。同时，在组织语言时，切记使用五个以上标有下划线的关键词。常用表达：情感类：喜乐I was pleased beyond description.I was wild with joy.Her eyes twinkled with merriment.A smil
9、e of understanding spread across his face.Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.愤怒Anger welled up within him.His anger boiled over.He gave me a look of burning anger.His voice trembled with anger.be shaking with angerbe seething with angerHe was choking
10、 with rage.悲伤烦恼Hearing the news,so desperate was he that he drowned his sorrows.She was on the verge of tears.I tried to fight back the tears.My eyes were filled with tears.She burst into tears and ran out of the room.She sobbed,burying her face in her hands.害怕Her face turned pale and she stood ther
11、e tongue-tied.Fear slowly creeps up on her.Fear welled up within him.Fear flooded over him.She was shaking with fear.感动Deeply touched,we.Tears filling her eyes,she offered her heartfelt gratitude.身体动作He buried his head in his hands.A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face.He kissed her on b
12、oth cheeks.make/avoid eye contact with sb.We opened our mouths in surprise.He reached out her hand and held it tightly.名师指津：本续写充分利用关键词语构建了与上文衔接合理的情节。动作描写 rolled down the window 使衔接极为自然，然后用“yelled”这个词体现当时的紧急状态并使人物之间产生关联，祈使句“Get in the car！”简洁有力。之后的 jumped(跳)，dashed(猛冲)等动作用词均很贴切。本文的细节描写很形象，如 with his
13、legs trembling 说明了他的恐惧程度，而后面设计的情节 Becky 用扔肉的方式引狼走开，很好地避免了人与动物的冲突，实现了人与动物和谐共存的目的。第二段结尾与开头呼应。结尾他又想到了家人，与前文中的表述呼应。整篇文章表达流畅，融合度高，情节设计巧妙。参考范文Paragraph 1：The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paul rolled down the window and yelled,“Get in the car！”Without any hesitation,Mac jumped off the bicycle and d
14、ashed into the back seat of the car.What a narrow escape!Though Mac was safe,he still felt the dread stopping him from breathing,with his legs trembling.At the same time，the wolf caught up.Luckily,the cars door was firm enough to stop the wolf.However,they couldnt just stay there.Becky threw some me
15、at out of the window and Paul sounded the horn to warn it.Finally,the wolf left and disappeared.Paragraph 2：A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.They were shocked to see that Macs tent bag was in poor condition.And they were even more shocked to hear that he met a wolf.After a short re
16、st,Mac was much better.So they thanked Paul and Becky and decided to continue their trip to Alaska.Though tired,Mac thought of his wife and lovely children again.He had such a horrible but exciting experience to share！写作训练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My boyfriend and I had been dating for almost a
17、year and both felt the time was right to join our lives together.The month of January was spent planning our perfect summer_wedding.My mother and I went to the closest town to buy a gown that would play the leading role on_my_special_occasion.But after a days shopping,there was still no sign of the_
18、dress_of_my_dreams.Before we gave up,we entered a little shop at the corner.The clerk showed us several beautiful gowns in my size,but none were right.Finally,she announced she had one more dress at the back that was expensive and not even in my size,but I might want to look at it anyway.When she br
19、ought it out,I screamed in delight.This was it!Even though it was at least two sizes too large and more costly than I had expected,I talked Mom into buying it.I was sure I would be able to make it suitable in my hometown.A friend gave me the number of a lady named Maggie in town who worked at home m
20、aking alterations to clothes.When I arrived at her house,she carefully inspected my dress and asked me to try it on.She put a handful of pins into the shoulders and sides of my gown and told me to pick it up in two days.Thank goodness!The dress then fitted as if it had been made especially for me.Bu
21、t on Valentines Day,my boyfriend called.“Sandy,Ive come to the decision that Im not ready to get married，”he announced,none too gently.“I want to travel and experience life for a few years before settling down.”He apologized for the inconvenience of leaving all the wedding cancellations to me and th
22、en quickly left town.My world turned upside_down.I was angry and heartbroken and had no idea how to recover.But day by day,I survived.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：One day,while standing in line at the supermarket，_Paragraph 1
23、：One day,while standing in line at the supermarket,I heard someone calling my name.It was Maggie,_who once helped me to make alterations to my wedding gown.She politely inquired about my summer_wedding.When she learned that my wedding had been called off,she was very shocked,but agreed it was probab
24、ly for the best.I thanked her for resizing my wedding gown.With a sparkle in her eyes,she began telling me about her single son,Tim.Even though I wasnt interested in dating again,she finally talked me into meeting Tim.Paragraph 2：I did have my summer wedding with Tim,Maggies son,only a year later._P
25、aragraph 2：I did have my summer wedding with Tim,Maggies son,only a year later.And I did get to wear the_dress_of_my_dreams on Tims arm on_my_special_occasion.It was obvious that without the special gown,I would have never met Tim,my real“Mr Right”Till now,Tim and I have shared eighteen years of happy life together with our three children.
