1、F单元书面表达目录F单元书面表达1F1书面表达记叙文1F2 书面表达议论文3F3 书面表达说明文4F4 书面表达应用文4F5书面表达夹叙夹议文4F1书面表达记叙文【英语文卷(解析)2015届山东省临沂市重点中学高三上学期十月月考（201410）】第二节 写作(30分) 假如你是高三学生李华, 今后高考英语阅读量加大, 而你的阅读能力较差, 因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示写信向你的前外教Mr. Johnson求助： 1. 英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰； 2. 希望得到他的指导和帮助。注意：1. 词数：l20l50, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节,
2、 以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Johnson, _Yours, Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F1 书面表达记叙文 【范文】Dear Mr. Johnson,How are things going with you? Im writing to ask for your help. As you know, Im weak in English reading comprehension. Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large numb
3、er of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended up in failure, which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higher percentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing near, I feel more and more str
4、essed and worried. If I didnt take effective measures, I wouldnt be able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream.Ill appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on how to improve my reading ability effectively and Im looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes. 【英
5、语卷（解析）2015届湖南省岳阳一中高三10月第二次月考（201410）】Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese 请一下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。 exam help mistake progress内容： 1. 自己或他人的经历； 2. 你的感受。注意： 1. 必须使用所给的4个关键词语； 2. 词数不少于120个。【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文 【范文】When I was in Senior 1, I didnt study Eng
6、lish hard, so my English was very poor. But my deskmate Zhang Yan was quite good at English. Once I whispered to her for the answers during an English exam. She refused to help me, which made me angry and upset. A few days later, Zhang Yan came to talk with me about my English. Her words made me rea
7、lize the mistake Id made. To my delight, Zhang Yan promised to help me with my English study from then on. And it was with her help that I was able to make rapid progress in my English. Now Im also one of the top students in English in my class.I appreciate her help very much all the time. I feel Zh
8、ang Yan is my real friend. What I need in my life is such a good friend.【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构，如: which made me angry and upset. Her words made me realize the mistake Id made.定语从句和宾语复合结构；And it was with her help that I was able to make rapid progress in my En
9、glish.强调句型；To my delight；appreciate； What I need in my life is such a good friend.主语从句。F2 书面表达议论文【英语卷（解析）2015届重庆南开中学高三9月月考（201409）】写作一(满分15分)请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。Afriend of mine said，“I really miss the days when the sky was blue and the river was clear”要求：1就此材料发表你的看法；2紧扣材料，有明确的观点；3词数不少于6o；4在答题卡上作答。【答案】【知识
10、点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】As is shown in this sentence, despite the rapid development of our country, our environment has been seriously polluted, with the rivers filled with dirty water and the sky covered with dust and haze.In my opinion, firstly, the sharp increase of the number of cars is an important con
11、tributing factor. The emissions of their exhaust gas into the atmosphere exert a disastrous effect on the air quality. Moreover, many factories, in order to pursue their short-term interests, discharge their industrial waste directly into the river, which has brought about serious water pollution.As
12、 for the measures we need to take, it is high time that we should use less cars, clean the water from the factories, reduce dirt in the air。【思路点拨】本文讲了环境受到破坏的原因及治理措施，充分表达了环境保护的重要性。文章使用了一些好的句型和词汇，如：As is shown in this sentence,定语从句；with the rivers filled with with复合结构；it is high time that句型；文中一些衔接词使文章
13、结构紧密，如：In my opinion, firstly, Moreover, As for等，不失为一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省成都外国语学校高三10月月考（201410）】七. 书面表达（共35分）随着互联网的发展和流行，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了。某英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生网上购物的问题。请结合实际，按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件，谈谈你对中学生网购的看法。1.的好处（比如方便快捷，节省时间，价格低等；）。2.网上购物的缺点（比如快递比较耗时，无法试穿试用，质量得不到保证等）。3.中学生对网购应该持什么样的态度。注意:1.词数120左右,开头结尾已为你写
14、好;2.网购的好处与缺点至少各两点；3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。Dear Editor, With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. _Yours sincerely,Mike【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Dear editor,With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shoppi
15、ng has become more and more common in China. Im writing to share my views about online shopping. On the one hand, I believe its convenient and economical. With the help of online shopping, we can buy things we want at home with a click of the mouse instead of going to the shopping mall. Besides, we
16、might save money by comparing the price of goods sold in different online shops.On the other hand, it might lead to many problems. For one thing, your package cant always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons. For another, you cant try on the clothes to see if they fit you or not like
17、you do when shopping in a real shop. All in all, I hold that high school students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality. Yours sincerely, Mike【思路点拨】范文围绕网络购物展开，抓住了写作要点。第一段先说明网购的现象，然后表明写这篇稿件的目的。二、三段围绕网络购物的优点和缺点。两段开头分别用O
18、n the one hand ，On the other hand串接起来，写作层次清晰。第三段用了一些过渡词For one thing, For another逐一列出网络购物的缺点，使行文更加流畅。最后一段用总结性的话all in all，用have a cautious attitude towards短语表明中学生对待网购应有的态度。总体来说本文论述结构严谨，条理清晰，词汇丰富，句式多变，长短句交替使用。【英语卷（解析）2015届湖南省衡阳八中高三上学期第二次月考（201409）】Section C（25 points）Directions: Write an English comp
19、osition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假定你是某高三年级2班的学习委员，经常看到有同学抄袭作业，针对这种现象，你将在下周的班会上组织全班同学讨论这一现象，并以 “My opinion on copying others homework” 为主题作中心发言，请事先用英语写好一篇发言稿。注意：1.发言稿须包括以下内容要点： A. 抄袭的主要原因。 B. 抄袭的危害及解决办法。 C. 简要表明自己的态度。 2. 词数：不少于120字。【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】May I have your at
20、tention, please?My topic today is about copying others homework.As we know, some students copy others homework. On one hand, we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school . Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. On the other hand, lazy and uninterested in th
21、eir lesson, some students copy others homework not only to finish the assignments but also to please their teachers.In a word, copying others homework is a bad habit. For one thing, its against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. If we have difficulties, we can turn
22、to teachers and classmates for help. For another, copying others homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.Personally, its for our own sake to study. We should try our best to gain knowledge. Lets take action to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.Thank you for your
23、 attention.【思路点拨】范文开头和结尾符合班会发言稿的形式。第二段点出主题，第三段给出同学们抄袭别人作业的现象以及引起这一现象的原因。原因用on one hand,on the other hand逐一列出，条理清晰。第四段指出，抄袭作业是个不好的习惯。通过for one thing ,for another来论证抄袭别人作业的坏处。第五段再次点明自己的观点，呼吁同学们努力学习，采取行动阻止抄袭作业的坏习惯。范文整体来说写作层次清晰，紧扣要点，行文连贯。好词好句：masses of 很多，大量not onlybut also强调句 Sometimes we do have some
24、problems, too hard to work out.现在分词作状语Being students, we should be honest and work hard.For another, copying others homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think. 【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈三中高三第一次模拟测试（201409）】第二节书面表达 (满分25分)高考在即，高三学生在紧张复习。你现在用英语，在博客上给父母写一封信，内容包括：1：感恩父母 2：加强理解 3：畅想未来
25、 字数100左右Dear Mom and Dad, _【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Dear Mom and Dad,aThe annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you. Through those years of my growing up, I always feel grateful to you for your unselfish h
26、elp,care and love for me. Thanks to your constant encouragement , I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. It will be less than three months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me feel under great pressure. I need frequent support. You know, good studying conditi
27、ons and timely help will do me a lot of good. Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practise solving problems of different sub
28、jects. It is so necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.I am quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life. Yours ever,Li X
29、iang【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语around the corner即将来临；Thanks to由于；make progress取得进步；be aware of 意思到；under great pressure有压力；It will be less than three months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me feel under great pressure.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句；Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you
30、always have.这个句子you always have.是the one 的定语从句；I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practise solving problems of different subjects.这个句子中so that引导结果状语从句； 【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省冀州中学高三上学期第一次月考（201409）doc】第三节 书面表达（满分15分）散步是一种良好的锻炼方式，它对我们的健康非常有益
31、。请以“Walking to Keep Fit”为题写一篇100120词的英语短文，介绍一下散步的好处以及你的建议。注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。Walking to Keep FitAs we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Walking to Keep FitAs we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health
32、.It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones.Its safer than many other ways of exercise，especially for the elderly and its easy to do without considering rules.Besides，walking can also help us lose weight.What should we pay attentio
33、n to during the walk？First，we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so that we can relax.Second，we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficulty but still able to talk.Third，its important to walk with our arms moving freely.And last but not least we should do it every day.【思路点拨】一
34、篇好作文的四要素：一是要点要齐全；二是用词和句子结构要富于变化；三是文章句子之间衔接自然，是一有机整体；四是书写要清楚、美观。本文叙述了散步的好处和方法，语言简洁有力，使用了学生们常见的句型和词汇，如not onlybut also；it is 形容词 to do；好的词汇有：strengthen，build up等；再就是文章使用了一些衔接词，是文章内容非常紧凑，不失为一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届广东省深圳市高三上学期第一次五校联考（201409）】第一节：基础写作（共1小题， 满分15分）假设你是某中学高三(5)班的班长。你班同学利用课余时间回收废报纸和饮料瓶获得了一笔收入。就如何
35、使用这笔收入，你昨天下午专门组织了一次班会让全班同学进行讨论。请你根据以下讨论结果用英语写一篇班会总结。【写作内容】【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Yesterday afternoon，we held a class meeting discussing how to spend the money our whole class earned by recycling and selling newspapers and plastic bot
36、tles after class. Three fifths of the students suggested buying stationery for our own use because it can let us experience the enjoyment of harvest. Meanwhile，it is an approach to encouraging our classmates to continue this action. However，two fifths of the students believed that the money should b
37、e donated to the people in the earthquake stricken areas because they need the money more urgently than us. More importantly，it is meaningful to spend the money earned by ourselves in helping others.【思路点拨】 本文是议论文，主要介绍学生讨论会的主要内容，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，
38、可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用how to do sth做宾语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了Meanwhile、however等连接结构。文中使用了an approach to doing sth，be donated to sb等高级词汇。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2014届河南省实验中学高三第三次模拟考试（201405）】第二节 书面表达 （满分25分）你在网络上读到一篇关于“九零后”的英语文章，你打算以“Post-90s Generation”为题，用第一人称给二十一世纪英文报写一篇文章，内容包括：“九零后”的缺点
39、(weakness)“九零后”的优点(strength)你自己的感受1. 依赖性强;2. 自私；3. 贪图过舒适的生活等。1.渴望了解周围的世界；2.思想独立；3.有很多新观念等。注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。4. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。Post-90s GenerationWe, post-90s generation, are living in a society full of fiercer competition, and developing our special manners and
40、values, which has raised peoples concern. _【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Post-90s Generation We, post-90s generation, are living in a society full of fiercer competition, and developing our special manners and values, which has raised peoples concern.Its true that the post-90s generation have some weakness
41、es. Some of us, for example, rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives and some are even selfish and care little for others. At the same time, the post-90s generation desire to learn more about the world around us, and we are independent in thinking. We always keep up with mode
42、rn science and technology and have many new ideas.I hold the belief that the post-90s generation should carry forward our strengths (strong points) and overcome the weaknesses, and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation.【思路点拨】 本文主要从90后学生们的优缺点来谈谈自己的感受，这些都是学生们喜闻乐见的，容易动手写作。 文中使用了Ittrue
43、that中的主语从句，be independent in，hold the belief等高级短语；也使用了不定式短语作宾语；还使用了tell的宾语从句，还使用了for example，at the same time等连接词，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。【英语卷（解析）2014届河南省实验中学高三第二次模拟考试（201405）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假设最近你在自己的班级就校服问题进行了调查（survey）。下面是调查的统计表。请你参照该统计表给校报写一篇有关校服问题调查的报告，并简要阐述自己的观点。意见类型百分比来源:学.科.网Z.X.X.K原 因赞 同50颜色好，整齐大方，符合
44、年龄特征和学生身份，不盲目赶时髦，能显示平等和谐氛围.不赞同30颜色，款式和样式等不能彰显个性.无所谓20服从学校安排,并不在意其他因素.注意：1报告须包括本调查表中的主要内容，并可以适当增加细节使内容连贯。2词数100字左右。3. 参考词汇：赶时髦follow fashion； 校服school uniform_ 【答案】【知识点】 F2 书面表达议论文【范文】school uniform. Here is the brief report about it.The majority are in favor of our school uniform, thinking it very f
45、ashionable and its color nice. They also think it is neat and tidy, and suits the students. In some students opinion, when they wear our school uniform they feel equal. Besides, there is no need for them to follow fashion. However, 30 percent dont agree, arguing that they feel it uncomfortable and o
46、ld-fashioned. Whats more, its style is too simple, lacking personality. The rest of the students dont care about it, saying it is the only best choice to obey the school rules In my opinion, its better to have a discussion about the school uniform, and if possible, to hold a DIY competition among st
47、udents beforehand is even a better way. F3 书面表达说明文【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省师大附中高三第一次模拟考试（201409）】第二节写作(满分30分)假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。1自我介绍和写信的目的；2自身优势；3希望被录取。注意： 1词数120-150； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir Or Madam，I am Li Hua_I am looking forward to your ea
48、rly reply Yours， LiHua【答案】【知识点】F3 书面表达说明文【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua. I am a student in Class 1, Grade 3. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so Im writing to introduce myself.First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received
49、some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. Besides, I am good at English, especially spoken English. I won first prize in the English Speech Competition last ye
50、ar. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【思路点拨】本篇作文还是山东传统的书信体，并且给出了写作要点。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确
51、，信的开头结尾已给出。二是要详略得当，本文应重点应放在自身的优势上。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。范文是典型的三段论，第一段先简要介绍自己以及写作目的。第二段围绕写作重点“自身的优势”展开，用First of all, Besides,逐一谈论自己的优势，条理清楚。本段最后两句，表达了作者希望被录取。总体来说范文要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点，行文连贯。【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省台州中学高三上学期第二次统练（201410）】第二节 书面表达（满分30分）学校计划举行英语作文竞赛，主题为“We Need Advice from Older Generatio
52、ns”，请根据下列要求写一篇作文：你遇到了困难或问题，不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到了解决。要求写清楚下面三点：1、当时面临的困难或问题是什么？ 2、你获得的指教是什么？ 3、结果如何？注意：1、作文总词数为120左右；2、不能在作文中出现所在班级和本人真实姓名。【答案】【知识点】F3 书面表达说明文【范文】We Need Advice from Older GenerationsNo one can deal with every problem they meet on their own. We need advice from others at times, espec
53、ially from our older generations. The other day, I went to my uncle. I had had a hard time deciding which subject to major in in the university. Id like to choose English because of my strong desire of learning languages, while my parents wanted me to major in science. Having learned my trouble, my
54、uncle advised me to talk with my parents frankly, presenting my real thoughts. I did so.My parents understood me and agreed to respect my final choice.Remember: Go to your older generations for advice, and they will not disappoint you.【思路点拨】范文中出现一些常见的短语deal with 处理；had had a hard time doing 度过艰难的时光；
55、because of因为；agreed to do 同意做某事；Id like to choose English because of my strong desire of learning languages, while my parents wanted me to major in science这个句子while表对比，然而的意思；Having learned my trouble, my uncle advised me to talk with my parents frankly, presenting my real thoughts.这个句子having learned
56、 做伴随状语； F4 书面表达应用文【英语卷（解析）2015届重庆南开中学高三9月月考（201409）】写作二(满分20分)假设你是李华，对从事国际志愿者工作很感兴趣，并有意利用高三毕业后的暑假时间去从事国际志愿者工作。请你用英文给国际志愿者组织网站wwwvolunteerhqorg提申请。主要内容包括：本人基本信息介绍希望去马达加斯加(Madagascar)从事海洋保护项目(MarineConservation)；参与时间为六月至八月相关个人资历的介绍(如：有初级潜水员OpenWater Diver资质等)对此志愿者活动感兴趣的理由要求：1词数不少于80：2书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词
57、数)；3在答题卡上作答。来源:学科网Dear Sir or Madam，I am a high school student from ChinaYourssincerely，LiHua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 【范文】I am a high school student from China. My name is Li Hua, now eighteen and studying in senior three. Ive been always interested in international volunteer programs and wish toparticip
58、atein one after I graduate from high school this summer.Ihope I could make it to Madagascar with your Marine Conservation Program for a period of three months beginning from June.Ihave thequalificationof Open Water Diver. Besides, I can speak English fluently and is a good team worker.The deep blue
59、is always my dream place, which I believe is now under the threat of global climate change. I assume that I can make a difference in maintaining its bio-diversity by working with the conservation program.【思路点拨】本文讲了一封申请信，内容要点齐全，句子简单有力，表达内容清晰，运用了一些好的句型和词汇，如：participatein；make it；which I believe定语从句；by
60、 working with；不足之处是段落之间衔接不够紧密，有些散的感觉。【英语卷（解析）2015届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期第二次月考（201410）】书面表达(满分25分)假设你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。10月19日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件： 1、礼物选择； 2、你的理由； 3、其他和解建议。注意：（1）、词数100左右 ； （2）、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 。 （3）、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom，Im glad to hear that
61、you are considering making up with Peter. Best wishes, Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Tom, Im glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him. As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exer
62、cise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. Its convenient for him to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, y
63、ou can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever. Best wishes Li Hua 【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语As far as I know所我所知；build up增强；it is convenient fo
64、r sb to do 做某事对于某人来说是很便利的；In the meanwhile与此同时；Apart from除了；If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him 这个句子运用到对现在的虚拟；In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句，代指上面这件事；No matter what you do, be
65、ing sincere is the most important. 这句话中no matter what引导让步状语从句，还运用到动名词做主语；【英语卷（解析）2015届西藏拉萨中学高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】第二节 书面表达（满25分）某英文报社举办以 “I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动， 你打算投稿。 请根据以下要点些一篇短文：1你为什么喜欢读书；【来源：全,品中&高*考*网】2你喜欢哪一类的书（例如：历史、科学、文学等）？请给出至少两个理由。注意：词数120左右；【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】【思路点拨】 本文是应用文，主要介绍自己最喜欢哪类书，
66、故用第一人称和现在时。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用动名词短语做主语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了because引导的原因状语从句和as引导的非限制性定语从句等连接结构。文中使用了there be句型，不定式做主语和宾语等。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省忻州一中、康杰中学、临汾一中、长治二中四校高三第一次联考（201409）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假设你是新华中学高三学生李华，进入高三后你的朋友Willia
67、m感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。内容要点：1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。注意： 1. 开头和结尾已经为你写好,词数100词左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear William,Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. _Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear William,Rece
68、ntly, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.来源:学科网First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does ex
69、ercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the commun
70、ication we can find support, which will encourge us to overcome difficulties in our study. Hope these can benefit you. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua【思路点拨】范文针对帮助朋友William缓解压力，根据写作要点给出的一些建议。范文开篇直接点题，Here is some advice on.紧接着用First of all, Another wayLast but not least，条理清楚地列出缓解压力的办法。最后希望朋友能够从中获得帮助。整篇范文条
71、理清晰，突出重点，长短句交替使用，句与句衔接顺畅，还使用了非谓语动词、倒装句、定语从句等语法结构。 【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省实验中学2015届高三第一次诊断性考试（201409）】某英文报社组织了一次有关“健康生活方式”的英语征文活动，你有意参加。对于这两种谚语：“An apple a day keeps the doctor away”和“An hour walking a day keeps the doctor away”，你更倾向于哪个，是饮食更重要，还是锻炼更重要，抑或是饮食锻炼都重要。请根据自己的生活体验，表明自己的观点并简要陈述自己的理由。注意:1词数：120-150；
72、2题目自拟； 3文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：谚语proverb【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Exercise and Food are both Important to usNowadays more and more people notice that healthy life style is very important. But some people believe that healthy food and drink is more necessary than ever, just like the old proverb: An apple
73、a day keeps the doctor awayHowever, other people believe that exercise is a healthy lifestyle, just like what they say: An hour walking a day keeps the doctor away. I think healthy living habits are very important for us. In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and go
74、od life habit. Healthy living style includes two sides: we should eat plenty of fruits and meat or vegetables and drink lots of fresh water, besides doing exercises is essential. It brings us health as well as relaxation and pleasure. In short, healthy living habits bring many benefits, although som
75、etimes you even do not realize. Remember:Food and exercise are both important to us.【思路点拨】 本文是应用文，主要根据人们只关注饮食健康和只关注适量运动健康的两种观点，指出自己的观点。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用动名词短语做主语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了however，besides等连接结构。文中使用了宾语从句、主语从句、although引导的让步状语从句、动名词短语做主语等等。
76、本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省南阳一中高三上期第一次月考（201410）word版】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）（命题人：陈绍艺）目前，随着人们生活压力的不断增大，人们的忧虑也越来越多。请根据下面内容提示写一篇演讲稿。我们的忧虑：注重自我，轻视合作；缺乏毅力，容易气馁；盲目追求，渴望成名。我们的长处：敢于挑战，（请联系自己的体验拟定内容）注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥，但不要简单翻译；2. 词数120左右。开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone! Thank you for you
77、r listening!【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Good afternoon, everyone!Under the fiercer circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised our concern.What on earth worries us most? We often care too much about ourselves, look down upon others and are unwilling to cooperate with
78、 others, which will make it hard for us to achieve success in our life. Whats more, we consider us to be short of perseverance and to get easily discouraged. In addition, many of us follow fashion blindly, and are very eager to become famous, which will ruin our values and taste in the future.We, ho
79、wever, also have many advantages. First, we have the courage to face challenges, for it can help us realize our dreams. Second, we can win the confidence to overcome all the difficulties. Finally, we can do our best to work more efficiently!Thank you for your listening!【思路点拨】范文运用一些常见的短语on earth究竟 ；c
80、are about关心；look down upon看不起；cooperate with与。合作；Whats more,而且；be short of缺少；In addition此外；have the courage to有勇气做某事；do ones best to do 竭尽全力做某事；We often care too much about ourselves, look down upon others and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which will make it hard for us to achieve success
81、in our life.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句，代批上面这件事；First, we have the courage to face challenges, for it can help us realize our dreams.这个句子中for引导原因状语从句； 【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省开封高级中学等中原名校高三上学期第一次摸底考试（201409）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分） 、 假设你是李华，最近在高三英语学习上遇到了一些困难，请你根据以下提示给已回到英国的好友David写一封求助信。内容如下： 1表达对他的思念； 2说明你在英语学习上遇到的困难； 3请他
82、给出建议并邀请他再来中国。 ， 注意：1.词数120左右；2信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear David._.Best wishes,Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear David,How are things going? You never know how much I miss you these days when you arent by my side.Thank you so much for what you have done to help me with my English. Since I began my new t
83、erm of Grade 3, I have met with two new obstacles. The first one is that I find it difficult to keep so many words by heart every day, and the second one is that I often feel nervous when facing English tests. I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to enlarge my vocabulary and ov
84、ercome my fear of tests. I hold the belief that I can make a lot of progress in English with your help.By the way, please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient for you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.Best wishes,Li Hua【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语give sb some advice on 给某人关于。的建议；wi
85、th ones help 在。帮助下；By the way,顺便；look forward to 盼望；The first one is that I find it difficult to keep so many words by heart every day,这个句子运用that 引导表语从句；I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to enlarge my vocabulary and overcome my fear of tests这个句子中how引导介词的宾语从句；I hold the belie
86、f that I can make a lot of progress in English with your help.这个句子that引导belief的同位语从句；来源:学#科#网来源:Z#xx#k.Com【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省邯郸市高三摸底考试（201409）word版】第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，向在你校学习的美国交换生Adam借了一本英文小说，但不慎丢失，一时又买不到。请给他写电子邮件，说明情况。要点包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 说明物品丢失的经过； 3. 提出可能的解决方案。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；3. 开头和结
87、尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Adam,_ Yours, Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Adam, Im deeply sorry but I have to let you know that I lost the English novel Gone with the Wind which I borrowed from you a month ago. I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went. Unfortunately , the other day during a
88、trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag. Im so sorry as I know the novel was a birthday present from your father. Hard as I tried, I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here. I wonder if you would like to take the Chinese-English
89、version which will hopefully help improve your Chinese. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语borrow sth from 从哪借；in a hurry 匆忙地；help sb do sth帮某人做某事；I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went.这个句子中运用wherever引导的让步状语从句；Unfortunately , the other day during a trip
90、to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag这个句子中运用到such .that .如此以致于；Hard as I tried, I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here这个句子运用as引导的倒装句，表示虽然； F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三第一次月考（201410）】第二节：书面表达 （满分30分）人人都在渴望幸福，人人都在感受幸
91、福。请用英语写一篇120词的短文，描述你体验幸福的一次经历，并谈谈你对幸福的理解。注意： 1. 词数： 120左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。I still remember _【答案】【知识点】F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【范文】I still remember the night when it was a cold , late afternoon and it was showering. Without an umbrella to shelter me from the heavy rain, I had to stand still and wait for my fathe
92、r. After seemingly long hours waiting, my father finally arrived. I was about to rush home when I found that my English teacher, Miss Wang was also waiting for the rain to stop. Without any hesitation, I went to her and gave my umbrella to her. Surprised but happy, she accepted it. Seeing Miss Wang
93、walking in the rain with my umbrella, I smiled and a sense of happiness sprung up in my heart. As a famous saying goes, happiness is only real when shared. As long as we are willing to share, well find happiness everywhere. 【写作指导)】 本文要求围绕“幸福”这个话题写一篇短文。文章可分文两部分：一次自己的相关经历；自己的感想。注意故事的完整和生动，时态为一般过去时；第二部
94、分感想不用过多描述，总结一下即可。 【英语卷（解析）2014届江苏省盐城中学高三第三次模拟考试（201405）】81. 当今，很多青少年拥有手机，而越来越多的长辈因为晚辈在家庭聚会上只顾玩手机却不和他们聊天感到失落万分。请根据下图写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下： 1. 描述图片所反映的事件； 2. 对图中现象加以分析； 3. 针对这个现象提出建议。注意： 1. 开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可参照图片适当发挥； 3. 作文词数150左右。It was Grandpas birthday party. 【答案】【知识点】F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【范文】It was Grandpas birthd
95、ay party. To have his children and grandchildren all back home together was not easy. But they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones, totally ignoring their grandpa, who let out a deep sigh and left the party. Parties and social gatherings no longer excite us the same way they once did.
96、 This is not due to a lack of desire to socialize, but the cellphone. There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative impact on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. Worse still, addiction to cellphones m
97、ight also lead to teenagers poor performance at school, which adds to elders worries. As far as Im concerned, its necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. And I attach great importance to communicating with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphe
98、re. In the long run, face-to-face conversations will give us much stronger communication skills.【思路点拨】1.仔细审题，看懂图表的意思，整理要点，决定语言形式；2.开头直截了当，很快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水；3.行文一般以10个句子为宜。若用少于8句话来表达，句子容易表达不清；若用多于10句话来描述，则句子零乱与琐碎，文章缺乏整体感；4.用最有把握的词语句型将规定内容加以表达，并根据图表大意议论；5.应按照合理顺序，适当使用一些过渡性的连接词，将句子连珠成串；6.结尾要干净利落，既不能拉杂，也不能草率，要显得自然，恰当得体。
