1、Module 3 WritingMy first trip to Australia教学步骤教师任务学生任务第一步审清主题5分钟配图短文，示范启发，引出话题，确定要素。看、听、思考；回答问题。How to write it?Six-Step Writing procedures 1.Study Topic 审清主题 2.Collect Material 搜集素材 3.Make Sentences 编写句子 4.Modify Tenses 提示技巧 5.Write a ParagraphParagraphs连句成文 6.Evaluate the Composition通篇评价August 14t
2、h,it was cloudy.My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road in Australia.We started from Melbourne.We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests.We saw some kangaroos and koalas along the road.Finally,four hours later,we arrived at the Great Ocean Road.At this moment it began t
3、o rain cats and dogs.In the rain,the waves,rocks and winds looked splendid(壮观).I took a lot of pictures there.After a while,the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared.In the sun,the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden.Its very beautiful.This is a memorable trip.A Passage：August 14,it was a cl
4、oudy winter in Australia.My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road.We started from Melbourne.We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests.We sawsome kangaroos and koalas by the road.Finally,four hours later,we arrived at the Great Ocean Road.At this moment it began to rain c
5、ats and dogs.In the heavy rain,the waves,winds and rocks looked splendid(壮观).I took a lot of pictures there.After a while,the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared.In the sun,the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden.Its very attractive.I enjoyed myself very muchITEMSDETAILStimeplacespersonstr
6、ansportWhat to doWeather;climateHow we feelITEMSDETAILStimeLast summer holidayOn the National DayAt the age of twelveLast SundayplaceThe Ji County MountainThe Summer PalaceThe museumthe Forrest ParkpersonsWith my cousinsWith my parentsWith my aunts With myfriendstransportBy trainBy busBy subwayBy bi
7、keWhat to doClimb mountain,See foreigners,Talk,Learn from each other Go boating,Have a picnic,Be caught with a heavy rain Tired,expensive,Too many visitors,enjoy themselves,want to visit once moreWeather;ClimateSnowy;Winter.Cloudy;Summer Sunny;Autumn/fall Rainy;SpringHow we feel excited Enjoyed ours
8、elvesunforgettablememorable The first-person compositions are stories about real events that happened to us in the past or imaginary stories written in the first person(“I/We”),as if we were the main character.Instructions 2.Past tenses Past simple for an action which started and ended in the past.e
9、.g.My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road in Australia.Past continuous for an action that was in progress at certain time in the past.e.g.It was raining for about half an hour.Past perfect for an action which happened before another action in the past.e.g.The train had already left by
10、 the time we got to the station.-show sequence(Firstly,First,First of all,to start with,Secondly,Next,then,Afterwards,After this/that,Finally,Last,Lastly,etc)Linking words/phrase can be used to:We write about our feelings,by using effective words,such as splendid,enjoy ourselves,instead of beautiful
11、,happy etc.resultsAttitudes and emotionstimeplacepersonsWhat to doprocessFlow chartWhat to see,what to feelFirst，then，finally难易结合化整为零引入竞争示范控制 1.审清主题 2.搜集素材 3.编写句子 4.提示技巧 5.连句成文 6.通篇评价PracticeWrite a paragraph to describe your experience.My first family holidayPossible samples:My winter holiday It wa
12、s my winter holiday.I was very happy.I read my favourite books which were very moving.But I could not read these books too much.I also had a lot of homework to do.I like playing computer games,too.Its very interesting.But I could not play it too much.I wear glasses,Im very sad.Its not good for my ey
13、es to play computer games too much.Oh!It was the Spring Festival.It is Chinese traditional festival.People were very happy.They went shopping,cleaned their houses,and had supper togetherI went to my grandparents home with my parents.My grandparents were very happy to see us.They prepared many kinds
14、of nice food,such as fish,meat,vegetables and fruit.In the evening,we watched TV and lighted fireworks.We also knocked on peoples doors and gave some presents to them.After the Spring Festival,we went to Shanghai to go shopping.We bought clothes,shoes and some delicious food.I had a good holiday,I think.I also have very nice school life now.Homework Write a paragraph about one of these topics to describe one of your experiences.The most unusual journey I have made My first train ride The best journey of my life
