1、高三英语开学测汇编五 短文改错短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下文章。句中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。（一）Dear editor,Im sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you
2、 anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make so much noise that trouble residents a lot. Whats more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes t
3、he environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration
4、, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.Yours truly,Wang Lin【答案】【小题1】andbut【小题2】anything something【小题3】reason reasons【小题4】去掉it【小题5】troubletroubles/they trouble【小题6】wherewhich【小题7】placeplaces【小题8】mostlymost【小题9】TakeTaking【小题10】doto do/will do【解析】试题分析
5、：本文是一封信，讲述了当今人们养的宠物过多的情况。【小题1】andbut 考查连词以及对文章的理解。Im sorry to occupy your precious time,与 I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays之间是转折关系，所以用but 。【小题2】anything something 考查代词。Anything任何事，something一些事，陈述语气，所以用something。【小题3】reason reasons 考查名词
6、。理由，可数名词，故用reasons。【小题4】去掉it 考查代词。As is known to.众所周知，固定句式，故去掉it【小题5】troubletroubles/they trouble 考查动词。Noise不可数名词，用第三人称单数形式，也可以增加主语，用 troubles/they trouble。【小题6】wherewhich 考查关系词。非限制性定语从句，用which引导，故用which。【小题7】placeplaces 考查名词。地点，可数名词，用places。【小题8】mostlymost 考查形容词。Most此处是最高级，最重要的是，mostly表示大多数，所以用most
7、。【小题9】TakeTaking 考查动词。与主语之间是主动关系，用Taking。【小题10】doto do/will do 考查时态。Expect sb to do /will do希望某人做某事，用to do/will do。【难度】一般（二）My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he
8、is going, so he often gets into the trouble. And he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of him go to see him every day, and they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time from school beca
9、use he is busy studying which he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks.【答案】【小题1】breaking- broken【小题2】ran- run【小题3】去掉trouble前的the【小题4】And-But【小题5】patiently- patient【小题6】him-his【小题7】book- books【小题8】which-what【小题9】fast-faster【
10、小题10】hospital后面加in【解析】【小题1】breaking- broken 考查形容词 。过去分词作定语，意为“断了的，摔坏了的”【小题2】ran- run 考查动词的用法 。let sb./sth. do.“让某人做”，使役动词后用动词原形，作宾语补足语【小题3】去掉trouble前的the 考查固定搭配。get into trouble意为“陷入困难、麻烦”，为固定搭配，不加定冠词the【小题4】AndBut 考查连词。句意：但他玩的高兴。表示转折。【小题5】patiently- patient 考查形容词 。句意：他有一个舒适的房间，耐心的护士和大量时间阅读。【小题6】him
11、-his 考查形容词 。句意：每天有他的朋友去看他。【小题7】book- books 考查名词。lots of修饰book要用复数，表示“许多书”【小题8】which-what 考查定语从句。句意：他没有失去在学校的时间因为他忙于学习，这是他所丢失的。Which引导定语从句；【小题9】fast-faster 考查形容词。由than连接的从句表示“比更”，前面的形容词或副词要用比较级【小题10】hospital后面加in 考查介词 。句意：医生说他比想象的恢复地快在数周之内就能出院。in a few weeks在数周之内。【难度】一般（三）One afternoon, when I was on
12、 my way home, the weather changed suddenly. Darker clouds were gathering. I began to feel worried so I didnt have both a raincoat or an umbrella with me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying up home,I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu W
13、ei, good neighbor of mine. He offered to share her umbrella with me. We walked all the ways home. With Liu Weis help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help.【答案】【小题1】DarkerDark【小题2】sobecause【小题3】bothneither【小题4】去掉up【小题5】findfound【小题6】good前加a【小题7】herhis【小题8】waysway【小题9】Wi
14、thWithout【小题10】thankfully-thankful【解析】【小题1】DarkerDark 考查形容词 。句意：黑色的乌云正在聚集；【小题2】sobecause 考查连词。句意：我开始感到着急因为我没有雨衣也没有伞；【小题3】bothneither 考查代词。Neither nor 即不也不；【小题4】去掉up 考查动词。Hurry home匆忙回家；【小题5】findfound 考查动词的时态。And连接turned与found并列，故时态保持一致；【小题6】good前加a 考查冠词。A good neighbor of mine我的一个好邻居，表示泛指；【小题7】herhi
15、s 考查代词。句意：他把他的伞分享给我。He表示是男性，故用his;【小题8】waysway 考查名词。All the way 一直；【小题9】WithWithout 考查介词 。句意：没有他的帮助，我肯定会淋湿。【小题10】thankfullythankful 考查形容词 。be thankful for 对。表示感谢。【难度】一般（四）Im quite familiar your situation. As computers become increasingly popular, some student cant help play online games or chatting.
16、 It was not only a problem of wasting time, but a seriously problem which does harm to their health. What you should do first is to find out what make them addicted with computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor test scores?Then having a heart-to-heart talk with them. Secondly, you should help
17、 them build up their confidence and make them interesting in studies. Thirdly, to find something else for them to do instead of playing computer games. Your efforts will surely make a difference and help change their lives.【答案】【小题1】familiar后加with【小题2】student改成students【小题3】play改成playing【小题4】was改成is【小
18、题5】seriously改成serious【小题6】make改成makes【小题7】with改成to【小题8】having改成have【小题9】interesting改成interested【小题10】去掉to find前的to【解析】【小题1】短语“对某事熟悉”be familiar with，因此familiar后加with 。【小题2】学生是可数名词，some “一些”修饰名词复数，因此“学生”student改成“学生们”students。【小题3】短语“忍不住做某事”cant help doing，因此play改成playing 。【小题4】通篇是一般现在时，因此was改成is。【小题
19、5】形容词修饰名词“问题”， 因此seriously改成serious 。【小题6】what 后面的谓语动词用单数，因此make改成makes。【小题7】短语“对某事沉迷”be addicted to。因此介词with改成to 。【小题8】祈使句用动词原形开头。因此having改成have。【小题9】人对某事感兴趣用interested。因此interesting改成interested 。【小题10】祈使句用动词原形开头。因此去掉to find前的to。【难度】一般（五）Dear fellow students,There is a serious phenomenon in our sch
20、ool that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too many fat and sugar. Eating snacks improper may lead to fatness an
21、d illness. Whats more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, that pollutes our campus.Dear fellow students, its high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students, should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is
22、 essential for us.【答案】【解析】：试题分析：本文是一篇小作文，作者指出了学校不文明的现象：许多学生聚集到学校小店里买零食，有人甚至在课堂上吃零食，吃完零食又把包装袋到处扔。吃零食是个坏习惯，不仅浪费钱又对健康不利。作者提倡养成良好的饮食习惯。1. crowded crowd考察动词。crowded为形容词，意思是拥挤的，塞满的，而此处应填动词crowd，意思是聚集，句意：在我们学校有一个很严重的现象就是很多学生聚集到学校商店里买零食，一些学生甚至在课堂上吃零食。故把crowded 改成crowd。2. areis考察be动词。这句话主语是 Eating snacks吃零食，
23、属于单数，所以be动词要用is，句意：吃零食是个坏习惯也浪费钱。故把are改成is。3. waste 前加a考察冠词。waste是名词，意思是浪费，废物，要用冠词a来修饰，a waste of money意思是浪费钱。故在waste 前加a。4. 去掉 addition to 的 to考察介词。in addition to意思是除之外（还），后跟名词或动名词。in addition作为连词，意思是另外。句意：另外，大多数零食是不健康食物。故把in addition to 的 to 去掉。5.many much考察副词。fat作名词的时候是不可数名词，意思是脂肪，所以用much修饰。句意：因为它
24、们包含太多的脂肪和糖类。故把many 改成much。6. improperimproperly考察副词。improper是形容词，意思是不正确的，此处应用副词来修饰eating，eating snacks improperly意思是不正确地吃零食。故把improper改成improperly。7. thatwhich考察关系代词。此处是要用which引导非限制性定语从句，只能用which引导。句意：而且，一些学生到处扔包装纸，污染了校园。故把that改成which。8. we 后加should 或把paypaid考察固定搭配。its high time that sb. did(should
25、do) sth.固定句型，属虚拟语气的一种。意思是：是做的时候了。句意：亲爱的同学们，是我们注意这一现象的时候了。故在we 后加should/pay改成paid。9. ourwe考察人称代词。we high school students指我们高中生，而our high school students指我们的高中生，作者此处表达的是我们作为高中生的意思。故把our改成we。10. balancebalanced考察形容词。balance为动词，意思是平衡，balanced为形容词，意思是平衡的，此处要用形容词balanced修饰名词diet，意思是平衡的饮食习惯。故把balance改成balanced。【难度】较易
