1、第5讲规避常见的五种错误 语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。错误1.句子成分残缺不全(1)We always working till late at night before taking exams.改:We always work till late at night before taking exams.(2)We should read books may be useful to us.改:We should read bo
2、oks which may be useful to us.错误2.句子成分多余(1)This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you.改:One test ends,but another is waiting for you.(2)The driver of the red car was died on the spot.改:The driver of the red car died on the spot.错误3.主谓不一致(1)Someone/Somebody think that reading shoul
3、d be selective.改:Some think that reading should be selective.(2)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week.改:My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week.错误4.动词时态、语态的误用(1)I was walking along the road,and there are not so many cars on the street.改:I was walking along the road and there were
4、 not so many vehicles on the street.(2)We have little time to read some books which we interest.改:We have little time to read some books in which we are interested.(3)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years.改:I have been studying in the college for two years.错误5.词类混淆(1)Honest is
5、 so important for everyone.改:Honesty is so important for everyone.(2)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.改:The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.【过关检测】.写出下列经常写错的单词1.成功;成功的_2.大学_3.语言_success(n.),succeed(v.),successful(adj.)collegelanguage4.选择_5.责任_6.目前,现在_7.方
6、便的,便利的 _8.志愿者_choose(v.);choice(n.)responsibilitynowadaysconvenientvolunteer9.社会_10.耐心;病人_ 11.当代的_12.观点,看法_13.外国的_14.政府_societypatience(n.);patient(adj.)modernopinionforeigngovernment15.环境_16.促进,提升_17.困难的_18.不同的_19.有必要的_20.交流_environmentpromotedifficultdifferentnecessarycommunicate.写出下列经常写错的短语1.在周末_
7、 2.对感兴趣_ 3.在网上_ 4.养成的习惯_ on weekendsbe interested inon the Internetform/develop the habit of5.总而言之_ 6.重视_ 7.在我看来_ 8.为树立好的榜样 _ 9.和某人交流_ to sum up/in conclusionattach importance toin my opinion/as far as I am concernedset a good example to municate with sb.10.我乐意做某事_11.不遗余力做某事 _12.在我业余时间_ 13.做一名志愿者_ 1
8、4.文明和谐的社会 _ I am willing to do sth.spare no efforts to do sth.in my spare timework as a volunteera civilized and harmonious society15.高考_ 16.长处和短处_ 17.容易得多_ 18.对有好处 _ the College Entrance Examinationadvantages and disadvantagesmuch easierdo good to/be beneficial to19.克服各种困难_ 20.盼望您的早日回复 _ _ overcome
9、 all kinds of difficultiesLooking forward to your earlyreply.常用句型需牢记1.我有很多爱好,比如看小说,跳舞等等。(such as)_2.如果你能帮助我,我将不胜感激。(appreciate)_I have many hobbies,such as reading novels,dancingand so on.I would appreciate it if you could help me.3.我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些困难。(help.with.)_4.在我看来,和你的父母经常交流是解决问题的关键所在。(the key t
10、o)_ I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.As far as I am concerned,communicating with yourparents regularly is the key to solving the problem.5.我给您写信是给你一些建议。(suggestion)_6.对于你的帮助,我谨表示万分感谢。(gratitude)_I am writing to give you some suggestions.I show my heartfelt gratitude to your help/I
11、 am greatlygrateful for your help.7.我对这个职位很感兴趣,想申请这份工作。(apply for)_I am interested in the position and want to apply forthe job.8.踢足球和读故事是我的最爱,它们让我受益颇多。(which,do good to)_Playing football and reading stories are my favorites,which do good to me a lot.9.我相信,在老师和学生的共同努力下,我们的校园一定在不久的将来会变成一个更舒心的地方。(with
12、 the joint efforts of)_I believe that with the joint efforts of both the teachersand students,our campus will become a moreenjoyable place in the near future.10.如果你有其他任何问题,请让我知道。(any other)_11.我急切地想得到您的帮助。(anxious)_If you have any other problem,please let me know.I am anxious to get help from you.12
13、.我非常喜欢它,主要有以下两个原因。(mainly)_13.你现在学习和生活怎么样?(how)_I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.How is everything going on with your life and study now?14.到了应该采取一些有效的措施来解决这个问题的时候了。(Its high time that)_15.很高兴能做一下自我介绍。(pleasure)_Its high time that we should take/took some effectivemeasures to solve the problem.It is my pleasure to introduce myself.
