1、写作能力提升练 UNIT 10 If you go to the party,youll have a great time!在成长的道路上，你不可避免地会遇到各种各样的烦恼，你会遇到不能解答的难题，你会因某种原因与朋友或父母争吵，你会因考试成绩不理想而不快乐同学们，当你们遇到这些问题的时候，你们是如何解决的呢？假设你是学生张磊，刚刚收到笔友Joe 的求助信。请你根据来信内容给他提供一些帮助和建议。Dear Zhang Lei,I get into a new school and meet some problems.Can you help me?Im too shy to make ne
2、w friends.When I run into difficulties with my homework,I dont know who I can ask for help.What should I do?Joe要求：1.语言通顺,行文连贯,内容充实;2.80 词左右。【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。问题与建议引出话题Im happy that you talk to me about your problems.针对问题提出建议Too shy:take part in activities Nobody helps with homework:be kind and fri
3、endly,try your best to help others表达希望I hope the advice will be helpful.【遣词造句】根据结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.如果你参加一些活动，你就会变得更外向。If you _,youll be more outgoing.2.你应该找到与你兴趣相投的人群。You should find groups that _ your interests.take part in some activitiesare close to3.如果你这样做，你就会遇到与你一样的学生。If you do so,youll _.4.如果他们有
4、困难，你应该尽力去帮助他们。You should _if they are in trouble.meet the students like youtry your best to help them5.如果你这么做，你很容易和他们成为朋友。If you do so,you will _ them easily.6.如果你做作业遇到了困难，你的朋友们会乐意帮忙。If you have difficulty_,your friends will be _.make friends with(in)doing homeworkglad to help【巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思连贯。根据来信
5、内容分析Joe 遇到的两个困难，针对这些问题，可以运用first,second来逐一解答，提出建议，使文章层次分明。使用If.,.will.使文章节奏匀称，使上下文条理清楚。【范文欣赏】Dear Joe,Im happy that you talk to me about your problems.Here is my advice.First,to be more outgoing,you can find groups that are close to your interests.In this way,youll meet the students like you.Second,
6、be kind and friendly to them and try your best to help them when theyre in trouble.If you do so,you will have no problem making friends with them.When youhave difficulty in doing homework,they will be glad to help.I really hope you can solve the problems and get on well with your new friends.Yours,Z
7、hang Lei.假如你是李华，期末考试即将来临，你的朋友Peter 感到很焦虑，学习效率低下。请你根据下面的要点及要求，给他写一封邮件，提一些建议，帮助他调整心态，提高学习效率，轻松应考。要点：1.学会放松（体育锻炼，听音乐）；2.健康饮食；3.睡眠充足；4.学会沟通。要求：1.包括所有要点，可适当发挥；2.100 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Peter,Dont worry about your study too much.First,you should_I hope you can stay in good spirits and study better.Y
8、ours,Li Hua_Dear Peter,Dont worry about your study too much.First,you should learn how to relax.I think doing sports is good for your health.Listening to music is also a good way to relax.Second,its necessary to have healthy eating habits.Please remember to have breakfast every morning.It can give y
9、ou enough energy_to study for the whole morning.Third,youd better go to bed early and have enough sleep.It will keep you active during the day.Finally,you should talk with your friends,parents or teachers.Tell them about your thoughts and feelings.Try to get help from them.I hope you can stay in good spirits and study better.Yours,Li Hua
