1、Period 5Using Language()写作培优课写作素养提升主题公园(Theme park)【写作指导】话题阐释世界上有各种各样的主题公园,所谓主题公园是指具有特定的主题,由人创造而成的舞台化的休闲娱乐活动空间,是一种休闲娱乐产业。根据旅游体验来说,大体分为游乐型,如:迪士尼乐园;情景模拟型,如:浙江横店影视基地;主题型,如:各式水族馆和野生动物园;风情体验型等。文体概述本单元的写作任务是主题公园介绍,属于说明文,通常包括主题公园的地点,旅游景观,特色活动等各方面。框架构建开篇:介绍公园地点The.park is located in.The theme park you are p
2、robably most familiar with is.,which can be seen in.主体:公园的主要活动,旅游景观及特色The park is unique because it.In addition to.shows,you can also see some interesting animals.结尾:欢迎游客的到来If it is.that you are looking for,come to.If you want to have fun and more than fun,come to.【典题示例】假如你的外国笔友Thomas想要了解一下香港海洋公园的情况
3、,请你向他大体介绍一下。要点如下:1.公园的地理位置;2.公园里的主要活动和旅游景观。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Step 1谋篇立意体裁说明文话题公园介绍时态一般现在时人称第三人称篇章结构段首:公园的位置及典型特征段中:公园的主要活动,旅游景观段尾:欢迎来公园参观Step 2语言支架1.香港海洋公园,位于香港的南部,是一个著名的主题公园。_ 位于,坐落于_ 主题公园组成含有同位语的句子:_ be situated/located in/ontheme parkHong Kong Ocean Park,a famous theme park,is situate
4、d in the southern sideof Hong Kong.2.有40多年的历史,海洋公园是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一。_ 有的历史tourist attractions_翻译句子_with a history of.旅游景点With a history of over 40 years,Ocean Park has become one of the majortourist attractions in Asia.3.占地面积超过87万平方米,它是世界上最大的海洋公园之一。_ 占地面积one of the largest marine parks _翻译句子_用非谓语动词的形式改写句
5、子_cover an area of.最大的海洋公园之一It covers an area of 870,000 square meters and it is one of the largest marineparks in the world.Covering an area of 870,000 square meters,it becomes one of the largestmarine parks in the world.4.作为香港最受欢迎的公园,每年的游客络绎不绝。_最受欢迎的公园attract a constant stream of visitors _翻译句子_fa
6、vourite park/the most popular park游客络绎不绝As the most popular park,it attracts a constant stream of visitors every year.5.游客们除了观看各种表演,还可以体验惊险之旅。_ 各种表演_ 除之外experience adventurous trips_翻译句子_ a variety of showsin addition to体验惊险之旅Visitors can experience adventurous trips in addition to a variety of show
7、s.6.如果你所寻找的是海洋娱乐的话,那就来香港海洋公园吧。_海洋娱乐使用强调结构完成句子_ocean entertainmentIf it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for,come to Hong KongOcean Park.Step 3 润色成篇_Hong Kong Ocean Park,a famous theme park,is situated in the southernside of Hong Kong.With a history of over 40 years,Ocean Park has becomeon
8、e of the major tourist attractions in Asia.Covering an area of 870,000 squaremeters,it becomes one of the largest marine parks in the world.As the mostpopular park,it attracts a constant stream of visitors every year.Visitors canexperience adventurous trips in addition to a variety of shows.If it is
9、 oceanentertainment that you are looking for,come to Hong Kong Ocean Park.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记entrance()statue()fountain()pool()fish pond()rockery()lawn()garden()plant()bamboo()pathway()pavilion()入口雕像喷泉池塘鱼塘假山草坪花园植物竹子小路亭entrance fee/ticket()bamboo grove()park bench()amusement park()sculpture()souvenir()col
10、lection()cartoon()castle()theme park()forest park()pocket park()local park()district park()national park()graceful sculptures()门票竹林公园长椅游乐园雕塑品纪念品收藏品卡通,漫画城堡主题公园森林公园袖珍公园本地公园区公园国家公园优美的雕塑话题好句背诵1.The scenery there was breathtaking.I would say it was the best of the natural wonders I have seen in my life.那
11、里的景色令人叹为观止,我敢说这是我一生中所见过的最棒的自然景观。2.There are various kinds of theme parks in the world with a specific theme for each.世界上有各种各样的主题公园,每一个都有独特的主题。3.With all these attractions,no wonder tourism is increasing wherever there is a Disneyland.有那么多引人入胜之处,难怪哪里有迪士尼乐园,哪里的旅游业就会发展。写作点拨如何让自己的英语句式更高级?1.巧妙运用短语,写出规范的简
12、单句:(1)借助名词短语作同位语(2)借助介词短语作定语(3)借助介词短语作状语(4)借助非谓语动词短语作定语或状语2.巧用连接词,写出规范的并列句3.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)和引导词,写出规范的复合句:如下列关于介绍庐山国家公园的一篇文章,仔细体会黑体词的用法。Lushan National Park,covering an area of 302 square kilometers,is located in the north of Jiangxi Province./Located in the north of Jiangxi Province,LushanNati
13、onal Park covers an area of 302 square kilometers.As an ancient educational and religious center,Lushan was awarded the World Heritage Centre-cultural Landscape in December,1996.Its said that over 4,000 poems have been written about Lushan since East Jin Dynasty.Not only is it famous for its culture,but also it attracts visitors for its seas of clouds,waterfalls,cliffs and so on.When it comes to the best time to travel there,it is in summer,but you can enjoy beautiful scenery all the year round.本课结束
