1、Period 5Using Language()写作培优课写作素养提升未来生活(The life in the future)【写作指导】话题阐释未来生活属于想象类作文话题,采用记叙文或说明文的形式,围绕主题,通过丰富的想象,生动地描写未来生活。以此来反映人类不断探索,努力创造美好未来的愿望。文体概述想象类作文是作者根据自己已有的生活经验和知识,超越实际生活来勾画从未见过的或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。框架构建第一段:引出话题;第二段:介绍未来的生活;第三段:谈谈个人的感想。【典题示例】假设你是李华,将参加某英文报刊开展的一次主题为“Life in 2050”的征文活动。请你根据下列要点提示
2、写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.衣服能变成我们喜欢的颜色;2.机器人替我们做家务;3.超速自行车将会出现;4.以太阳能为动力的汽车以及使用太阳能取暖的房子将会流行起来Step 1 谋篇立意体裁说明文时态一般将来时主题未来生活人称第一人称和第三人称Tips第一段:引出话题第二段:介绍未来的生活第三段:谈谈个人的感想Step 2 语言支架1.我们将穿着由特殊材料制成的衣服,而且它们能变成我们喜欢的颜色。_ 由制成change into_用非限制性定语从句翻译句子:_ _ be made of变成We will wear clothes made of special materials,which
3、 can change into thecolors we like.2.我们可以让机器人为我们做家务。_做家务_依靠;依赖翻译句子:_用形式宾语it改写句子:_ do the houseworkrely onWe can rely on robots to do the housework for us.We can rely on it that robots will do the housework for us.3.超速自行车将会出现,以太阳能为动力的汽车会很快流行起来。_超速自行车catch on_用过去分词短语作后置定语翻译句子:_ _ super-speed bikes流行起来
4、Some super-speed bikes will appear and cars powered by solar energy willcatch on quickly.4.随着科技的发展,一些人将有可能选择到月球度假或在海底生活。_ 选择去做某事_有可能用as引导的时间状语从句翻译句子:_ _ have the alternative to do sth.there is a possibility thatAs the science and technology develops,there is a possibility that some peoplewill have t
5、he alternative to go to the moon for a holiday or live under the sea.5.冬天我们将使用太阳能取暖以便我们能节约更多自然资源并且防止空气污染。_自然资源prevent.from doing sth._用so that引导目的状语从句翻译句子:_ _ natural resources防止做某事We will use solar energy to heat our homes in winter so that we could save morenatural resources and prevent the air fr
6、om being polluted.Step 3 润色成篇Life in 2050 What will our life in 2050 be like?No one knows it for sure.In my opinion,our life in 2050 will be easier and more comfortable.In the future we will wear clothes made of special materials,which can change into the colors we like.And we can rely on it that ro
7、bots will do the housework for us.Whats more,we will have much quicker transportation means.Some super-speed bikes will appear and cars powered by solar energy will catch on quickly.As the science and technology develops,there is a possibility that some people will have the alternative to go to the
8、moon for a holiday or live under the sea.As for our houses,we will use solar energy to heat our homes in winter so that we could save more natural resources and prevent the air from being polluted.Life will be much more joyful in the future.What a brilliant future!I believe that the dream will come
9、true.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.智能科技monitoring system(监测系统)control system(控制系统)telephone alarm system(电话报警系统)emergency system(紧急救援系统)smart home(智能家居)smart robot(智能机器人)2.前沿科技biotechnology(生物科技)new frontier(新领域)digital technology(数字技术)artificial intelligence(人工智能)household robot(家用机器人)3.实用短语save energy(节约能源)be m
10、ade of(由制成)use solar energy(使用太阳能)become popular(流行起来)live under the sea(生活在海底)of great use(非常有用)prevent our earth from pollution(防止地球受到污染)话题亮点句式背诵1.I imagine the life in the future from time to time.我会时不时地想象一下未来的生活。2.There is a possibility that human beings will be living in the other planets in th
11、e future.在未来人类有可能会生活在其他的星球上。3.There will be different kinds of robots in use,which is of great use to us.将会有不同种类的机器人被使用,这对我们非常有用。4.With the development of science and technology,our life will surely become easier and more comfortable.随着科技的发展,我们的生活一定会变得更加便捷,更加舒适。5.In my opinion,the dream will be turn
12、ed into reality one day.依我看,这个梦想将来某一天一定会变成现实。6.As far as Im concerned,we will realize the dream sooner or later.就我来看,我们迟早会实现这个梦想。写作点拨想象类作文写作指导1.明确中心,展开想象。动笔写想象类作文之前先要明确中心,即写作目的。在这个基础上列好提纲,写出主题句。写主题句时要注意:一个段落只能有一个主题句;主题句的范围必须最大限度地缩小、具体化;尽可能选择准确、充分、档次高的关键词概括自己的观点和看法。2.要有现实依据。观察生活,表现生活,想象要源于生活实际,不能瞎编乱造。3.任何文章首先要确定时态(一般将来时为主)、人称(可采用第一人称或第三人称来叙述)和写作手法,想象类作文也不例外。一般来说这类作文中描述性词句比较多。写作时多用表示将来的句型:will,will be doing,be to do等;正确运用表示推测的情态动词:may,might,could,would等;选择运用表达可能性的词汇:possible,probable,likely,may,maybe等。本课结束
