1、Unit 5 First Aid Period 5Using Language()写作培优课写作素养提升急救(First aid)【写作指导】【话题阐释】本单元中心话题是“急救”,旨在通过教学,使学生了解相关的急救知识,树立安全意识,并能在别人遇到危难时,及时、正确地给予急救。文体概述这是一篇英文稿件,从文体上来说应该属于应用文。【框架构建】(开篇:陈述急救的重要性)Knowing how to respond properly can make a big difference.(主体:如何对伤者施救)Firstly.Next.Besides.Finally.(结尾:希望能对大家有所帮助)I
2、 sincerely hope that.【典题示例】假设你是李华,你们学校的英语网站正面向全校学生征集有关急救常识的英文稿件。请你给该网站投稿,介绍交通事故方面的急救常识。内容包括:1.首先保持镇静;2.检查伤者呼吸情况,呼吸困难时要实施人工呼吸;3.如果伤者有出血情况要用布按压止血,然后等候救护车及警察的帮助。Step 1谋篇立意体裁:应用文Tips重要性:make a great difference施救步骤:Firstly.Next.Besides.Finally.希望有所帮助:I do hope时态:一般现在时人称:第二人称Step 2语言支架1.知道如何正确应对可以产生很大的影响。
3、_正确地,恰当地 _产生很大的影响用-ing形式作主语翻译句子:_ 2.首先,保持冷静,并报警和叫救护车。_保持冷静 call the police and an ambulance报警和叫救护车properlymake a big differenceKnowing how to respond properly can make a big difference.keep calm连词成句:_3.然后,注意他的呼吸,尤其是看他是否呼吸困难。_注意_做某事有困难连词成句:_Firstly,you must keep calm and call the police and an ambula
4、nce.pay attention tohave trouble(in)doing sth.Next,pay attention to the persons breathing,especially if he is havingtrouble getting his breath.4.另外,如果受伤的人流血的话,把一块干净的毛巾或布按压在他的伤口上。_ 另外_ 受伤的人连词成句:_5.最后,和伤者待在一起并安抚他,直到警察和救护车到达。_ 和某人待在一起_ 安慰,安抚in addition/besidesthe injured personBesides,if the injured pe
5、rson is bleeding,press a clean towel or cloth ontohis wound.stay with fort连词成句:_6.我希望我所说的能对你有所帮助。_我所说的_对某人有所帮助连词成句:_ Finally,stay with the injured person and comfort him until the arrival ofthe police and the ambulance.what I saidbe beneficial to sb.I do hope that what I said will be beneficial to y
6、ou.Step 3润色成篇First aid for accidents If you happen to witness an accident,what should you do to save other peoples lives?Knowing how to respond properly can make a big difference.Here are some rules that you can follow.Firstly,you must keep calm and call the police and an ambulance.Speak to the pers
7、on to find out as much as you can about his injuries.Next,pay attention to the persons breathing,especially if he is having trouble getting his breath.If necessary,use the mouth-to-mouth technique to give immediate assistance.Besides,if the injured person is bleeding,press a clean towel or cloth ont
8、o his wound.Finally,stay with the injured person and comfort him until the arrival of the police and the ambulance.I do hope that what I said will be beneficial to you.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记烧伤 burn 晒伤 sunburn 扭伤sprain 窒息choke溺水drowningstroke中风sunstroke 中暑wound刀伤,枪伤 heart attack心脏病 cut砍伤electric shock 电击need
9、le注射针IV needle 静脉注射 bandage绷带scissors剪刀 tweezers 镊子,小钳子splint 夹板ointment软膏,药膏 gauze纱布 ambulance 救护车mouth-to-mouth resuscitation口对口人工呼吸Heimlich manoeuvre海姆立克氏急救法 first responder第一线急救人员first-aid dressing急救包 first-aid case急救箱 first-aid kit急救药箱 first-aid appliance 急救用品 first-aid station 急救站 first-aid pe
10、rsonnel 急救人员话题好句背诵1.If pesticide gets in the eyes,first-aid instructions on the label should be followed.如果农药溅入眼中,要按说明书进行急救。2.The surgical team consists of a senior surgeon,an anesthetist and a theatre sister with complete emergency equipment.这个外科医疗队由一名高级外科医师,一名麻醉师以及手术室护士组成,并带有整套急救设备。3.When a person
11、 stops breathing,open his/her mouth and see if there is food in his/her mouth.当有人停止呼吸时,张开他/她的嘴巴看看嘴里是不是有食物。4.If a person cannot breathe,do your best to start his/her breathing at once,using a mouth-to-mouth way.如果一个人不能呼吸,一定要尽力用口对口的急救方式让他/她开始呼吸。5.If a person is hurt badly,try at once to stop the bleed
12、ing.Then take him/her to a doctor.如果一个人受伤严重,马上止血,然后送医。6.When a person is bitten by an animal,wash the wound with cold running water before he/she is taken to see a doctor如果一个人被动物咬伤,在送医之前用冷的、流动的水清洗伤口。写作点拨为了让庞杂的内容变得富有逻辑性和层次感。既要做到段落间的起承转合,使文章有整体性、连贯性,又要做到句与句内在衔接。因此,会正确使用连接词、衔接句,能为写作助一臂之力。连接性词语归纳如下:1.起始
13、关系:to begin with,first of all,as we all know,as is known,as is shown in.,according to 等。As we all know,good learning habits contribute to efficient study.2.时间顺序:at the beginning,then,later,finally,at last,in the end,afterwards,since then,after that,immediately,meanwhile等。At the beginning,I collected
14、 all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I mopped the floor.3.条件关系:if,unless,in case(of),as/so long as,on condition that,provided(that)等。I would be very grateful if you could meet my uncle at the airport.4.转折关系:but,yet,howeve
15、r,while,otherwise,on the contrary,nevertheless等。However,not until the match was over did we realize that we lost it.5.因果关系:because,as,since,for,thanks to,due to,as a result of,so,therefore,as a result/consequence等。Therefore,there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs.6.并列关系:and,or,as w
16、ell as,not only.but also.,either.or.,not.but.,neither.nor.等。We will have a good time there and I will send you some photos taken there.7.递进关系:besides,whats more,moreover,furthermore,whats worse,still less,to make matters worse,worse still,more importantly等。Many of them can hardly look after themselv
17、es,still less manage their own lives.8.列举事实:such as,for example/instance,take.for example,that is to say,as follows,in other words,on the one hand.,on the other hand.,for one thing.for another.等。On the one hand,I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents;on the other hand,I can gain some ex
18、perience from it,which will do good to my future life.9.表示观点:in my opinion,in my view,from my point of view,as far as I am concerned,as for me,personally等。As far as I am concerned,they stand for love,friendship and unity.10.总结:in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general,generally speaking等。All in all,traveling is the best choice for us to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.
