1、高三英语第一轮复习Book 3 Module 5-6 书面表达命题人：张丽娟I.书面表达（满分25分）请写一篇短文介绍20世纪杰出的女性之一：海伦.凯勒（Helen Keller）。内容要点：1海伦凯勒1880年6月出生于美国。她十九个月大时，由于生病变得又聋又盲。从此她就生活在见不到天日、听不到声音的世界。2七岁时，她的父母给她找了一名老师-Miss Sullivan。Miss Sullivan在教海伦的过程中遇到许多困难。由于海伦的坚强意志和智慧以及Miss Sullivan的技巧和耐心，她们克服了所有的困难，并取得了成功。3她完成了大学教育，取得了英语文学学位；她致力于盲聋儿童的社会工作
2、；有许多著作，其中我的一生（The Story of My Life）最为著名。注意：1.介绍需要包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条翻译。 2.可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯。 3.词数：120左右参考词汇：意志和智慧 will and intelligence 技巧和耐心 skill and patience 英语文学学位 a degree in English literatureStep1审题，首先同学们逐字逐句地审题，确定：1.写作意图 2.内容要点 3.人称，时态 4.分段 5.书写Step2草稿：_ _ _ _ _Step3定稿：_ _ _ _ _II.改错：（每题1分，共10分，）（规范
3、答题）After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm
4、around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (拥抱) you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didnt think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said Mother cheerfully. Module5-6 writing书面表
5、达Helen Keller was one of the greatest women in the 20th centuryShe was born in America in June, 1880When she was nineteen months old , she became blind and deaf because of a serious illnessFrom then on she lived in darkness and silenceHer parents were greatly worried When she was seven , they found
6、a teacher, Miss Sullivan, for her .Miss Sullivan had a lot of difficulties in teaching Helen KellerWith Helen s strong will and intelligence as well as Miss Sullivans skill and patience, they overcame all the difficultiesHelen Keller graduated from university and got a degree in English literature L
7、ater on she devoted all herself to helping the blind and deaf childrenShe wrote many books and The Story of My Life is a remarkable one 1. notice 改为noticed 考点：解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。2. occupy改为occupied 考点：解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy 与table是被动关系，故应用过去分词。3. young之前加上a。考点：解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。4.clearly改为clear。考点：解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。5. on改为by或at。考点：解析：被桌子挡住了，应用by或at。6Put改为putting。考点：解析：此处是分词短语作伴随状语。此时是主谓关系，故用putting。7. many改为much。考点：解析：此处是回忆，不可数名词，所以用many。8. 去掉to。考点：解析：accept之后不需要接to。9. So 改为But。考点：解析：根据前后关系，应表示转折关系。10me改为I。考点：解析：作主语，应用主格。
