1、写作能力提升练 Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.“没有规矩不成方圆”，每个学校、每个家庭都有自己的行为准则，规范人们该做什么，不该做什么。人教版九年级上 假如你叫李华。你的父母为了能让你更好地学习，制定了一些规定，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规定不是很赞同。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文表达你的观点和想法。要点提示：1.青少年应该和同龄人多交流；2.周末适当出去玩，放松一下；3.朋友可以相互鼓励努力学习，共同进步；4.我认为这个规定应该适当修改。【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。【
2、遣词造句】就结构图中的要点写出句子。1.为了让我更好地学习，我的父母给我制定了一些规定。In order to let me study better,_.2.他们不让我周末外出和朋友一起玩。They dont allow me _.my parents make somerules for meto go out to play with my friendson weekends3.青少年应该和同龄人多交流。Teenagers should_.4.适当出去玩能让我感到放松。Going out to play for a proper time can_.communicate more w
3、ith their peersmake me feelrelaxed5.朋友可以相互鼓励努力学习，共同进步。Friends can_.6.如果我被允许这样做的话，我就能在学习中做得更好。If Im allowed to do so,_.encourage each other to study hard andmake progress togetherI can do even better in mystudies【巧妙衔接】：利用连词和副词，使句子意思连贯。在文章中由对规定的介绍过渡到我对此规定的看法时，用到however，可使过渡自然。在陈述观点时也可用and,also,moreove
4、r（而且，此外）,in addition（除此之外；另外）等起承上启下的作用。佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。1.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.（只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。）2.No rules,no standards.（没有规矩不成方圆。）【连句成篇】In order to let me study better,_【范文欣赏】In order to let me study better,my parents make somerules for me.I dont agree with one of them,which
5、doesntallow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends,because they think its a waste of time.However,I think teenagers should be allowed to gooutwiththeirfriendsbecauseteenagersshouldcommunicate more with their peers.Moreover,going outto play at the weekend for a proper time can make me feelr
6、elaxed.I can also learn the advantages of my friends,andthis is helpful to my studies.In addition,friends canencourage each other to study hard and make progresstogether.As far as I am concerned,this rule should be changedproperly.If Im allowed to go out to play with my friends onweekends,I can do e
7、ven better in my studies.教育就是善意的干预。在我们成长过程中，时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真、理性地思考，并做出合理应对，这正是教育要达到的目的。请针对以上现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。内容包括：1.your opinion about this phenomeno(现象)；2.an experience you had/heard/saw；3.what you have learned form it。参考词汇：remind 提醒；criticize 批评；objecti
8、ve客观的；calm 冷静的；reasonable 理性的要求：词数不少于80。_As far as Im concerned,it is of great importance tostay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachersblame or criticize us,which is beneficial for our lifelongdevelopment.I still remember the day when I had an English class.Seeing Li Ming falling asleep,o
9、ur teacher,Miss Hu,wokehim up and reminded him to listen to her carefully.To my_surprise，Li Ming rushed out of the classroom withoutpermission.It was so impolite and rude to do so.Later,Italked with him and he realized that the teacher expectedto help him develop a good habit and that he wasnt socalm at that time.Therefore,he picked up his courage andsaid sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class.Its a good idea to keep calm and think about it for a_moment whenever being blamed or criticized.Sometimes asmall change of yourself may lead to a big difference toyour life.
