1、基础组Correction 1 限时：6分钟I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit for our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents on October 1, which we watched a flagraising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising slow, I sang the n
2、ational anthem to music, feeling extremely exciting. Then we go to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, thought of the old saying that “He who dont climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, but I really had a g
3、ood time.答案I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents on October 1, we watched flagraising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising ， I sang the national anthem to music, fe
4、eling extremely . Then we to some other famous tourist ， like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, of the old saying that “He who climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, I really had a good time.Correction 2 限时：7分钟点击观看解答视频 There is common phenomenon n
5、owadays which parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of greatly concern. Im strongly opposed of this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become very reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative idea. Fo
6、r another, overprotecting the children or giving out too much care is extremely bad for our development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and developing by themselves can they grow up to being independent and become truly successful.答案There is common ph
7、enomenon nowadays parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of concern. Im strongly opposed this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative . For another, overp
8、rotecting the children or giving too much care is extremely bad for development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and by themselves can they grow up to independent and become truly successful.Correction 3 限时：7分钟July 24th, ThursdaySunnyOn the way to the
9、classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both side of the road were lined with a plenty of trees, green and tall. When raise my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying free in the blue sky. Then I lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird, that could go wherever it wanted and did wh
10、atever it liked. Impossible like it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that he was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared in my face.答案July 24th, ThursdaySunnyOn the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery
11、 came into my sight. Both of the road were lined with plenty of trees, green and tall. When my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying in the blue sky. Then I lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird, could go wherever it wanted and whatever it liked. Impossible it was, I still felt very h
12、appy. How I was grateful that was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared my face.Correction 4 限时：6分钟My father was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats
13、 and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am g
14、rateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.答案My father was biology professor. When I young he was used to take me to the biology lab, I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through natu
15、re walks. He often took me a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and . He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very . I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from . He me develop my interest in all that
16、was alive and sometimes dead around me.Correction 5 限时：7分钟点击观看解答视频 Dear editor，I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on if mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, m
17、any a school dont allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is complete wrong.As we know it, the 21st century is a modern age where is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest tool to exchange information. Its such useful invention that it makes our life more co
18、nvenient. Therefore, if something urgent happened suddenly, we can call for help immediately. Whats more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music before we work hard all day.I hope the students can be allowed to using mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?Yours truly，Li
19、 Hua答案Dear editor，I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, many a school allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I
20、think it is wrong.As we know , the 21st century is a modern age is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest to exchange information. Its such useful invention that it makes our life more convenient. Therefore, if something urgent suddenly, we can call for help immediately. Whats
21、more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music we work hard all day.I hope the students can be allowed to mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?Yours truly，Li HuarCorrection 6 限时：7分钟Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal. As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy
22、approached to me. He was holding a bunch of pens and asks me to buy some. I told him I didnt need some. He explained they were very cheaply. I saw him going to others and no one bought his pens. My friend, that was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so she wouldnt bother us. I did give hi
23、m money by buying two of his pen. I explained my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth praised.答案Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal. As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy approached me. He was holding a bunch of pens and me
24、 to buy some. I told him I didnt need . He explained they were very . I saw him going to others no one bought his pens. My friend, was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so wouldnt bother us. I did give him money by buying two of his . I explained my friend that the boy was trying to help
25、 his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth .能力组Correction 1 限时：7分钟点击观看解答视频 This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had been saved for months. Too upset was I that I could hardly concentrate in what the teacher was saying. After class,
26、my head teacher called me out and asked if I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my pockets while I was walking. And fortunately, a young lady walked behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave them to him.How excited and how deep moved I was to g
27、et my MP3 player back! I want to be kind person like the lady.答案This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had saved for months. upset was I that I could hardly concentrate what the teacher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked I
28、had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my while I was walking. fortunately, a young lady 或 behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave to him.How excited and how moved I was to get my MP3 player back! I want to be kind person like the lady.Correction
29、 2 限时：7分钟During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, what ma
30、de me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck it with great determination. Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a success
31、fully experience.答案During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do meaningful instead of at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three . The job was hard and and seemed endless, made me so tired that I near
32、ly gave it up halfway. But I stuck it with great determination. Every day I off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a experience.Correction 3限时：6分钟Last term,
33、 I joined in a marathon being hosted by the city sports club. I was so good at run that I had great confidence at winning the match. I was just about to approach the finishing line while one of my competitors fell down and got injured. I could have ignored them and dashed to the end, and I stopped t
34、o help him. There was no doubt that the result was not good and people call me loser. Sometimes, it is kindness rather than achievements that are of more important. Though I was a loser in the match, I was winner in my life.答案Last term, I joined in a marathon being hosted by the city sports club. I
35、was so good at that I had great confidence winning the match. I was just about to approach the finishing line one of my competitors fell down and got injured. I could have ignored and dashed to the end, I stopped to help him. There was no doubt that the result was not good and people me loser. Somet
36、imes, it is kindness rather than achievements that of more . Though I was a loser in the match, I was winner in my life.Correction 4 限时：7分钟点击观看解答视频 I was very homesick when I was studying the UK in last year. To fight against homesickness, I make a decision to occupy me with various courses and soci
37、al activities. I was also active in making new friend. When I missed my family, that was a great comfort to have closely friends around, sharing my joys and sorrows. When I felt homesick, I would turn to my friends, which gave me lots of good advice or comfort. Besides, joined a few clubs kept me fr
38、om missing my family, which enriched my life experience at same time.答案I was very homesick when I was studying in the UK in last year. To fight against homesickness, I a decision to occupy with various courses and social activities. I was also active in making new . When I missed my family, was a gr
39、eat comfort to have friends around, sharing my joys and sorrows. When I felt homesick, I would turn to my friends, whic gave me lots of good advice comfort. Besides, a few clubs kept me from missing my family, which enriched my life experience at same time.Correction 5 限时：7分钟I dont think its a good
40、idea listen to music while doing other things. That is why listening to music might draw your attentions away from what you are doing. And sometimes it can put yourself into danger. If you listen when you are studying, which total concentration is needed, you will find the results out unsatisfying.
41、If you listen on the road, you may get aware of the potential dangers due to distraction. Whats worst, listening to music while riding a bike, you risk been knocked down and hurt as you cannot hear the warning sounds from cars. Therefore, I am strong against this practice.答案I dont think its a good i
42、dea listen to music while doing other things. That is listening to music might draw your away from what you are doing. And sometimes it can put yoursel into danger. If you listen when you are studying, total concentration is needed, you will find the results unsatisfying. If you listen on the road,
43、you may get of the potential dangers due to distraction. Whats ， listening to music while riding a bike, you risk knocked down and hurt as you cannot hear the warning sounds from cars. Therefore, I am against this practice.Correction 6 限时：7分钟Id like to tell you why I learn English. I often read Engl
44、ish aloud and try my best learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I had improved both my listening and speaking. I keep the diary in English every day but my writ
45、ten English is improving too. I also try to master necessary grammar. By this means, I can express myself in English correct. Thats the way on which I have been learning English. I hope it will be of useful to you.答案Id like to tell you I learn English. I often read English aloud and try my best lear
46、n something important by ， which helps me remember it easily and form the habit of thinking in English. I listen a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I improved both my listening and speaking. I keep diary in English every day my written English is improving too. I also try to master
47、necessary grammar. By this means, I can express myself in English . Thats the way which I have been learning English. I hope it will be / to you.强化组Correction 1 限时：7分钟Id like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.First, it was important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to l
48、earn from the teacher and practicing with your fellow students. Then, it also help to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible. It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides, it is a good idea l
49、earn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easy. You can also make more Chinese friends, they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.答案Id like to give you some on how to learn Chinese well
50、.First, it important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and with your fellow students. Then, it also to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. It will make you familiar Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even befo
51、re you notice it!Besides, it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more . You can also make more Chinese friends, will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to speak Chinese as as possible.Correction 2 限时：7分钟Tryin
52、g to come to a decision complete on your own can be risky. Some decisions are so important that they shouldnt made without talking to others first. There have several advantages if you consult the persons you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things
53、you may have been overlooked. For another, friends may stop you from make big mistakes.When consulting others about importance decisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respected enough to trust his or her judgment. The second thing to con
54、sider is how to do if you disagree with this person. Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is the best option. In a word, making any big decision alone can lead in problems. Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea.答案Trying to come to a decision on your own can
55、be risky. Some decisions are so important that they shouldnt made without talking to others first. There several advantages if you consult the persons you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have overlooked. For another, friends may stop
56、 you from big mistakes.When consulting others about decisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you enough to trust his or her judgment. The second thing to consider is to do if you disagree with this person. Maybe turning to a third or fourth p
57、erson for help is the best option. In a word, making any big decision alone can lead problems. Talking to friends or family members first always a good idea.Correction 3 限时：7分钟It is three years now since I graduate from Changchun Foreign Languages School. Last Sunday, the class that I was in held a
58、gettogether, which took us a long time to prepare. It was indeed not easy to get touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. I
59、t was a pity which some of our classmates were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies. And they either called back or sent greeting card from different places.答案It is three years now since I from Changchun Foreign Languages School. Last Sunday, the class that I was in held a gett
60、ogether, which took us a long time to prepare. It was indeed not easy to get touch with everybody and set a time for all of us. We all enjoyed precious day greatly, the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people were familiar with. It was a pity some of our clas
61、smates were not present as they had gone abroad for further studies. they either called back or sent greeting from different places.Correction 4 限时：7分钟点击观看解答视频 Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which causes serious damage. It makes us aware
62、of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.In this case, we should take effective measure which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just beca
63、use of we are too careless. Secondly, you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying.As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is very important
64、 that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound.答案Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which serious damage. It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come in our daily life.In this case, we should take ef
65、fective which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just because we are too careless. Secondly, should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conf
66、licts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings our students can be buried in studying.As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is important that we all should try our best to make on campus safe and sound.Correction 5 限时：7分钟My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who de
67、voted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at home until deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldnt work effectively. In Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father
68、came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in th
69、e countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.答案My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devote herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several . In the evening, she continued to study at home until deepl into the night. She was to sleepy and tired that
70、 she couldnt work effectively. Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt in the open air. On
71、the Monday, Mary was energetic active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.Correction 6 限时：8分钟点击观看解答视频 I still remember why I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates played tab
72、le tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I wanted to play just as good. Later on, I often watch them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing hardly until I became too confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of term, I became one of the best players in my cl
73、ass. I am really proud for the experience. It helps me realize that I can fulfill our potential but achieve our goals through hard work.答案I still remember I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they w
74、ere, I wanted to play just as . Later on, I often them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing hardl until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of term, I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud the experience. It helps me realize that can fulfill our potential achieve our goals through hard work.
