1、 广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（6）及答案 短文改错文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental p
2、rotection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky bird recovered soon. When it was time for the bi
3、rd to fly away, they felt pity but were very delightful. I think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.【参考答案】4.1. was 改为 were; 2. catch 改为 caught; 3. out
4、改为 up;4. Think 改为 Thinking5. to 去掉 6. but 改为and 7. delightful 改为delighted8. him 改为 them 9. respects 改为 respect 10. which 前加in；或把which 改成that；或把which 去掉短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出增加的词;删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉;修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一
5、处起）不计分。I went to the wildlife park together with parents last Sunday. There were lots of visitors who standing before the ticket window. We waited long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps th
6、rough the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, but I had to walk home covering as much as 5 kilometers.【参考答案】5.I went to the wildlife park together
7、 withparents last Sunday. There were lots of visitors who my 或其后加were standing before the ticket window. We waitedlong time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger aMountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my eager frighteningsteps through the crowd
8、. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for from lookingthem, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I Wandering Worsehad no money, but I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometers. so短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修
9、改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Great changes have been taken place in my villageTen years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced
10、 much wasteAs the result, the lake was serious pollutedTo the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dustBetter still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soilNow poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildingsThe sandy fie
11、ld that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit treesOn the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing【参考答案】6.Great changes have been taken place in my villageTen years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much wasteAs t
12、he result, the lake was serious lay a seriouslypollutedTo the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dustBetter still, a brickyard on which Worsethe southwest side of the lake used up a great dealgood soilNow poor house have been of houses replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall bu
13、ildingsThe sandy field that the villagersused to ploughing has been covered with fruit treesOn the lake the villagers often spend his plough theirspare time boating and fishing短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线
14、上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 66. the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 67. FestivalMy grandma was the best cooker in the world 68. but could make the most deliciou
15、s dishesOne time, I just 69. couldnt wait for the Spring Festival dinnerAs I was70. about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 71. the kitchen looking at meShake her head, she said, It 72. isnt a good time to do that, dear At once I apologize73. and controlled me at my best till the din
16、ner startedYou 74. know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month 75. 参考答案66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook 69.but改为and 70. 71.about后加to 72.Shake改为Shaking 73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months【重庆南开中学】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（
17、）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Bob,I am pleasant to learn that youre coming to Beijing76 to study Chinese. Ive got some informations about foreigners 77 learning Chinese. Here Id
18、 like to recommend you famous 78 language school-Elite Language School.It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy 79 your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till 80 March 19th . It is given in No. 1 Lecture Hall but its intended 81 for beginners like you. Besides
19、, the tuition is reasonable. It cost 82 only 2,000 RMB. I think it suits you and you will enjoy them. 83 If you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing84 www. Elite.org. The more you will know, the more eager you will 85 be to come.Hope to see you in Beijing soon.Yours,Li Hua短文改错-漏词漏词
20、考查主要集中在：名词前漏冠词；不及物动词后漏掉相应的介词。不定式前少了不该省的to；分句与分句之间往往漏掉相应的连词；句子中助动词、情态动词的遗漏。复合句中关系词、连接词的遗漏；以及句子中替代词的遗漏等。1.One day, the school held party, whereI was invited to talk about Tianjin. (08天津卷)析：初次提到的可数名词单数前面要加不定冠词，因此要在party前加不定冠词a。2.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything
21、（09浙江卷）析：在it is/was possible to do sth结构中，动词不定式符合不能省略，因此要在give前加to。三、多词多词考查主要集中在介词、副词、连接词、冠词、不定式符号to、代词、助动词等。这些词大都为虚词，在句子中的作用显得不大，但极易引起误用，是学生语言运用中最常犯的错误。1.The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket.(09全国卷I)析：句子的意思为 “市场把位置让给了一个超市”。这里并不表示被动意义，要将be
22、en去掉。2. Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday.（09全国卷II）析：return to的意思为返回到某地，而在句子中的意思为归还某物，不能加to，要将to去掉。（一）A few days ago, Miss Wang was going home by bike. While he was76. riding in the street, she saw the man with a knife in his hand and his77. face covering with a pie
23、ce of cloth running towards her. The man78. took her handbag out of the basket of her bike and ran away before79. she could do anything. There was no one she could turn for help at80. that time, for it was very late at night. Lucky, she had her mobile81. phone at hand. Immediately when she took it o
24、ut and phoned the82. police. She told them what the man was like and in which directions83. he had run. The police came very quickly and catch the robber. Miss84. Wang got her handbag back and felt very grateful for the police had85. done for her.参考答案（一）76he she 77. 第二个the a 78. covering covered 79. 80. turn to 81. Lucky luckily 82. 去掉when 83. directions direction 84. catch caught 85. for what
